When You Came

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During that season I was living,
But for no reason.
In the life there wasn't any smile,
And my feet always stopped at many whiles.
I was dead,
But no one covered my body.
For me,
I buried myself already.
Suddenly in the graveyard, there came an angel,
Who proved himself to be true,
So, I am actually living,
Since the day I got you.

Comments

  1. NehaJuly 21, 2011 at 11:59 PM

    Beautiful.....

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  2. smiling soulJuly 22, 2011 at 12:20 AM

    wow! rebirth nice concept!!

    great thought...

    keep writing & smiling always! saru..

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  3. Blasphemous AestheteJuly 22, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    Life starts to find more meaning and beauty with that certain someone ain't it. Angel, love.

    Nice read.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  4. magiceyeJuly 22, 2011 at 12:40 AM

    rebirth is beautiful!

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  5. Vinay Leo R.July 22, 2011 at 1:18 AM

    Quite evoking! Love does seem to get reborn when we suddenly get it after seeming dead for a long time! Life gets a new lease!

    Good to have found your poem through the Indivine. Thanks!

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  6. Jidhu JoseJuly 22, 2011 at 1:48 AM

    wow, each line tells the quality of ur writing.

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  7. J'DJuly 22, 2011 at 2:24 AM

    Whow, really awesome creation... :)

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  8. Santosh BangarJuly 22, 2011 at 2:27 AM

    beautifully described the other life

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  9. SomsiJuly 22, 2011 at 3:16 AM

    Thanks for sharing information. your post is brilliant..

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  10. Nirvaan BaidJuly 22, 2011 at 3:25 AM

    Bliss!

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  11. Quirky WritesJuly 22, 2011 at 3:37 AM

    wow..... nice poem......

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  12. Thousif RazaJuly 22, 2011 at 4:45 AM

    wow.. i gotta say.. there are so many hidden msg's in between these lines... i love the way the poem starts so softly, then rising like huge wave.. it ends on a happy note... love it... Its very strong... love it...

    Take care and keep writing.........

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  13. Red HandedJuly 22, 2011 at 6:40 AM

    That was exceptionally brilliant..
    Woah!

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  14. Subhrashis AdhikariJuly 22, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    wow...beautiful...

    lucky to have an angel...lucky to b living...

    many waste their entire life in that graveyard waiting for that angel....

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  15. संजय भास्‍कर July 22, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    its.....beautiful...

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  16. AnonymousJuly 22, 2011 at 11:38 AM

    Beautifully expressed...
    If borrow hindi words of Guylzar Saab...

    "Jeene kee tumse vajah mil gayee hai
    abdee bevajah zindagi ja rahee thee"

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  17. Saru SinghalJuly 22, 2011 at 1:02 PM

    @Neha- Thanks Neha:)

    @sowmya- Thanks for liking the concept....

    @Blasphemous Aesthete- Very true, thanks!

    @magiceye- It is indeed very beautiful.:)

    @Leo- Love gives newer meaning to life. Thanks and thanks again for visiting which helped me in finding your awesome work.

    @Jidhu Jose- Thanks Jidhu:)

    @Jay- Thanks Jay, Btw I love the new look of your blog.

    @Santosh Bangar- Thank You:)

    @Somsi- :) Thanks Dear...

    @Nirvaan- Blissful :)

    @Sneha Sunny- Thank you sneha

    @Thousif Raza- I love the way you analyse my poems. Thanks:)

    @Red Handed- I am delighted...

    @SUB- True, I am lucky to have my angel and wish everyone find theirs too. Thanks.

    @संजय भास्कर- Thank you Sir...

    @swaarth- Tum aa gaye ho, noor aa gaya hai... Thanks:)

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  18. swatiJuly 23, 2011 at 12:20 AM

    Wow.. Very beautiful creation:)

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  19. MegJuly 23, 2011 at 2:28 AM

    Such beautiful poetry! Thanks for the follow--I really enjoy reading your work!

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  20. Sathish KumarJuly 23, 2011 at 3:20 AM

    Good work, Saru! Keep penning down your thoughts!

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  21. VyankateshJuly 23, 2011 at 3:33 AM

    Full of love!!

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  22. Bhargav BhattJuly 23, 2011 at 4:37 AM

    those moments and the life took u turn... salute those moments...

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  23. Hariharan ValadyJuly 23, 2011 at 5:08 AM

    Beatiful...touches the heart.

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  24. AnonymousJuly 23, 2011 at 6:41 AM

    loved it!

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  25. Girl with a silver penJuly 23, 2011 at 7:03 AM

    sweet....beautiful....a whole story in a few words....and not one word a waste!

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  26. We CognizeJuly 23, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    yes, people actually "live" after they fall in love...

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  27. Saru SinghalJuly 23, 2011 at 10:11 PM

    @swati- Thanks Swati:)

    @msmcelhaney- Thanks a lot Dear and Welcome Here!

    @Sathish Kumar- Thanks Sathish...:)

    @Vyankatesh- It is indeed full of love, thanks for appreciating.

    @Bhargav- Most treasured moments of life...

    @Hariharan Valady- Thank you Sir.

    @Chintan- Thanks Dear:)

    @Girl with a silver pen- Love your comment, thanks:)

    @We Cognize- Very true:)

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  28. A FineappleJuly 24, 2011 at 1:52 AM

    its so touching.. :)
    loved it as usual.. :)

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  29. Being_ACJuly 24, 2011 at 2:21 AM

    Left a mark of honour!

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  30. AnonymousJuly 24, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    This is lovely!

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  31. Dimple MaheshwariJuly 24, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    beautiful!!!

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  32. Saru SinghalJuly 24, 2011 at 12:36 PM

    @Ms. Holla- Thanks Dear:)

    @Being_AC- :) Thank you!

    @Sudeshna Das- Thanks Sudeshna...

    @Dimple Maheshwari- Thanks Dimple, Welcome here:)

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  33. Unseen World..!!!July 24, 2011 at 2:33 PM

    Hey saru.. nice poems dad one and this one.. just one query hope you not mind...!! I think poem is expression and expressed by sensible and emotional person.. so just need to ask are these both poems relates personnely.. as dad one is obviously personnel experience for most of the girl child..

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  34. Santosh BangarJuly 24, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    right people will live with the support of someone
    thanks for permoting u are visiting my blog also .keep it up

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  35. Saru SinghalJuly 24, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    @Unseen World...!!!- Some of my poems are personal experiences like Who Am I, Dad? and Few Steps... but most of them I write on the basis of stories I hear. Thanks for liking them. This one I wrote when I was in 11th standard, can't recall what inspired me.

    @Santosh Bangar- Thanks:)

    @Ritchie- Welcome Here:)

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  36. An Apel a DayJuly 24, 2011 at 10:47 PM

    I loved reading this. Thank you!

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  37. Saru SinghalJuly 25, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    @alissa4illustration- Thanks Dear:)

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  38. Spiritual SherpaJuly 25, 2011 at 12:34 PM

    I dont know how you do it Saru..but you manage to capture so many emotions so beautifully in words...:)

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  39. Saru SinghalJuly 25, 2011 at 12:54 PM

    @India's no.1 blog- Thanks and I can say that for you as well. How can you have a brilliant sense of humor! Love the minister's photo...

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  40. iamnasraJuly 25, 2011 at 2:35 PM

    Wow your blog is so popular mashallah..Loved stoping here and being within your words

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  41. AngelJuly 26, 2011 at 2:17 AM

    Wow how beautiful ! am happy you found your angel ! take care of him seldom true angels around..

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  42. Some solved riddlesJuly 26, 2011 at 2:46 AM

    wow beautifully expressed rebirth
    great......

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  43. ojaJuly 26, 2011 at 3:13 AM

    WooooW...
    A nice rebirth..
    :)

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  44. Saru SinghalJuly 26, 2011 at 12:06 PM

    @iamnasra- Thanks Dear, I wish my blog is as popular as yours...:)

    @Angel- Thanks :)

    @Ankit Malhotra- Thanks Ankit...

    @oja- Thank you:)

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  45. Rakesh KumarJuly 27, 2011 at 10:46 PM

    Lovely words,lovely thoughts.
    You really play magic with simple words.
    Many many thanks.

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  46. Saru SinghalJuly 28, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    @Rakesh Kumar- Thank You Sir :)

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  47. An Apel a DayAugust 1, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    I have always thought about death this way, when someone is born, someone is passing. Maybe they met each other along the way. It's the circle of life.

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  48. Saru SinghalAugust 2, 2011 at 1:39 PM

    @alissa4illustration- True...I hope you like it Dear...

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  49. ManojAugust 2, 2011 at 11:28 PM

    Very simple and too short you described about life. Thanks for sharing.

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  50. Saru SinghalAugust 3, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    @Manoj- Thanks you so much...

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  51. sushAugust 5, 2011 at 2:40 AM

    beautiful thoughts. very nice composition.

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  52. Saru SinghalAugust 8, 2011 at 4:07 PM

    @sush- Thanks :)

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  53. Aakash KokzAugust 23, 2011 at 7:54 AM

    Beautiful once again ... Keep up the good work!

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  54. Saru SinghalAugust 23, 2011 at 1:43 PM

    @Aakash Kokz- Thanks for the inspiration :)

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  55. ManaliSeptember 28, 2011 at 11:15 AM

    At 15, you wrote this, am simply amazed!

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  56. Saru SinghalSeptember 28, 2011 at 3:45 PM

    @Manali- Even, I was amazed when I wrote it...:)

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