Few Steps...

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The rain was your hands, covering my body
Wind your fragrance which has touched me already
So those few steps between us conveyed no meaning
As we stood in front of each other
When it was raining…
Each drop of rain was your love for me
The distance kept us bonded but feelings were free
You told me everything
Although we were apart
I was feeling your warmth in my heart
Then those few steps between us couldn’t stop us from doing
What we wanted to do
And was proved that
You love me and
I love you…
After few years when we will search memories down the lane
I will lean on your shoulder and complain
Give me my days back and my smile
Then after walking for so many miles
Those few steps will be the only reason to tell you
That I always missed you in the rainy season...

Location: Quincy, MA, USA

Comments

  1. PramodJune 29, 2011 at 10:34 PM

    Very expressive and touchy writeup.

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  2. Saru SinghalJune 30, 2011 at 10:03 AM

    Thanks for the appreciation!

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  3. Veee.June 30, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    Beautifully written! :)

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  4. Saru SinghalJuly 1, 2011 at 2:20 PM

    No one can judge anything relating to rain better than a mumbaikar!

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  5. magiceyeJuly 5, 2011 at 8:59 PM

    monsoons bring on the romance!

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  6. Saru SinghalJuly 8, 2011 at 1:51 PM

    @Magiceye- True, it does. Love your post of evening clouds.

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  7. Prasanth IranikulamJuly 21, 2011 at 2:51 AM

    Well written !
    One day I may quote your lines in my pictures!
    keep in touch !
    (Really I got several ideas to photograph the love,rain...thanks!)

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  8. Saru SinghalJuly 21, 2011 at 10:13 AM

    @Prasanth Iranikulam- Thanks a lot! Waiting to see your pictures, which by the way are awesome. I loved the picture of your village...

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  9. AnonymousJuly 22, 2011 at 11:34 AM

    Romantic!
    and asks for visualization.

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  10. Saru SinghalJuly 22, 2011 at 12:45 PM

    @swaarth- Rain is synonymous with romance, isn't it! Thanks Dear...

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  11. Jidhu JoseJuly 26, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Wow Saru, so romantic
    love the lines

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  12. Saru SinghalJuly 27, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    @Jidhu- Thanks Dear...

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  13. Sunil PadiyarJuly 28, 2011 at 6:02 AM

    Seems like you were in a romantic mood while writing this.. :) Nice one.. And yup! rains have something spl in it!!!
    *lost in thoughts* :P

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  14. Saru SinghalJuly 28, 2011 at 10:31 AM

    @Sunil Padiyar- Yeah, I was...Thanks for admiring it :)

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  15. ShaifaliJuly 31, 2011 at 8:23 AM

    Another set of lovely words depicting your emotions so well..
    enjoyed reading it.

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  16. Saru SinghalAugust 1, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    @Shaifali- Thanks again Shaifali:)

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  17. shvetilakAugust 4, 2011 at 3:18 AM

    It's awesome! Inspired me to write something...thank u :)

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  18. Saru SinghalAugust 4, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    @shveta- I will be looking forward to read it.:)

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  19. Bhargav BhattAugust 11, 2011 at 2:56 AM

    wow... thrilling, loveable,.. first two line says ALLLLLLLL,... u r so romantic :)

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  20. Saru SinghalAugust 11, 2011 at 3:28 PM

    @Bhargav- Thanks a lot...

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  21. UnknownSeptember 18, 2011 at 12:08 AM

    Expressive, though I was expecting a real touching ending, which I did not feel that much. But that does not take away the credit from the beautiful prose.

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  22. Spiritual SherpaSeptember 18, 2011 at 2:40 AM

    Another great one from you Saru :)) so thoughtful chosen words blended in pure bliss with a dash of foreseeable nostalgia :) great one...

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  23. Saru SinghalSeptember 18, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    @Animesh Ganguly- You're right Animesh, I wrote this one in my teens and I think I was not that mature in my writings that time. Thanks for liking it...

    @India's no.1 blog- Thanks Dear, your appreciation lifts my spirit:)

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