A Love Story

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He met her, when the wind was cold.
They loved each other, as he told.
She was fair, with black-brown eyes.
Life is a poor affair without love, he then realized.
They lived in a beautiful world with happiness surround,
He kissed her every moment when she was around.
So, He was the luckiest man till date;
with a fate line anyone would hate.
No, He said... with eyes frozen,
You can call it life without life and my heart is broken.
She betrayed me on fine sunny day, when I was on my way.
She was smiling looking up in the sun,
She died, when she was young.
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Location: Quincy, MA, USA

Comments

  1. ArvindJune 15, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    Very nice love story

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  2. Saru SinghalJune 15, 2011 at 7:45 PM

    Thanks, Arvind! There are many more to come. Keep visiting...

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  3. J'DJune 19, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    Short yet Heart Touching Love Story.. :) Keep It Up..

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  4. Saru SinghalJune 23, 2011 at 9:27 AM

    Thanks Jay! Hope could pen down few more love stories, this time would try and write lengthy ones.
    Keep Visiting...

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  5. ArtiJuly 1, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    Gave me goosebumps in the end... Very nice Saru :)

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  6. Saru SinghalJuly 1, 2011 at 2:25 PM

    Thanks Arti, means a lot coming from a person like you. :)

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  7. RachitJuly 7, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    OOOO the love was so intense that more then she I died the day God took her. :(

    Weakest Link:)

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  8. UnknownJuly 8, 2011 at 6:28 AM

    Oh! This is nice... It cud feel it though I never enjoy poems!!! Well written... :)

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  9. BlackBirdJuly 8, 2011 at 11:50 AM

    nice poems.....as poems r always written with feeling

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  10. Saru SinghalJuly 8, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    @Rachit- Few can sense the intensity of love. I appreciate that you do.

    @NNNiiiXXX & @Chinmay BlackBird- Poems are so beautiful, they tell a story in short format. I am glad you like this one.

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  11. Dhiraj ThakurJuly 11, 2011 at 1:28 AM

    Very touching story....keep writing...your poems are really gud. Why dont you publish it??

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  12. Saru SinghalJuly 11, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    @Dhiraj Thankur- Thanks, publishing is not that easy, Editors cut half of your work. :(

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  13. AnonymousJuly 12, 2011 at 1:19 AM

    An intense post. Very well written.

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  14. Saru SinghalJuly 12, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    @jojofeelings- Thanks.

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  15. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2011 at 8:53 AM

    Short Simple Yet Superb

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  16. Saru SinghalSeptember 21, 2011 at 2:53 PM

    @devesh- Thanks :)

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  17. HarshaOctober 25, 2011 at 5:06 AM

    Sad, but intensely beautiful. :):) I loved this line 'with a fate line anyone would hate' :)

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  18. Saru SinghalOctober 28, 2011 at 12:57 PM

    @Harsha- Believe me, I can never thank you enough:)

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  19. Found In FolsomMay 28, 2012 at 7:02 PM

    Why did you end it abruptly? hmm, I think I felt that way!!

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    1. Saru SinghalMay 28, 2012 at 10:39 PM

      You are right. When I wrote this poem, I experienced that life can take abrupt turns just like that. Maybe, that is reflected in this poem.

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  20. Anita SabatJuly 9, 2015 at 2:44 PM

    We never know what'll happen.
    Wishing love for everyone!
    Nice poem of your school-days, Saru :)

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  21. AnonymousJuly 10, 2015 at 4:39 AM

    Beautifully woven love story expressing flow of sentiments called love:)

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