Don't Miss Him

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Don't sit alone and cry,

He is with you just realize.

He is the wind kissing your hair,

He is the moon who is shinning up there.

He is the smile on your face,

In your solitude whom you embrace.

Don't ever miss him, not even for a while,

You are breathing his love every time. 

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Comments

  1. Jidhu JoseJuly 27, 2011 at 12:35 AM

    wow nice one yaar
    U write nice romantic poems. Great

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  2. J'DJuly 27, 2011 at 1:31 AM

    Whowww... This poem is just awesome... Very romantic and full of love... Awesome, Saru.. someday i would like to write a duet poem with you...

    Jay
    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  3. induravisinghjJuly 27, 2011 at 1:55 AM

    WOOOOOOOOOOOwwwwwwww.................
    gr8 lines .Saru i just love the way u present your self....
    Amazing...Awesome......

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  4. Sunil PadiyarJuly 27, 2011 at 2:06 AM

    Beautiful.. Loved it.. :)

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  5. devanginiJuly 27, 2011 at 2:19 AM

    Hey nice poetry...there is truly beauty in simplicity!! :) nice blog...do check out mine too :)

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  6. Quirky WritesJuly 27, 2011 at 2:51 AM

    Whoa.... beautiful... Full of love!!

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  7. SuKupedia ™ :) :)July 27, 2011 at 3:38 AM

    so consoling.. was missing my brother a lot and these words of yours really helped :) :)

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  8. ojaJuly 27, 2011 at 4:12 AM

    These words are sooo nice to imagine..and even very nice too feel ...
    congrates..:)

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  9. Mishilicious MishiJuly 27, 2011 at 4:38 AM

    that was touching!

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  10. KPJuly 27, 2011 at 4:39 AM

    Very nice and full of life.. loved the poem.. :)

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  11. Blasphemous AestheteJuly 27, 2011 at 4:50 AM

    It reminds me of a certain poem, specially due to the rhyming used.

    Do not stand at my grave and weep
    I am not there. I do not sleep.
    I am a thousand winds that blow.
    I am the diamond glints on snow.
    I am the sunlight on ripened grain.
    I am the gentle autumn rain.
    When you awaken in the morning's hush
    I am the swift uplifting rush.
    Of quiet birds in circled flight.
    I am the soft stars that shine at night.
    Do not stand at my grave and cry;
    I am not there. I did not die.

    I don't remember the poet though, poetess to be correct.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  12. RachitJuly 27, 2011 at 6:24 AM

    Don't miss him and ponder the days live with him :)

    Weakest LINK

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  13. NehaJuly 27, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    So romantic...

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  14. VaisakhiJuly 27, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    touchin write...loved the rhymin scheme...:)...awesome post

    @BA-the poetess is mary elizabeth frye....:)

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  15. Saru SinghalJuly 27, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    @Jidhu Jose- Thanks Jidhu and I hope you like 'Few Steps' as well.

    @Jay- Thanks Jay and I love the idea of penning down a duet. :)

    @induravisinghj- Thanks Indu, you know I read your blog a lot and It inspires me to write better. Read Better, Write Better!:)

    @Sunil Padiyar- Thanks Sunil:)

    @devangini- Thanks:)

    @Sneha Sunny- Thanks Sneha.

    @Sunita - The Me :) :)- I miss my brother all the time. Thanks ...

    @oja- True, these words are nice to feel. Thanks.

    @Mishi- Thanks Mishi:)

    @KP- Thanks Dear!

    @Blasphemous Aesthete- Yeah, you are right, both have same rhyming scheme and sound so similar. Only thoughts are different. Lovely poem...

    @Rachit- :)

    @Neha- :) Thanks...

    @vaisakhi- Thanks Dear and thanks again for telling us the name of the poetess. :)

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  16. Thousif RazaJuly 27, 2011 at 12:34 PM

    that is as beautiful as one can write about love... its so sweet, resonates my feelings towards my girlfriend :)... beautiful:)

    Take care and keep writing............

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  17. UnknownJuly 27, 2011 at 12:35 PM

    Saru, I don't know how to really put across my message to you, but your writes really are "soulful"

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  18. swatiJuly 27, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    Very beautifully said Saru.. Love to read yourpoetry
    Keep writing...

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  19. magiceyeJuly 27, 2011 at 9:26 PM

    so utterly romantic... lovely!

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  20. Rakesh KumarJuly 27, 2011 at 10:42 PM

    Don't ever miss him, not even for a while,
    You are breathing his love every time.

    Yes, yes it's very true.
    You have written a beautiful poem expressing
    excellent thoughts.
    Thanks for the nice presentation.

    You are most welcome on my blog.

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  21. डॉ. मोनिका शर्मा July 27, 2011 at 11:06 PM

    Very sweet poem

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  22. VertuJuly 28, 2011 at 12:37 AM

    mmmm...deep deep thoughts...anyone who reads this surely think of it's love. :)

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  24. Defiant PrincessJuly 28, 2011 at 5:53 AM

    "You are breathing his love every time."
    wow.
    Indeed I wouldn't miss him if his immense love is in every breath of mine!

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  25. UnknownJuly 28, 2011 at 6:12 AM

    Short, sweet and heart warming :)

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  26. Nasnin NasserJuly 28, 2011 at 7:55 AM

    nice lines...simple but touching!!

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  27. Saru SinghalJuly 28, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    @Thousif Raza- Thanks Thousif and happy to know how much you appreciate and care for your girl friend.

    @Animesh Ganguly- Thanks Animesh:) Your words are a source of encouragement.

    @swati- Thanks Swati :)

    @magiceye- Thanks Deepak Sir.

    @Rakesh Kumar- Thanks Sir for such kind words.

    @डॉ॰ मोनिका शर्मा- Thanks Monica:)

    @vertu- Thank you so much Vertika:)

    @Bhavna- Thanks Bhavna and you know I can't thank you enough. I am honored.

    @Defiant Princess- You should never miss him:) Thanks Dear.

    @Risha Kalra- Thanks Risha:)

    @Nasnin Nasser- Thank you Dear.

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  28. Chapters From My LifeJuly 28, 2011 at 10:40 AM

    Your poetry is amazing.. love your simple and genius combination

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  29. The Angry ScotJuly 28, 2011 at 12:34 PM

    Absolutly awsome poem i really enoyed it and i ain't one for poetry normally, but this was really nice to read.

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  30. संजय भास्‍कर July 28, 2011 at 1:35 PM

    romantic... lovely ....touching!

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  31. HarshaJuly 28, 2011 at 4:23 PM

    Again, a lovely poem. I usually don't like to read poems. But I simply love your lines. Short, crisp and beautifully expressive. I even loved your last poem on dad!

    Regards!

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  32. Realms of fantasy...July 28, 2011 at 4:55 PM

    so very touching... :)

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  33. An Apel a DayJuly 28, 2011 at 9:52 PM

    This is very sweet! It makes me think of all the people I have once lost.

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  34. Spiritual SherpaJuly 29, 2011 at 12:11 AM

    This is sheer romance..another brilliant piece..am turning into a fan...:)

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  35. amrendra "amar"July 29, 2011 at 4:05 AM

    Beautiful..very sweet**** Loved it..

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  36. AlcinaJuly 29, 2011 at 6:55 AM

    Words coated with so much hope are sure to make people happy who read them..A beautiful perspective and nicely woven poem!

    Alcina

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  37. kanu.....July 29, 2011 at 7:18 AM

    its very nice

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  38. A FineappleJuly 29, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    WOW.. again.. :) :) :)

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  39. Saru SinghalJuly 29, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    @Farila- Thank you so much...

    @Ben- Thanks Ben.

    @संजय भास्कर- Thanks Sanjay:)

    @Harsha- Thanks Harsha and welcome here:)

    @Realms of fantasy- I am glad you like it...

    @alissa4illustration- Thanks Dear and sorry for your loss. Losing someone is very painful.

    @India's no.1 blog- Thanks:) You are also kindling romance between Mayawati and Ramdev...lol

    @amrendra "amar"- Thank you Amar and welcome here:)

    @Alcina- Thanks for such a beautiful comment:)

    @kanu- :) Thanks Dear!

    @Ms. Holla- Thanks Arpita...

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  40. वीना श्रीवास्तवJuly 29, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    बहुत सुंदर....

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  41. AnonymousJuly 29, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    So true...you write very well saru <3

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  42. Saru SinghalJuly 29, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    @वीना- Thanks and welcome here:)

    @Chintan- Thanks Chintan :) :)

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  43. SatishJuly 31, 2011 at 1:37 AM

    Short and Sweet! :)

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  44. Poetic SoulJuly 31, 2011 at 10:21 PM

    You're gonna reduce me to tears

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  45. smiling soulAugust 1, 2011 at 6:13 AM

    simply superb!! wow i can say!

    :) keep smiling saru

    take care...

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  46. Saru SinghalAugust 1, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    @satish- Thanks Satish:)

    @Poetic Soul- I am so sorry for that...

    @sowmya- Thanks Sowmya:)

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  47. Namrata MahalingamAugust 2, 2011 at 12:34 AM

    Amazing poem! Love your writing! Keep going! :)

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  48. AngelAugust 2, 2011 at 1:41 AM

    A womans touch ,always missing someone ! Lovely poem.

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  49. Saru SinghalAugust 2, 2011 at 1:38 PM

    @Namrata Mahalingam- Thanks Namrata...:)

    @Angel- Thanks Angel...

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  50. shvetilakAugust 4, 2011 at 4:50 AM

    I just love the way you write...

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  51. Saru SinghalAugust 4, 2011 at 1:41 PM

    @shveta- Thanks a lot dear...:)

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  52. NairitaAugust 12, 2011 at 4:27 PM

    mirrors the feelings perfectly :)

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  53. NairitaAugust 12, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    www.thoughtsconnect.com is my blog....try to give interesting content each week...would love to get suggestions on the same.

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  54. Saru SinghalAugust 14, 2011 at 10:27 PM

    @Nairita- Thanks Dear and your blog is so good and I need some suggestions from your side...

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  55. HemantAugust 20, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    I am completely speechless and amazed......loved the last line..."You are breathing his love every time"

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  56. Saru SinghalAugust 22, 2011 at 1:05 PM

    @Hemant- I am on cloud 9 after reading all your comments, Thanks a ton!:)

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  57. Aakash KokzAugust 26, 2011 at 2:35 AM

    Heart touching, very deep thoughts ...

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  58. Saru SinghalAugust 27, 2011 at 11:01 AM

    @Aakash Kokz- Thanks Aakash...Joined your blog, it looks great:)

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  59. CynthiaAugust 27, 2011 at 11:52 PM

    Lovely, lyrical and true.

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  60. Saru SinghalAugust 29, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    @Cynthia- Thanks a lot :)

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  61. DeeshaniJuly 22, 2015 at 12:05 PM

    This is so beautiful. A must read for a person who is not with their loved ones. It'll definitely bring smile on their face :)

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 22, 2015 at 2:13 PM

      That's utterly sweet of you to say. Thanks Deeshani.

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  62. Ajay PaiJuly 22, 2015 at 1:06 PM

    Love the portrayal of the emotion. When someone you love is gone, this is what one can do to feel the presence felt. emotional poem.

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  63. payal agarwalJuly 22, 2015 at 11:48 PM

    Beautiful! :)

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  64. Dipanwita ChakrabortyJuly 23, 2015 at 1:11 AM

    So beautiful.You just want to fall in love all over again with someone who is not near.

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 23, 2015 at 10:20 AM

      That's a beautiful way of putting it. Thanks for reading, Dipanwita!

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