I Am Not Alone

By -

Last year blessed me,
He walked silently into my life.
It was Love,
That took me in its stride.
One evening we walked holding hands,
Then, I told him what I felt in heart.
He said we were one soul,
Who were living in parts.
To bring the parts together,
We fought with the world and tied the knot.
Being one soul,
Gave life a whole new spot.
Chirping birds, floating clouds,
Nature conspired for us.
Always swimming against the tide,
Life was in an adrenaline rush.
This year cursed me,
He walked silently out of my life.
It was Death,
That took him in its stride.      

Yesterday his soul was saying,
Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on.
He will stay and admire me,
Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn.

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Comments

  1. SkywalkerJuly 29, 2011 at 11:24 PM

    this is nice but one question why is that majority of your poems are on sad side of emotion??

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  2. Rakesh KumarJuly 29, 2011 at 11:58 PM

    It's your understanding about the philosophy of life that generates emotions.Your deep emotions are impressive and touching.

    Please, find time to visit my blog.

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  3. A FineappleJuly 30, 2011 at 12:51 AM

    He said we were one soul,
    Who were living in parts.

    loved these lines.. simply superb.. if u keep writing such awesome poems i'll run out of words synonymous to awesome, touching, excellent and brilliant to describe them.. :)

    I hope I can write poems lik these one day.. :):):)

    take care.. :)

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  4. Red HandedJuly 30, 2011 at 12:56 AM

    That was one nice poem..... Simple lines, not hard to understand..but felt it!

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  5. J'DJuly 30, 2011 at 1:54 AM

    Whow Saru thats a very heart touching poem... I'm Just Loving you Posts...

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  6. Jidhu JoseJuly 30, 2011 at 2:22 AM

    wow..u write very well.
    Congrats for the century followers

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  7. Ma. Sheila E. EscuroJuly 30, 2011 at 2:28 AM

    Hi Saru, :)
    I love this poem, its very emotional. Just curious, this poem does it really comes from true experience?

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  8. नीरज द्विवेदीJuly 30, 2011 at 2:35 AM

    Just Waow ..

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  9. Quirky WritesJuly 30, 2011 at 3:07 AM

    amazing.... loved it!! :-)

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  10. RachitJuly 30, 2011 at 4:17 AM

    life outward flow... unstoppable, unconquerable.

    Weakest LINK

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  11. Sujatha SathyaJuly 30, 2011 at 5:31 AM

    touching

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  12. Vinay Leo R.July 30, 2011 at 7:52 AM

    Sigh.. to find the other part of a soul and then lose to Death, it is quite saddening..

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  13. Mishilicious MishiJuly 30, 2011 at 8:36 AM

    aww that was beautiful!

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  14. DR. ANWER JAMALJuly 30, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    Nice post.

    http://pyarimaan.blogspot.com/

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  15. VertuJuly 30, 2011 at 10:10 AM

    Beautiful..I liked this line- "Chirping birds, floating clouds,
    Nature conspired for us"

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  16. Nasnin NasserJuly 30, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    It's so touching...:-)

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  17. xyzandmeJuly 30, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    Made me skip my heart beat at "It was Death"

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  18. AnandJuly 30, 2011 at 11:25 AM

    Very beautiful and touchy..

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  19. magiceyeJuly 30, 2011 at 11:56 AM

    poignant

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  20. KPJuly 30, 2011 at 12:03 PM

    Simply super! excellent one.. thouching :) liked it..

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  21. डॉ. मोनिका शर्मा July 30, 2011 at 1:33 PM

    Very Nice.... Excellent Creation

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  22. The Angry ScotJuly 30, 2011 at 3:11 PM

    Very nice indeed!

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  23. HarshaJuly 30, 2011 at 3:31 PM

    Touching lines. Beautifully written. But the end hurts!

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  24. UnknownJuly 30, 2011 at 4:25 PM

    "He said we were one soul,
    Who were living in parts" This was magnetic :)
    You pen down some of the most soulful poems Saru Di :)

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  25. SomsiJuly 30, 2011 at 8:49 PM

    such a wonderful blog. Keep up the good work.

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  26. Saru SinghalJuly 30, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    @Skywalker- I just pen down thoughts dear, I have only four sad poems. Please check love poems and hope you like those as well. Thanks.

    @Rakesh Kumar- Thanks Sir and I am following your blog.:)

    @Ms. Holla- Thanks Arpita and you write so beautifully, I wish I could write as refreshing as you write...:)

    @Red Handed- Thanks Dear.

    @Jay- Thanks Jay, your posts motivate me...You have a nice collection on your blog.

    @Jidhu Jose- Thanks Jidhu...:)

    @moonshaneisle- No Dear, Just came to my mind couple of days back. Thanks for liking it.

    @Neeraj Dwivedi- Thanks Neeraj and welcome here :)

    @Sneha Sunny- Thanks Sneha:)

    @mahendra srivastava- Thanks and Welcome here:) Hope you like my other posts as well.

    @Rachit- True and beyond this world...

    @Sujatha Sathya- Thanks Sujatha:)

    @Leo- It is but what's beautiful is to feel love when he is not around. Love transcends boundaries and even death can't take away this feeling from you.

    @Mishi- Thanks:)

    @DR. ANWER JAMAL- Thank you!

    @vertu- These are my favorite too...:)

    @Nasnin Nasser- Thanks Dear...

    @xyzandme- I hope you like it...:)

    @Anand- Thanks Anand

    @magiceye- Thanks Sir...:)

    @KP- Thanks a lot:)

    @डॉ॰ मोनिका शर्मा- Thanks Monica, means a lot coming from you...

    @Ben- Thanks Ben:)

    @Harsha- I know but thankfully it's just a poem...

    @Rishu- Thanks Sweetheart, I am glad you like it:)

    @Somsi- Thanks Dear:)

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  27. LHInsightsJuly 31, 2011 at 12:14 AM

    you really blend emotions well :) nice one :D

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  28. SuKupedia ™ :) :)July 31, 2011 at 1:44 AM

    a beautiful love story in such a few words :) :).. your ability to pen it down is wonderful ..luved reading it :) :)

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  29. Some solved riddlesJuly 31, 2011 at 3:13 AM

    awsum
    just keep it up.....
    very beautiful love story......

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  30. UnknownJuly 31, 2011 at 8:19 AM

    the whole love story some have it in parts some just one
    you write simply but beautiful expression

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  31. ShaifaliJuly 31, 2011 at 8:21 AM

    HI Saru...very beautiful. I can see you through your words. Keep writing..I am following you :)

    Cheers, Shaifali
    http://guptashaifali.blogspot.com

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  32. Deepa GopalJuly 31, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    Aww...Beautiful! Ur words are so soulful:)

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  33. ShilpiJuly 31, 2011 at 10:56 AM

    Saru , once again very beautiful touching words and thanks a ton for dropping by my blog and leaving your comments. I loved your idea of bursting wrapping bubbles to get ideas ...brought a smile to my face. I may not be able to reply to all your comments but i truly cherish them

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  34. An Apel a DayJuly 31, 2011 at 11:39 AM

    A very good poem. I think all poems are representations of what you are feeling at the moment. Super impacting!

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  35. Rajeev Ranjan Shahi July 31, 2011 at 12:40 PM

    while the reading this beautiful poem ,just i was part of your beautiful thoughts or i would like to give the word for it full heart of soul ,and lost para was very nice philosophy of the live . what i say for this beautiful creation and i am very admire of your beautiful brain , i am very thanks to you to provide as such beautiful poem .

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  36. Poetic SoulJuly 31, 2011 at 10:16 PM

    For a few days my internet was down, I remember thinking about your poetry one afternoon and I gotta say, I'm not disappointed

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  37. ArtiAugust 1, 2011 at 1:12 AM

    Soul stirring words, delve right deep into the heart! Beautiful :)

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  38. MiAugust 1, 2011 at 1:25 AM

    Wow, You've written it so beautifully..
    I hope it doesn't happen to anyone!

    Very well written, Saru.. Keep it up!

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  39. shashi purwarAugust 1, 2011 at 1:55 AM

    wow......... express so beautifully ........... love is soul of life .......... !

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  40. neelimaAugust 1, 2011 at 2:40 AM

    Saru... it is indeed one of the very good post and emotions... but very scary and breath taking to think and feel the loss of loved one... !!!!

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  41. jaynthbusiAugust 1, 2011 at 3:34 AM

    Awesome dude....! :)

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  42. AnonymousAugust 1, 2011 at 4:05 AM

    Simple yet powerful!

    "He said we were one soul,
    Who were living in parts."

    Gr8 Post! :)

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  43. devanginiAugust 1, 2011 at 4:49 AM

    Very nice...heartfelt love :) nice poetry

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  44. jugalAugust 1, 2011 at 9:28 AM

    niceeeeee

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  45. Saru SinghalAugust 1, 2011 at 10:44 AM

    @LHInsights- Thanks Prasant:)

    @Sunita - The Me :) :)- Thanks Dear...

    @Ankit Malhotra- Thanks Ankit...

    @अतुल प्रकाश त्रिवेदी- Thanks Sir :)

    @Shaifali- Thanks Shaifali :)

    @deepazartz- Thanks Deepa...

    @Shilpi- See how mind works, I have packed five times in the past two years. Thanks for dropping by:)

    @alissa4illustration- Thanks Dear:)

    @rajeev ranjan shahi- Thank you so much:)

    @Poetic Soul- Awww thanks, I am so touched.

    @Sridhar- Thanks a lot!

    @Arti- Thanks for such a wonderful comment:)

    @Mi- Thanks Dear:)

    @sapne-shashi.blogspot.com- Thanks Shashi:)

    @neelima- I agree Neelima, it's so difficult to bear the loss of loved ones. Thanks for your lovely comment.

    @jaynthbusi- Thanks:)

    @indigenou-Thank You!

    @devangini- Thanks a lot:)

    @jugal- Thanks Jugal and you know I can't thank you enough:)

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  46. SameeraAugust 1, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    Beautiful poem. Deep and moving.

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  47. LavenderAugust 1, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    Awesome! Very nice write up! :)

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  48. Saurav ModakAugust 1, 2011 at 12:18 PM

    well I dont really read poems much, but seeing this one I cant stop without reading the full. Very good creation. All the best for your blog

    http://intoanotherdawn.blogspot.com

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  49. Somesh MukherjeeAugust 1, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    Wow! That was good. The rythm was excellent, the imagery was good.
    "Chirruping birds, floating clouds..." Pretty good. I also liked the impact of
    "It was love
    That took me in its stride"
    and then
    "It was death
    That took him in its stride"
    Amazing you used the emotions created before and then changed the flow with that one line
    Good work

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  50. swatiAugust 1, 2011 at 12:54 PM

    He will stay and admire me,
    Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn.

    Loved these lines..

    Keep writing Saru.. really enjoy reading your posts :-)

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  51. nehaAugust 1, 2011 at 1:03 PM

    beautiful lines...Your play with words is amazing....heart touching...

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  52. AnonymousAugust 1, 2011 at 1:03 PM

    कविता खरच खूप छान झाली आहे. तरीही rhyming words ची पेरणी केल्यास तिचं सौंदर्य अधिक खुलून दिसेल.
    तुमची परवानगी न घेता तुमच्या कवितेचं स्वैर मराठी भाषांतर करून मी माझ्या ब्लॉगवर टाकलं आहे. पुन्हा असा करणार नाही. पण भाषांतर आवडलं तर नक्की कळवा.

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  53. --August 1, 2011 at 10:17 PM

    Hi Saru ~ this poem is so beautifully happy and then so beautifully sad ~ I do hope it is not from a personal experience ... I really loved it & I'll definitely be back to read more! Thanks for sharing :-)

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  54. AngelAugust 2, 2011 at 1:39 AM

    Oh nice poem but seems you are sad , who left? Him?

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  55. Satish MutatkarAugust 2, 2011 at 5:24 AM

    Very well written Saru. The gift of good expression in few word is not bestowed on everyone, it is a poet's privilege. Nourish it and keep using it, that is what it is meant for:)

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  56. Thousif RazaAugust 2, 2011 at 5:34 AM

    i loved the concept... starts and ends with a simple but momentous not, i just think the ending line could have been better, explaining why love took it, saying maybe like "death was jealous, so it took it in its stride" i would have loved that...

    but saying thta... u have this power, i dont know how but u have this power to say just simple lines and say so many things, i get ur emotion now, i get it... and i have to say wow... WOW... that was an amazing end... i love it... i really do... awesome effort ya really... :) :D

    I loved the last lines though completely... its like ur signature which leaves with a thought for the reader's mind :)


    take care and keep writing...........

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  57. UnknownAugust 2, 2011 at 5:40 AM

    Very nice written. keep it up plz..

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  58. Subhrashis AdhikariAugust 2, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    you are such a great writer ...

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  59. AnonymousAugust 2, 2011 at 11:27 AM

    Such beautiful words!

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  60. Saru SinghalAugust 2, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    @~*Lady Fiona*~- Thankfully, it's just an imagination. Thanks for liking it and I need your support!

    @Angel- No, I'm not sad. It's just a thought which I presented in the form of poem. Thanks for liking it!

    @Satish Mutatkar- Thank you Sir and your words are very encouraging.

    @Thousif Raza- Thanks Thousif, your thought about highlighting Death's arrival and cause is superb. Actually, I wanted to use same lines with some changes. I can use your thought in my next poem. I have say again that your comments make my day:)

    @Anil Avtaar- Thanks Anil and welcome here...

    @Prabhavathi- Thanks Dear!

    @SUB- No, I just pen down whatever I think. Thanks Subhrashis...:)

    @Sudeshna Das- Thanks Dear!

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  61. AnonymousAugust 3, 2011 at 12:07 AM

    U made me cry!! such soulful words

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  62. perceptions.a.b.August 3, 2011 at 5:06 AM

    touchin !!

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  63. Dr Roshan RadhakrishnanAugust 3, 2011 at 6:46 AM

    this was lovely and inspiring.

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  64. vijay kumar sappattiAugust 5, 2011 at 5:53 AM

    amazing poem .. words are rally touching ..

    आभार

    विजय

    कृपया मेरी नयी कविता " फूल, चाय और बारिश " को पढकर अपनी बहुमूल्य राय दिजियेंगा . लिंक है : http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/2011/07/blog-post_22.html

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  65. POOJA...August 6, 2011 at 3:55 AM

    wow...
    amazingly executed... tremendous... :)

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  66. Raveendran NikhilAugust 7, 2011 at 2:31 PM

    am also not alone... :) :(

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  67. Stuti DhyaniAugust 9, 2011 at 5:14 AM

    one word-'beautiful',won't say more or i'll ruin it.

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  68. Beyond HorizonAugust 9, 2011 at 12:06 PM

    This is something I can't say anything, just read and feel the emotions behind the words

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  69. Karthik (Sp)August 11, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    Pure & Perfect :)
    Excellent poem.

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  70. AnonymousAugust 12, 2011 at 1:30 PM

    Warm toned it is, touching the heart directly. Awesome!

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  71. Pakistani TeenagerAugust 14, 2011 at 11:11 AM

    W.O.W
    I just loved it!

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  72. NisheethAugust 19, 2011 at 12:25 AM

    A tragic one but another masterpiece from you :)...

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  73. HemantAugust 20, 2011 at 1:49 PM

    @Saru Ma'am: Awesomely written...and thats what make me ur fan...u say so many things with few and simple words....and deep meaning..I have to learn a lot from you....

    A gr88 poem :)

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  74. vyasamoorthyAugust 22, 2011 at 9:45 AM

    Great poem. Touching.Thanks

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  75. Aakash KokzAugust 23, 2011 at 7:49 AM

    Sad but a wonderful poem ... God be with you ┼

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  76. Abhishek GhoshAugust 23, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    I noticed your blog from indiBlog. I really liked it.

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  77. anuAugust 23, 2011 at 2:33 PM

    that was anazing...

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  78. KavitaAugust 23, 2011 at 6:53 PM

    Despite the sadness in the poem, I like the way it ended.. With hope, faith and simply undying love... Beautiful!

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  79. AnonymousAugust 25, 2011 at 4:07 AM

    You have interesting imagination!
    Nice poems you got here

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  80. UnknownAugust 26, 2011 at 11:01 AM

    Cool Poem... thanks for sharing.. keep it up...

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  81. TinaAugust 30, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    simple words depicting love.. beautiful...

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  82. ChaitanyaAugust 31, 2011 at 4:17 PM

    touched! simply touched!

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  83. Deepak DoddamaniSeptember 4, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    Speechless....Ok..I m ur Fan Now :)

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  84. pallaviSeptember 5, 2011 at 1:50 AM

    Loved it... :)

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  85. Material MonkSeptember 5, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    well after reading this post, i feel like i should suggest one of my friends who also writes poetry, but is afraid to show her works.....
    a good one simple but touching...nywyz thanks for the passive advice..:-)

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  86. Jobin MartinSeptember 6, 2011 at 2:35 PM

    Does it have something to do with losing a loved one?

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  87. Akshay Kumar GSeptember 11, 2011 at 5:30 AM

    Beautiful. Heartfelt. Emotional. :)

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  88. darshanSeptember 13, 2011 at 3:14 AM

    My God! Amazing WORDS! Heart-wrenching

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  89. Saru SinghalSeptember 13, 2011 at 3:16 PM

    @reacharcs- I am so sorry for that:)

    @ABHRAJEET BANERJEE- Thanks:)

    @Pythoroshan- Thanks a lot!

    @Vijay Kumar Sappatti- Thanks Sir...

    @POOJA- Thanks for appreciating it Dear:)

    @Niks- :) :) :)

    @A grain of sand- That's so sweet of you...Thanks:)

    @Beyond Horizon- I am happy to read your comment, thanks...:)

    @Karthik- Thanks Dear :)

    @My Soul's Journey- Thanks and Welcome here :)

    @Rosette Princess- I'm glad you loved it:)

    @Nisheeth- Thanks a ton for such nice words and welcome here:)

    @Hemant- Can't thank you enough Hemant:) And, yes I think I have a learn a lot from you too...Love your blog title:)

    @vyasa- Thanks and welcome here:)

    @Aakash Kokz- Thanks Aakash:)

    @Abhishek Ghosh- Thanks a lot Abhishek and welcome here:)

    @anu- Thank you so much:)

    @Kavita- Thanks Kavita, I read some of your work and I loved it...:)

    @thelittleknownali- Thank you so much!

    @Spark- Thanks a lot!

    @Ashwini- Thanks a lot Ashwini:)

    @Tina- Thanks Tina and welcome here:)

    @Chaitanya- Thank you so much!

    @deepbaazigar- Thanks Dear...:)

    @pallavi- Thank you Pallavi...

    @Nirvanic- Sure, tell her to share her poems with all of us...:)

    @Jobin Martin- Yes, it is about losing someone, Hope you liked it:)

    @AKSHAY KUMAR G- Thank you so much!

    @darshan- Thanks a ton dear...

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  90. SameeraSeptember 18, 2011 at 11:00 PM

    Beautiful poem. The pain and love communicated with admirable simplicity.

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  91. Amar S.KSeptember 19, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    Very Touchy...loved it.

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  92. AamiSeptember 22, 2011 at 1:35 AM

    Nice one...Its always lovely when someone walks into our life and its very hard when they walk out of our life...

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  93. LeoPawSeptember 22, 2011 at 9:41 AM

    Painfully beautiful.

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  94. Rakesh KumarSeptember 26, 2011 at 2:28 PM

    May I say Saru that your this post is now of 99.
    Means about to complete a century.

    I wish it to be 100. What do you say ?

    Your reply would surely make it so.

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  95. Rakesh KumarSeptember 27, 2011 at 10:33 PM

    Thank you Saru.
    You are so smart.
    Never mind.
    Now.with this comment your post is of 100.
    Congratulations.

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  96. Sunita SriramSeptember 28, 2011 at 3:11 AM

    The comments - both quantitative and qualitative says it all!The comments - both quantitative and qualitative says it all!

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  97. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2011 at 10:44 AM

    i believe in two mortals having the same soul. it hurts when i read the poem, again and again. it reminds me of myself.

    and anyway, the poem was wonderful, i do a mistake if i don't say that it is also melancholic.

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  98. AnonymousOctober 1, 2011 at 3:08 AM

    Epilogue...

    In vain we roared; in vain we tried
    To rouse her into laughter,
    Her pensive glances wandered wide
    From orchestra to rafter -
    "Tier upon Tier" she said, and sighed;
    And silence followed after
    .....Melencholetta

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  99. indu chhibberOctober 2, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    Very touching,i feel for you.It's good to ofload emotions through writing.In a way it grants catharsis. But then it also makes one morose &lengthens the suffering.Do you agree?

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  100. Saurav ModakOctober 3, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    Really touching. Awesome composition. Keep writing poems like this :-)

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  101. Nalini HebbarOctober 8, 2011 at 2:09 AM

    nice work...loved the read

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  102. RanjOctober 13, 2011 at 2:10 AM

    It's lovely, really! Rocks the emotion.

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  103. AnonymousOctober 19, 2011 at 6:57 AM

    I cant comment on this post jus by typing words....
    My immediate reaction after reading this is SILENCE. Silence speaks more than words. :)

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  104. CarticOctober 20, 2011 at 1:53 PM

    Really awesome! soulful!

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  105. Saru SinghalOctober 23, 2011 at 10:56 PM

    @Sameera- Thanks and means a lot coming from a writer like you...

    @Amar S.K- Thanks :)

    @Remya- True dear, losing someone close to you is very painful...

    @leoPaw- Thanks...

    @Rakesh Kumar- Thank you Sir for your invaluable comment. These days to reduce the count of my own comments in a post, I club the earlier replies with the new. So, with your comment count will increase. I'll copy my previous reply and paste it along with new reply. Count still remains at 99 Sir :)

    @Rakesh Kumar- Thank you so much Sir...:) :) :)

    @specs buffy- Thanks, I'm blessed with great company on the blog!

    @blackandwhiteheart- It's a really sad poem dear and thanks for admiring it!

    @sunilscove- What can I say for this! I'm speechless!

    @indu chhibber- Can't say, these poems are work of fiction...Thanks for liking it and welcome here...

    @Saurav Modak- Thanks Saurav:)

    @Nalini Hebbar- Thank you so much...:)

    @Ranj- Thank you dear and welcome here!

    @shivacharanraj- Thank you for such a heart warming comment!

    @Cartic- Thank you so much!!!

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  106. MadhushaNovember 3, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    very touching

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  107. Richa SharmaNovember 5, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    Beautiful creation..your poem brings out many emotions at the same time :)

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  108. Nikita Vhora (Nequesta)November 6, 2011 at 6:41 AM

    This is BEAUTIFUL! The beginning sounded like MY story! :) But then it had a twist in it...very well written!

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  109. UnknownNovember 12, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    The simplicity is overwhelming

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  110. UnknownNovember 14, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    Superlike!!!!

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  111. NishaNovember 20, 2011 at 4:52 AM

    simple and touching...

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  112. Ruhani ChawliaNovember 21, 2011 at 6:19 AM

    such a beautiful poem.....
    Got tears in my eyes...

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  113. ayeshaNovember 24, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    Very well written! The words express the emotions beautifully!

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  114. Siddhartha JoshiDecember 20, 2011 at 10:54 PM

    I read it only today...stunning poem! Great one Saru...

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  115. Jane DoeJanuary 20, 2012 at 4:34 AM

    First time here... Came across this very late... literally got carried away by the words. simple yet poignant. Got a lump in my throat.. Kudos!!!

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  116. Sri ValliJanuary 24, 2012 at 9:18 AM

    That was touching....Awesomely written :) Happy Blogging Saru :)

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  117. Saru SinghalJanuary 24, 2012 at 11:48 AM

    @Madhusha- Thank you!

    @Richa Sharma- Thank you so much dear:)

    @Nikita Vhora- Thanks dear and welcome here:)

    @Rupertt Aryeen Wind- Thanks dear...

    @Mohur- Thank you Mohur:)

    @Nisha- Thanks:)

    @Ruhani Chawlia- Thanks dear and welcome here:)

    @ayesha- Thanks!

    @Siddhartha Joshi- Thanks, means a lot coming from you:)

    @Jane Doe- Thanks a lot dear, you are welcome here:)

    @☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬- Thanks a ton :)

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  118. Shamsud AhmedFebruary 8, 2012 at 1:25 PM

    Nice Write...thanks for sharing

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  119. AdamFebruary 14, 2012 at 12:38 AM

    @Saru: Fantastic.. "He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts.." brilliant lines..

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 14, 2012 at 3:06 PM

      Thank you Adam, means a lot coming from you...:)

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  120. Jen..The Butterfly EffectFebruary 14, 2012 at 1:53 PM

    He said we are one soul living in parts-WOWW!:) What a line!! I just love the imagery you created in my mind though its sad in the end!

    Thanks for commenting on my blog Saru! sweet of you to have taken the time out to do that! :)

    i'm your new follower!! :)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 14, 2012 at 3:07 PM

      Thanks dear for reading the poems and admiring...:)

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  121. Mr.MiglaniFebruary 17, 2012 at 5:01 AM

    Amazing but sad !!
    keep writing

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  122. UnknownMarch 10, 2012 at 12:20 PM

    pain beautifully expressed ,heartfelt

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  123. AnonymousMarch 23, 2012 at 12:53 PM

    i guess this is the other side of being a poet.. Dreaming & then regressing!!

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 23, 2012 at 12:59 PM

      Yeah...Being a poet you can dwell on any thought. With words, even regression looks amazing!

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  124. Snippets by CheenaMarch 27, 2012 at 3:17 AM

    beautiful:) very well written!!

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  125. BhavanaMarch 27, 2012 at 12:39 PM

    hurts to read it...this reader almost does not want the ending--want to hold on to the hope that the first few lines bring...will you write one where hope never ends?

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 28, 2012 at 12:44 PM

      I will try Bhavana...Thanks for bringing a positive spark in this poem...:)

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  126. Brad DuggMarch 28, 2012 at 2:02 PM

    as bhavana said..i just didnt want an ending....its just so tragically beautiful......I would appreciate and be eager to know your view on my poems to on my blog.

    I just loved this one and thanks a lot for sharing your writing.....

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 29, 2012 at 5:11 PM

      I will try and thanks for reading. Will sure read your work.

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    2. Brad DuggMarch 30, 2012 at 6:38 PM

      Thank you for reading my work...but I just cant get over this beautiful poem was reading it again now

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    3. Saru SinghalApril 2, 2012 at 1:50 PM

      Thats so sweet of you...:)

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    4. Brad DuggApril 29, 2012 at 1:36 PM

      STILL GLUED MADAM....JUST SO IN AWE OF THIS POEM

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    5. Saru SinghalApril 30, 2012 at 5:33 PM

      Awww...again thats really sweet of you :)

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  127. Krishaal H MorjariaMarch 30, 2012 at 5:32 AM

    seriously mahn!!! awesome work! :D m gonna learn a lot from u! :D :)

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 30, 2012 at 11:01 AM

      Thank you Krishaal. I guess the better way to say is that we both will learn from each other...:)

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  128. SaherApril 13, 2012 at 6:33 AM

    Really emotional, liked it a lot!

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  129. Deepansh KhuranaApril 29, 2012 at 11:52 AM

    Beautiful Poem. :) And some people have mentioned about the prominence of sadistic nature in your poems, I don't know about them but according to me, poems are better framed on negative emotions. Once again, Beautiful Poem. keep up the good work. I hope to write as good as you some day. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalApril 30, 2012 at 5:36 PM

      I agree, poems that dwell on negative emotions have so much to say. And, believe me if I can write, anyone can write. With so much understanding of life you can definitely write way better than me. Thank you so much for reading and your beautiful comment.

      Welcome here :)

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  130. KmsMay 9, 2012 at 4:57 PM

    nice work ....
    http://kmshomemadefood.blogspot.in/2012/05/amaranth-leaves-and-moong-dal-fry.html

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  131. AshMay 23, 2012 at 11:12 AM

    Very nice :)

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  132. Found In FolsomMay 28, 2012 at 6:53 PM

    aww...I wish they are only words...a person is so sad and you don't make it look all that bad..how sweet..

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    1. Saru SinghalMay 28, 2012 at 10:34 PM

      You know this is the first poem which helped me in gaining audience. I feel so connected to it. I am glad after reading such a positive comment from you :)

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  133. EngramsMay 30, 2012 at 11:12 AM

    Very touching poem and it invokes emotions while reading. Keep it up !! :) :)

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  134. NehaJune 4, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    Beautiful and yet sad... Nice work :)

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  135. PranitaJune 6, 2012 at 6:00 AM

    It's beautiful!!! Loved the way you described the arrival and departure of true love.

    Miracles Happen!

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    1. Saru SinghalJune 6, 2012 at 10:12 PM

      Thanks dear. Love stays I guess, no matter what happens.

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  136. Dipthi SomeshJune 14, 2012 at 5:49 AM

    Awesome.. love it.. Love stays forever..

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  137. Shalu SharmaJune 15, 2012 at 2:17 PM

    Quite a poem, a sad ending though.

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    1. Saru SinghalJune 18, 2012 at 11:01 AM

      I agree but thankfully it's just an expression. Thanks for reading Shalu:)

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  138. SreejaJune 16, 2012 at 6:14 AM

    So sad and touching, conveyed powerfully....

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  139. ANULATA RAJ NAIRJuly 18, 2012 at 2:25 AM

    u conveyd ur feelings so well that i can feel ur(!) heartache...
    well expressed poem saru ji.

    anu

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  140. Ranita SinhaJuly 18, 2012 at 2:08 PM

    Heart touching!!!!

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  141. AnonymousAugust 10, 2012 at 5:25 AM

    heart touching...again awwsomEE

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  142. AnonymousAugust 10, 2012 at 5:26 AM

    amzinG...

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  143. Gayatri SoniAugust 31, 2012 at 6:31 AM

    depicting feelings unsaid before....

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  144. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2012 at 9:35 AM

    Nice poem. Liked it :-)

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  145. UnknownSeptember 13, 2012 at 2:51 PM

    "Forever is a long time. But I wouldn't mind spending it by your side."
    pretty nice poem.. had d feel to it..

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  146. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2012 at 3:17 AM

    Nice poem :) I loved reading it..But felt so sad at the end..Visit my blog and read my poems too

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  147. UnknownOctober 14, 2012 at 3:54 PM

    hi saru...what i liked again in ur creation...its ends wid hope...ya hope not to give up...keep writing saru..lot more to here 4m u!!!

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    1. Saru SinghalOctober 15, 2012 at 2:26 PM

      Hope is something which keeps us alive in times of stress.Thanks for reading dear :)

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  148. AnkitOctober 16, 2012 at 10:27 AM

    What an expression !!!

    I am lately becoming fan of your posts !!!

    I wish I had been here earlier !!

    Beautiful !!!

    Happy Blogging !!!

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  149. AnonymousNovember 12, 2012 at 1:17 AM

    clean and simple...easy to understand...i am gonna read al your other posts:-)

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  150. a gal in cityDecember 5, 2012 at 5:05 AM

    very creative........

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  151. AnonymousDecember 6, 2012 at 4:47 AM

    Very touching poem! Very well written.

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  152. Himani AgarwalDecember 23, 2012 at 7:39 AM

    nice and emotional...:)
    http://itjusthappenandthen.blogspot.in/

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  153. UnknownJanuary 17, 2013 at 4:33 AM

    good one

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  154. Saurabh ChawlaJanuary 21, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    A lend of being happy and sad at the same moment. Touching!

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  155. Saurabh ChawlaJanuary 21, 2013 at 11:38 AM

    I meant blend sorry for the typo error :)

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    1. Saru SinghalJanuary 21, 2013 at 12:13 PM

      No problems, we can read the tyops very efficiently Saurabh. Thanks for reading :)

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  156. SuganyaFebruary 20, 2013 at 9:21 AM

    Good one :)

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  157. Neo ImaginationsMarch 18, 2013 at 11:11 PM

    Do i have words to tell you what i just read ? Lost in the feel of the poem. Keep writing even do over time i tell you. Dont eat, sleep just write Saru.

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  158. UnknownMarch 23, 2013 at 3:20 AM

    that is way to touching and emotional... could actually feel the emotions.. loved it

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  159. UnknownMarch 30, 2013 at 4:41 AM

    Hi, i am new to blogging. Have to learn as to how to portray such ingrained emotions with such simplicity from your work. Wonderful!

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  160. UnknownApril 5, 2013 at 4:31 PM

    Your poem got a touch. Good One.

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  161. UnknownApril 9, 2013 at 3:12 PM

    yeah ... am not alone...!!!

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  162. AnonymousApril 12, 2013 at 5:27 AM

    no words ...
    heart throbbing ..

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