Je t'aime - II

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Was drifted away with ecstasy, rubbed and erased all fears,
As he was coming to me, he would have been near.
I waited for this July like no one has waited before,
And I loved him always, with each passing moment even more.
Now, hopes are drifting away, reading his latest letter twice,
Is maintaining this relation by any means wise?
Should I wait for him? He needs more time;
They say for love to be true, it has to be one of its kind.
August is not far away, my heart pleaded my mind,
Though deep within I think, Is my love so blind?
The lady in me crave for his embrace,
For my numb soul, this is a hard phase.

Convicted of falling in love, I have to bear this pain.
Consoling my pounding heart, its pleading will not go in vain.

Comments

  1. Spiritual SherpaJuly 9, 2011 at 3:28 PM

    Hi Saru...well written and composed..you definitely have a way with words :) especially loved the signoff "Convicted of falling in love, I have to bear this pain.Consoling my pounding heart, its pleading will not go in vain." short, crisp an sweet :)

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  2. amrita ray paridaJuly 9, 2011 at 3:37 PM

    hey ur writin is really nice....its a short poem but has so much contained in it

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  3. डॉ. मोनिका शर्मा July 9, 2011 at 4:14 PM

    Amazing....Beautiful Creation...

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  4. A FineappleJuly 10, 2011 at 1:43 AM

    superb.. i read both d parts nd its awesome.. :)

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  5. popsieJuly 10, 2011 at 3:04 AM

    Beautiful!

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  6. Saru SinghalJuly 10, 2011 at 2:24 PM

    @India's no. 1 blog- The couplet is my favorite part too. I tried to structure the poem in a sonnet.

    @Amrita ray parida, @Dr Monica & @popsie- Thanks a lot!

    @Ms. Holla- Thanks for reading both the parts, reading them together brings out the beauty of this love story.

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  7. Poetic SoulJuly 10, 2011 at 9:20 PM

    Love is such a powerful force and you've captured it here, I enjoyed your poemyour poem

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  8. J'DJuly 11, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    Love is the most Powerful and still Most Unknown Energy in the World... Awesome words, keep it up... :) ♥

    http://loveisaspiritualforce.blogspot.com/

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  9. Saru SinghalJuly 11, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    @Poetic Soul- Thanks.

    @Jay- Yeah Jay, the Love Guru( This is after that stubborn guy post).

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  10. Santosh BangarJuly 11, 2011 at 3:49 PM

    WONDERFUL WRITING
    1ST TIME HERE VERY NIE POSTS I HAVE FOOD BLOG DO VISIT AND FOLLOW IF LIKE

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  11. magiceyeJuly 12, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    this is so beautiful

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  12. Subhrashis AdhikariJuly 12, 2011 at 1:02 PM

    that's beautiful...

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  13. Saru SinghalJuly 12, 2011 at 2:46 PM

    @Santosh Bangar, @magiceye and @SUB- Thanks.

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  14. UnknownJuly 13, 2011 at 2:34 AM

    Your words run way deep.
    Meaningful,Soulful and Beautiful Indeed!! :)

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  15. Saru SinghalJuly 13, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    @Risha Kalra- Nice writeup in the comment itself:)
    Thanks Dear.

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