Last year blessed me, He walked silently into my life. It was Love, That took me in its stride. One evening we walked holding hands, Then, I told him what I felt in heart. He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts. To bring the parts together, We fought with the world and tied the knot. Being one soul, Gave life a whole new spot. Chirping birds, floating clouds, Nature conspired for us. Always swimming against the tide, Life was in an adrenaline rush. This year cursed me, He walked silently out of my life. It was Death, That took him in its stride. Yesterday his soul was saying, Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on. He will stay and admire me, Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn. Image Source - Here
Lovely Words Saruji... Keep It Up... All the Best... Waiting for more words from you... :) <3
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this is so beautiful
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so true...beautifully written...
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@magiceye- Thanks for appreciating, your words encourage me a lot.
@induravisinghj- :)
@Rachit- I am glad you like it and thanks for your suggestion:)
@SUB- :) The search for comfort ends there, I guess. Thanks.
Amazingly beautiful :)
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WOW..!! u might hav heard it a 100 times.. its superb.. :) :)
ReplyDelete*In the arms of someone you love, you’ll find the best resting place."...couldnt agree more..:)
ReplyDelete@Rajnish Tiwari, Sunil Padiyar & Sneha Sunny- Thanks.
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@Ms. Holla- This thought is so wonderful:)
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Beautiful!
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@a girl's diary- Thanks a lot!
@Bhargav- I wish everyone find their resting place. :)
@jaynthbusi- Delighted, thanks! Wish could attach a nicer picture:)
@Dibakar Sarkar- Thanks for such a wonderful compliment.
@Red Handed- Thanks, I'm still learning the art...
@Angel- Yeah, Even I admire words with depth. Liked your recent post so much.
@Neha- Thanks:)
@Vyankatesh- Thats the beauty of a couplet, few words portraying beautiful emotions.
@Katan Patil- Yeah, compliments keep the spirits up :)
fall in love with ur words at the very first read. truly beutiful!
ReplyDeleteYou are passionate about writing... and i can feel it through ur words. you live ur life through ur words, beliving them that they are true. They have life. I truly appreciate what you've written i went through the first page, and i have to say.With simple words you dont just touch our hearts, but make them stay there.
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I hope u create more of such everlasting piece of literature with the same passion. :) keep it up.
Glad to have found u :)
Take care and keep writing..........
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@Kumar Kusumesh- Thank you Sir.
touching ...and ....Beautiful lines!!
ReplyDelete@संजय भास्कर- Thanks, I am delighted when someone is touched by my words!
ReplyDeleteThis could also be the thoughts of a baby unborn to the mother I felt :) Lovely musing!
ReplyDelete@Leo- That's a very nice perspective, now your words are inspiring me. Thanks Dear.
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@Animesh Ganguly- Again, I can't thank you enough...:)
ReplyDeleteMy apologies for I missed on sucha lovely post :)
ReplyDeleteThese words, they were so warm. Fab one, Saru :)
@Risha Kalra- No need to apologize dear, I am touched that you're reading my old posts as well...Thanks
ReplyDeleteSaru...its the day for your blog. I just cant get out of it and read something else...I love poetry and I am enjoying reading thoroughly yours. I loved your pictures with poems too..they both tell me about you. Thanks for these beautiful words.
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I could almost visualize!Lovely
ReplyDelete@Shaifali- Thanks a lot dear, I am on cloud nine after reading all your comments:)
ReplyDelete@Rahul- Thank you Sir, you appreciate my work so nicely...:)
Ahh what can I say, I know how beautiful a feeling it is.. :)
ReplyDeleteSo nice to read your older posts, Saru :)
Thank you Akshay:) It's always great to hear what you say. Thanks for gracing this blog.:)
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