Last year blessed me, He walked silently into my life. It was Love, That took me in its stride. One evening we walked holding hands, Then, I told him what I felt in heart. He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts. To bring the parts together, We fought with the world and tied the knot. Being one soul, Gave life a whole new spot. Chirping birds, floating clouds, Nature conspired for us. Always swimming against the tide, Life was in an adrenaline rush. This year cursed me, He walked silently out of my life. It was Death, That took him in its stride. Yesterday his soul was saying, Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on. He will stay and admire me, Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn. Image Source - Here
So sweet :)
ReplyDeletecute!
ReplyDeleteThat's damn romantic:-)
ReplyDeleteAaa Ha!!!sweet and romantic...:)
ReplyDeleteI'd say Stunningly sweet! :)
ReplyDeletevery sweet poem... :)
ReplyDelete:)Lovely..
ReplyDeleteJust soo cute..Made me smile...You Go girl!!!!!
ReplyDeleteawww..this is really cute and got me feeling good =)
ReplyDeletesarah
That is such a cute poem :) Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThese couplets are so sweet :)
ReplyDeleteDiabetes runs in my family Saru Di, don't give me such sweet posts :P
Awesome! you captured the anticipation and excitement of the meeting very well..looking forward for more...:)
ReplyDeleteA truth said. :D
ReplyDeleteNarcissism?
ReplyDeleteI guess not, it's something better.
And I am reminded of a scene from some Amitabh Bachhan movie where our drunk hero, beaten up by someone reaches home and instead of applying bandages on himself, puts it on the mirror, pretending to be talking to the guy on other side. He too might have loved dressing him up, in a different manner albeit. :P
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Every one seem to have said it.. :(
ReplyDeleteI am repeating now.. this is damn cute!!! :)
Just a word to describe it "beautiful"
ReplyDeleteJust loved this.
ReplyDeleteEspecially the first two lines.
short n sweet n delightful! the best set of four lines in quite sometime :)
ReplyDeleteRomantic and sweet.:)..
ReplyDeleteso sweet
ReplyDeleteSo sweet and so true...
ReplyDelete"sajna hai mujhe...sajna ke liye"
ReplyDeleteI remembered this by reading those lines..haha..stupid me..sorry :)
Been hovering here quite a lot...but writing here for the first time :)
Kunal
It's so great to write and dream about the things that we sometimes take for granted. Very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSweet and true ...Thanks
ReplyDeleteB...E...A....UTIFUL!!!
ReplyDeleteaaah! so smitten ,so inflamed!
ReplyDeleteSaruu :)) your imagination :) cheers to that...dress up quick...you have a speech to deliver..remember...you are a neta now :)))
ReplyDeleteSomething as simple has been described so beautifully, and yes i could relate to it, as had a similar equation few days back :) ... thnku for bringing back those memories...
ReplyDelete:) A sweet moment couldnt have been penned down better :)
ReplyDeletethat is so so beautiful :)_... i like it a lot...
ReplyDeletetake care and keep writing............
ohoooohoo sweet and so romantic dear...nice...keep it up
ReplyDeleteWow ,all done for love ! Cute post!
ReplyDeletehmmm that's soooooooooo romantic :)
ReplyDelete@induravisinghj- Thanks Indu:)
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@Anne John- Thank you!!!
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@Risha Kalra- Thanks Risha:) :) :)
@Realms of fantasy- Thank you!
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@Red Handed- Your post make us laugh...You rock!!! And, thanks...
@subtlescribbler- I'm glad you like it Sarah:)
@Kiran @ KiranTarun.com- Thanks Kiran!!!
@~Serendipity~- Next time, I'll make it sugar free...You are so sweet yourself, Ayushi, don't blame diabetes for that:)
@Shilpa- Thanks for admiring the inherent meaning of it...:)
@KN- Thanks!
@Blasphemous Aesthete- It is indeed...lol...And, after reading your comment that scene looks so close to this post.:)
@KP- Thanks:)
@Shesha Chaturvedi- Thanks Shesha...
@VIKRAM KARVE- Thank you Sir, even I love the first two lines, especially the expression- silk around my body...
@Rohit Sareen- Thanks Rohit :)
@Little Heart- Thank you so much Dear...
@Jidhu Jose- Thanks Jidhu and your lovely shots inspire me. I wrote some lines which were inspired by your ROSE shot...
@Neha- Thanks Neha and I must say I have to learn presentation from you:)
@Kunnu- Hahaha...Actually, I can't imagine myself singing this song or any song for that matter to my husband. I hope you like it Kunal:)
@alissa4illustration- Thanks :)
@: केवल राम :- Thank you!
@kalpak n.- Thanks a ton...
@A grain of sand- Thanks Dear for saying such lovely words:)
@India's no.1 blog- Thanks...Well as far as imagination is concerned, I think I have to borrow it from you:)
@Menachery- And, that brings a smile on my face:) Thanks...
@Arti- Thanks a lot Arti...
@Thousif Raza- BTW where were you??? Thanks for liking it Thousif :)
@sush- Thanks :)
@Angel- Thank you Angel!
Very beautiful..
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet...
ReplyDeleteOh! beautiful emotions.
ReplyDeleteYour post reminds me this song
'सजना है मुझे सजना के लिए'
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Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteBest as ever!! Short but so romantic!!! Your imagination has no boundaries :)
ReplyDelete'Short and inescapably sweet', should prod in more lines...
ReplyDeleteShort, sweet and beautiful. :)
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Sweet n lovely:)
ReplyDeleteSimply fantastic !!
ReplyDeletehell i m very very late....evrything said....:(....np...its gonna be the same still...lovely post very cute....:)
ReplyDeleteYes
ReplyDelete""She looks always beautiful to his heart's mirror
it does not matter how she looks to a mirror,
She is before the mirror to see a spark in eyes of her lover""
Gowardhan
http://nothinggserious.blogspot.com
awwwww :) Saru you are such a wonderful woman, now I want to date you :P
ReplyDeleteso sweet
ReplyDeleteNice and crisp.. :D
ReplyDeleteShort and amazingly beautiful....just loved it from the core of my heart...
ReplyDeleteits so lovely.. :)
ReplyDeleteI really want to be d first one to comment.. all the adjectives seem to have been already used and i feel tht i'm repeatin the same thing.. :)
As always... Few Lines, Deeper meaning... :)
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Beautifully jotted down, splendid words :-)
ReplyDeleteMy words to add saaru...this is such an awesome 4 line poem really means alot and romantic..to whom so ever u have written is really lucky !
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ReplyDeletesweet!! love your blog saru.
ReplyDeleteChweeet one! :) Loved it! :)
ReplyDeletePerfect poem for Janmasthami!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow Wow Wow Wow saru... Sorry for making it sound like a bark.. But believe me you've written it amazingly well!!
ReplyDeleteI loved it! :)
if u dress ur poem beautifully
ReplyDeletethen i wonder how will u dress for beloved one :P
nice expression saru :)
Sweet and sensuous! We all dress up to be adored by the special someone in our life! don't we? glad to have found your blog.
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Greetings, Sweet Saru :)
ReplyDeleteOh my! I don't know which I have enjoyed more, reading your BEAUTIFUL poem or all the comments received from your viewers lol!
Such a treat to come to your blog ~ a combo deal of GREAT writing & wonderful company! Love it :)
That is amazing.. Just 4 lines and you created the magic out of it... Nice one Saru :)
ReplyDeleteAww! So beautifully written. These fewer lines express so much. :) Lovely and romantic!
ReplyDeleteI never thought I'd say this considering poetry was never my forte. But micro-poetry like this...bring it on, Saru :) Reads beautifully.
ReplyDeletethats very nicely written! loved it! =D
ReplyDeleteआपको एवं आपके परिवार "सुगना फाऊंडेशन मेघलासिया"की तरफ से भारत के सबसे बड़े गौरक्षक भगवान श्री कृष्ण के जनमाष्टमी के पावन अवसर पर बहुत बहुत बधाई स्वीकार करें लेकिन इसके साथ ही आज प्रण करें कि गौ माता की रक्षा करेएंगे और गौ माता की ह्त्या का विरोध करेएंगे!
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गौ माता की ह्त्या बंद हो और कुछ नहीं !
आपके सहयोग एवं स्नेह का सदैव आभरी हूँ
आपका सवाई सिंह राजपुरोहित
सबकी मनोकामना पूर्ण हो .. जन्माष्टमी की आपको भी बहुत बहुत शुभकामनायें
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ReplyDeleteHi Saru,
ReplyDeleteYou have a way with words!
I like your blog. Will keep coming back for more.
soft words!! the desire to dress up someone else special is truly a great feeling!
ReplyDeletebeautifully put. lovely:)
ReplyDelete@shveta- Thanks and I am delighted to read your work:)
ReplyDelete@vertu- Thanks Vertika and I follow some of your tips while dressing up:)
@Vikram- Thanks Vikram!
@Rakesh Kumar- Thank you Sir and your blog is hard to miss. I will surely check the post...
@Madhaw Tiwari- Thank you so much:)
@Rachit Aggarwal- Thanks Rachit!
@Anand- Anand, these days I think over a cup of coffee. You know, it's so hard to get over your posts...Thanks:)
@the mind behind the mindless lampoons- Thanks and welcome here:)
@yash1229- Thanks Yash and will do that:)
@deepazartz- Thank you Deepa...
@Vyankatesh- Thank you so much!
@vaisakhi- :) Your comment is so cute...:) Thank you:)
@Gowardhan- WOW, beautifully said...:)
@Chintan- Sure Chintan:):):)
@surya k- Thanks Dear!
@fragileprints- Thanks a lot:)
@Ashwini- For those lovely words, a big THANK YOU!
@Shaifali- I am glad you like it so much...
@Arpitha Holla- No Arpitha, whatever you say seems so fresh...:)
@Jay- Thank you Jay, BTW where are you these days?
@chitra- These lines are for my husband, 20th was our Engagement Anniversary. Thanks:)
@Dr. Supriya. Kallianpur- No mention and thanks:)
@Ginger- Thank you and welcome here...
@Lavender- Thanks a ton:)
@♥ Braja- :) :) :)
@metagravity- You're too good Mi, there is a peculiar quality about you which I adore. Thanks:) Biggest AB Fan!
@sowmya- Thanks Sowmya and I'm speechless:)
@CreativeMama- Thank you and will surely do that:)
@~*Lady Fiona*~- Aww, Thanks for such a beautiful comment and I'm in love in your comments as much as I'm in love with your poems:)
@Sunil Padiyar- Thanks Sunil but one question- When is your next post coming? Eager to find out what happened...
@Harsha- Thanks a ton Harsha:)
@Arcopol- Thanks for such a lovely comment and welcome here:)
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@dattaabhishek- Indeed it is...Thanks for appreciating it:)
@TD23- Thanks a lot...:)
Oh, how much you convey in four short
ReplyDeletebut sweet lines!
:D... thanks Saru.
ReplyDeleteShort, sweet & awesome :)
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I love the simplicity of your blog.
ReplyDeleteYour writing looks very mature.
Really loved the rhythmic beauty of the post. Simple yet very beautiful.
80 comments! Well you look to be quite a famous blogger.
Keep blogging.
Cheers!
beautifully penned down words <3
ReplyDeletethose are such lovely lines.. simplicity at its best.. :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful
ReplyDeleteHow fortunate a man could be to have a girl like that!
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so visually evocative!
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simply sweet :)
ReplyDeleteso romantic :-)aahh!!!
ReplyDeletebestesssst....beautiful lines.....!!
ReplyDeleteSilk and satin are the most romantic materials!
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ReplyDeleteJust four lines, and captured a lot. Nice
ReplyDeleteToo good !!!
ReplyDeleteloved it!! <3
ReplyDeleteLovely :)
ReplyDeletesweet little one.. nice.. :)
ReplyDeleteWow! I can feel your words. Amazing! :)
ReplyDelete@Debra- Thanks Debra:)
ReplyDelete@Mi- You're most welcome...:)
@Skywalker- Thank you so much!
@kalpak n.- Congratulations and Thank you so much!!!
@GvSparx - Inspiring Lives- Thanks for such nice words and I'm not famous, just blessed with beautiful people who like my posts.:)
@apala- Thanks a ton and welcome here!@SuKupedia :) :)- Thanks Dear for such nice words:)
@rajuda- Yeah, very lucky...:)
@Upasana- I can't thank you enough!:)
@magiceye- Thanks Deepak Sir and welcome back:)
@joshi daniel- Thanks Daniel:)
@swati- Thanks and I was waiting for your comment:)
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@alissa4illustration- Even I think so...
@Ashwini- Thanks a ton:)
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@Pradeep Raj- Thank you!
@AKSHAY KUMAR G- Thanks Akshay:)
No matter how I look, I love dressing up for you... Don't we all love dressing up for our "special" one?
ReplyDeleteBeautifully described!!!
Yes, we do love it...Thanks a lot for admiring it...:)
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DeleteIt was beyond sweet Saru Di ;)
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Thanks :) :) :)
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