All Over Again...
Insomniac from many nights,
My condensed pulses want to revive,
Maybe our love story is too plain,
Let’s fall in love... all over again...
Remember the road, I walked in the rain,
Lurched bare feet beating the mundane,
I pocketed the moments that day,
Separated colors from all the grey,
My life has changed since and it won’t be same,
So, let’s fall in love... all over again...
In the twinkling of eyes, in the tapping of feet,
In the glass of wine, in the crumbling of bed sheet,
Sweet nothings walk never making a rush,
Always new story unfolds with a Midas touch,
Address me as you like but follow my plan,
C’mon, let’s fall in love... all over again...
C’mon, let’s fall in love.......lovely
ReplyDeleteWow...! it's awesome...! make me feel like the same 1st day in love...!
ReplyDeleteawwww :) certainly...
ReplyDeleteC’mon, let’s fall in love... all over again...
ReplyDeleteAmazing feeling....
The post shows your depth & care,
ReplyDeleteThe reciprocal effect everyone will share..
Exclusive!
Beautiful post, melodic and melancholic at the same time.
ReplyDeleteNice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
superb lines.. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome use of words put together....
ReplyDeleteFalling in love is a lovely feeling. Falling in love all over again would be an even more wonderful feeling. Lovely post :)
ReplyDeleteI think we all feel this way about our relationships at one time or another. Things just start to feel the same old everyday.
ReplyDeleteI love the line, "Separated colors from all the grey."
its beautiful...it wanted me to start fresh too...you are very talented!
ReplyDeleteSimply....Exquisite!
ReplyDeleteNice work! You write well.
ReplyDeleteWho wouldnt say no to ur love if these line are what you gift them.
ReplyDeletePerfect!
Oh Saruuu... I read it all over again and again.. :-) At 10.30 in the nyt, after a hard day at work, this soothes my whole mind and body :-)
ReplyDeleteIn the twinkling of eyes, in the tapping of feet,
ReplyDeleteIn the glass of wine, in the crumbling of bed sheet,
As far as your poem is concerned,its a good poetry.You are very talented. But,in my opinion love is very very pious experience beyond body and mind.
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, let’s fall in love... all over again...
ReplyDeleteIn the twinkling of eyes, in the tapping of feet,
, let’s fall in love... all over again......
beautiful , awasome . never have a word to express my feeling . sweet like melting sweet butter .
the exact feeling of falling in love; the colours of life changes, the physical changes from increased heart beat to change in pulses.....and you are also giving him a plan how to again fall in love......awesome loved it..the feeling of falling in love again and again with the same person is extremely wonderful experience.....thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. Your language is apt for expression love.
ReplyDeleteBelieve me, I was waiting to read your further posts. And why not, such a lovely and soulful lines you write :)
ReplyDeleteMy fav:
Lurched bare feet beating the mundane,
I pocketed the moments that day,
Separated colors from all the grey,
My life has changed since and it won’t be same
Blogrolled you at my personal blog! :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful as usual! :-)
ReplyDeleteMy life has changed since and it wont be same. so lets fall in love. all over again. superb. you have an amazing talent to bring out all your feelings through poems.
ReplyDeletelovely lines, wonderfully thought and beautifully written :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteFell in love with the words all over again
ReplyDeleteLoved it....beautifully penned.
ReplyDeleteawesome...
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful....
ReplyDeletesomething great for hopeless romantic like me....i wanna fall in love :P
ReplyDeleteJust fell in love with these lines
ReplyDeletebeautiful post :)
A beauty this one. Romantic and lyrical.
ReplyDeleteRumani Khayal.... Bahut Badhiya
ReplyDeleteI loved the last two lines "Address me as you like but follow my plan,
ReplyDeleteC’mon, let’s fall in love... all over again..."
;)
You've written it so beautifully and mesmerised me all over again!! :)
Simple, nice and perfect :)
ReplyDeleteWow Saru.. as usual.. energetic.. lovely.. and filled with passion..
ReplyDeleteI loved the melancholy of these lines Saru Di :):)
ReplyDeleteYou're fabulous :)
Trust me, leave law :P and grab this :)
this one is freaking awesome! feel like copying and reciting these for someone...spare me with copyright infringement :) ?
ReplyDeletekeep it up! :D
ReplyDeleteok. sure. let's. :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
OMG!,Superb display of WORDS Saru!.Luvly post.
ReplyDeleteWanna fall in love once again :-)
ReplyDeleteAwesome ....
You are like a book on romance...every word needs to be felt with thoughts, feeling and from deep within frm the heart...cheers...if your words are so mesmerizing..how much of a romantic stunner would you be in person...:) easily one of the best poems i have read in ages...love the signoff as always.."come lets fall in love all over again" ...love as they say is like wine...gets better with age and so are your creations...:)
ReplyDeletebeautiful...i fall in love with her every time i come back from office and see her eyes eagerly waiting for me...:D
ReplyDeletebeautiful saru....how u write such beautiful things..beautiful feelings...
ReplyDeletelovely words...nicely crafted lines.
ReplyDeletewow! Saru you seem to be a person who writes with beautiful expression. happy to find a blogger who won my heart with a creative touch.
ReplyDeleteRejuvenating love, nice post :)
ReplyDeletelets fall in love.. wow..:)
ReplyDeleteWeakest LINK
Remember the road, I walked in the rain,
ReplyDeleteLurched bare feet beating the mundane..
I don't know what to say..
Way to go..
Keep on writing..
Sudeshna.. ;-)
WoW! I really LOVE this one, Saru! Another beautiful write and splendid idea!
ReplyDeleteThe falling in love part of a relationship is such a precious time and such a sweet idea to fall in love all over again with the same person ~ maybe there would be less break-ups if people read this and did it! :D
Love, love LOVE it!!! :) ♥
Amazing poem, touched the heart... Almost like a song...
ReplyDeleteHave a fabulous weekend Saru:)
really lovely poem...... I'm your fan....
ReplyDeleteRomantic, evocative and powerful messages here :) Following your poems here....
ReplyDelete:D lol...
ReplyDeleteWow has become synonymous to..??. :D :D ssshhhh...
heheheheee :D
everytime you do such a great job... then expressions and comments like "wow x n" ought to come!! :D
I wouldn't mind falling in love again :)
ReplyDeletesimple words to express deep thoughts lovely . you have given expression to desire of many a hearts - lets fall in love - all over again. Simply said 'Once is not enough'
ReplyDeleteI fall in love every time I discover him! Accepting someone with a clean slate has a lot of surprises. Any soul would love getting surprised!
ReplyDeleteLoved your poem. Beautifully worded. The lines are so smooth as though somebody is singing a song. :)
Saru - I think we can strike the deal :)
ReplyDeleteCame in through IndiBlogger Directory...
ReplyDeleteEnthralled by your creativity; Now a follower with the intent of reading through all your posts by the end of the day...
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Mohur.
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wow.. u just have magic in your words.. touchwood. I just love to read ur poems. "all over again" :)
ReplyDeleteBeing an avid reader, ur simple yet powerful expressions bind the reader...
Keep posting!
Falling in love with the same person again and again, deeper and deeper every time is a beautiful way of living. Lovely expressions!
ReplyDeleteVery very nice work...keep writing !!!
ReplyDeletemagical words like.
ReplyDeleteYou're so good with those words....
ReplyDeleteI just fell in love with your words all over again :)
ReplyDeleteLove, Risha :)
I think I told this before...but I wouldn't mind saying it again..I adore your blog.... :)
ReplyDeleteThis poem is MAGIKKK!!
BEAUTIFUL.....n quite songish...loved it...:)
ReplyDeletebeautifully put:) few things in life can match that feeling when you know you are falling in love:)
ReplyDeleteyou have a wonderful way with words:) keep it up:)
i believe love should be abt excitement living for something new everyday... something surprising... so that every mrng... u have something new to live for... falling in love all over again is so awesome with the same person because u know what that person likes what he doesn't... so u can make the other person that much more happy :)
ReplyDeletecool poem... touched my heart at some lines...
Take care and keep writing.....
Hey...I've tagged u in Play The 7 Links Challenge! because it's great having u as a blogger friend! Chk it out now :)
ReplyDeleteHow lovely! :)
ReplyDeletevery honest and true poem. lovely!!
ReplyDeletethis is so magical!! i love it totally!! :)
ReplyDeleteVERY NICE ALL LINES...
ReplyDeleteCONGRETS
मेरी रचनाये नीचें यहाँ पर भी हैं आप आये और अपने मित्रता की पंक्तियों में मुझे भी शामिल कर अनुग्रहित करें
MITRA-MADHUR
MADHUR VAANI
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This was amazing, enjoyed going through it ..
ReplyDeleteWith that kind of poem, I'd fall in love with you alright! Amazing Work.The rythm was especially so smooth. Makes me want to sway
ReplyDeletei look at you
ReplyDeletei sigh again..
i wonder when
we'd meet again..
if only this moment would never end...
and we'll feel in love again !!
Falling in love is such a good feeling and is looked at different angles by different people and no matter what they write the words come out beautiful. Great Post! Hi, this is Munir over here at Focus.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written .. enjoyed reading it.
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Just lovely..:)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful ... sort of felt like this song ..
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very beautiful poem :)
ReplyDeleteSweet Poem !! :) Nice work..!
ReplyDeleteWow... thanks to Indivine I found this really good poem and blog... very well written... captures the love and feelings easily :-)
ReplyDeletesimply lovely!
ReplyDeletenice. ia really like this..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love it, going to re-read it now! Indeed sometimes we forget to remember those great moments of love, as years pass by.
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for dropping by my blog :) Good day to you!
Sooooo romantic... felt like reading the lyrics of some romantic track! You should consider singing your own poems... :) Do you??
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing :)
Wow , true said by most there ,very romantic...so nice to have that feeling , so divine...stay in love Ms Saru!
ReplyDeleteGreat one Saru...!!!! I loved it...!! :)
ReplyDeleteA thing of beauty is a joy forever... beautifully penned with a lot of emotion
ReplyDeletea heartfelt poem - a very sweet read :) Cheers, priya
ReplyDeletei love this i love this! :) i read this thrice and i soo love this!
ReplyDeleteVery well penned...and it did garner a lot of lovely comments as it deserved....
ReplyDelete@Jidhu Jose- Thanks Jidhu:)
ReplyDelete@jaynthbusi- Thank you Jaynth...
@Chintan- Anyone can fall in love over and over again with you...:)
@induravisinghj- Thank you so much Indu:)
@Being_AC- Your comment is very exclusive Sir, Loved it!
@Blasphemous Aesthete- Thanks Anshul :)
@Arpitha Holla- Thanks Arpitha!
@Venkateswaran Ramachandran- Thanks RV and thanks once again for the award:)
@Deepthi- Thanks Deepthi...
@alissa4illustration- Thanks Dear!
@Shilpa- Thanks a ton :)
@Nasnin Nasser- Thanks :) :) :)
@The Floating Clouds- Thank you so much and welcome here!
@Red Handed- Thanks for such a nice comment:)
@Anand- I'm speechless. :) Thanks Anand:)
@Rakesh Kumar- I totally agree with you Sir and thank you. :)
@shashi purwar- Thank you Shashi:)
@Bhavna- Bhavna, you have described the entire poem in such nice words and with so much conviction. I read your comment atleast 10 times. Thanks and will say again 'You Rock'.
Hariharan Valady- Thank you Sir!
@Harsha- Harsha, I can't thank you enough and I'm so touched...:)
@Mishi- Thanks :)
@Little Heart- Thanks dear and comment like yours make my day:)
@SuKupedia :) :)- Thanks a ton!
@SHAHI KHAN- That's so sweet of you, thank you from the bottom of my heart!
@IRFANUDDIN- Thanks :)
ReplyDelete@Neha- Thank you Neha!
@magiceye- Thanks Sir:)
@Skywalker- I am glad that you liked it to that extent...:) :) :)
@Gowthami Nandigala- Thank you so much...
@Cynthia- Thanks and welcome here:)
@डॉ॰ मोनिका शर्मा- Thanks Monica and one thing I wanted to say from a long time...I love your profile picture, beautiful smile...
@metagravity- Mi, I have read your previous comment so many times and believe me, I laugh every time. In fact, wow to me has become synonymous with...you know what! Thanks for this comment:)
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@KP- Thanks a lot!
@~Serendipity~- Thanks Ayushi...:) :) :)
@Rohit Sareen- If you infringe my copyrights, as a penalty, I want copyrights of your birds picture:) It's too good, Rohit:)
@A grain of sand- Thanks for the encouragement!
@kalpak n.- Thanks:) BTW your latest post is awesome:)
@MyKitchen Flavors-BonAppetit!.- Thank you so so much :)
@swati- Thanks swati:)
@India's no.1 blog- Believe me, I am not at all romantic...And, such a lovely comment. I am so touched...:)
@SUB- That's so sweet Subhrasis, your wife is so lucky:)
@nina- I have beautiful people like you in my life, that's why I write such poems:)
@Kalyan- Thanks dear...
@deeju- Thanks a ton for such a nice comment...:)
@Animesh Ganguly- Thank you so much Animesh:)
@Rachit- Thank you!
@Sudeshna- Thanks dear:)
@~*Lady Fiona*~- I wish too that there are less breakups and more happiness around. Thank you so much...:) You make my day with your beautiful words...
@Arti- Thanks Arti :)
@Sneha Sunny- Thanks a lot Sneha and that's a huge compliment:)
@SprigBlossoms- Thank you and welcome here...
@metagravity- Thanks Mi...:)
@Purba- :) :) :)
@अतुल प्रकाश त्रिवेदी- Even I think so Sir, thank you so much for your kind words...
@Spicy Sweet- Thanks and your comment is so beautiful...
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@Risha Kalra- Awww, thank you so much Risha...Your recent post is really edgy:)
@Kunnu- Thank you Kunal:) :) :)
@vaisakhi- Thanks a lot :)
@TD23- Thanks for appreciating it so nicely:)
@Thousif Raza- Thanks Thousif, love is a divine feeling...
@Neha- Thanks for making me a part of the challenge, will do it soon:)
@Sameera- Thanks Sameera...
@anand- Thanks Anand...
@N.S.Kirti- Thank you!
@NEELKAMAL VAISHNAW- Thanks and will surely visit your blog...
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@Dwiti- Thats beautiful:)
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@Rashmi Nair- Thanks and the song is lovely...
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@The Fallen Poet- Thanks a lot Dear and welcome here!
Beautiful and uncontrived. Amen!
ReplyDeleteonce I read it..I could not stop myself reading it all over again.....
ReplyDeleteI too want to fall in love.....
Awesome.. love it.. :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice...
ReplyDeleteomg...how the hell did i miss these beautiful poems :) beautiful is the word!
ReplyDeleteRomantic!!! Love certainly makes one's life colourful... Liked the way you said it.
ReplyDelete@umashankar- Thanks a ton!
ReplyDelete@Soumyadeep- Thank you and welcome here...
@Pradeep Raj- Thanks Pradeep :)
@Bindu Juneja- Thanks!
@Mithlash- :) :) :)
@Madhusha- Thanks dear, you made my day!
@Nisha- Thanks Nisha:)
Beauuuutiful poem... very beautiful...!!! I had to read it AGAIN! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for a lovely comment Pranita...:)
DeleteI love your poems so much Saru that I was re-reading them and discovered this one which I missed earlier. It is such a lovely poem and for a moment I thought I wanted to be in love again ;)
ReplyDeleteAwww...that's so sweet of you and hope you a better now...:)
Deleteloved these lines "In the twinkling of eyes, in the tapping of feet,In the glass of wine, in the crumbling of bed sheet" brilliant rhyme
ReplyDeleteThank you Alka...:)
Deletebeautiful:)
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Sure and thanks for reading!
Deleteokay m outta praises! itz superbb! :) lucky to have cum here!!
ReplyDeleteAwww...thats so sweet of you!
Deleteawww.. Its so magical :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sonia, falling in love is so magical...:)
DeleteGood one ....I also share the same title for one of my peoms !
ReplyDeleteThanks, I will read yours. Welcome here!
DeleteIn the twinkling of eyes, in the tapping of feet,
ReplyDeletelet’s fall in love... all over again...
My best lines.
Its easy to describe either the grey part or the life-after-love part. but in my opinion you have successfully described the bridging from the grey to the life-after-love part.
Thank you Pratik for such an encouraging comment and welcome here. :)
Deletecmon Saru, I am already in love with you ;)
ReplyDeleteLOL...Thank you :)
Deletethe title is really catchy.nice piece of work admin.keep it up.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
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