My Story
Sugar coated promises for my hungry soul,
And a touch of her soft hair.
My young heart was elated by only these,
In the beginning of our affair.
In the bus, early morning, we used to meet,
Two senseless people baffled by the crowd.
Just to protect us from gazing eyes,
We used to whisper and not speak aloud.
Got married in no time,
She was twenty-two and I was twenty-four.
God gifted us a little princess within a year,
Felt like happiness entered from our front door.
It was 'you', my darling daughter,
Who completed our family portrait.
You inherited the best from both of your parents,
I'm proud, now you're working in a corporate.
You asked me hundred times,
My story and what inspires me to transcend.
Nothing is impossible for a man, who has a dutiful child,
And, whose wife is his best friend?
Overrated thoughts for success but one thing I say strongly,
The truth is behind every successful man there is a family.
Loved the last line!
ReplyDeleteWhat a gr88 piece....a poem for family
ReplyDeleteYou knitted this the fiction way, I loved that Saru di :)
ReplyDeleteI think I'm going to make mom read this :)
Great poem Saru... 200% accept that behind every successful man, there's a family :)
ReplyDeleteThe truth is behind every successful man there is a family.
ReplyDeleteVery True... Nice Thoghts
amen to that thought :)
ReplyDeleteWOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! excellent....
ReplyDeleteGreat thought..very expressive....
loved it...cannot say about children as i don't have one yet, but if your wife is your true friend then impossible is nothing...great one :)
ReplyDeletegreat ......... awesome... excellent job
ReplyDeleteAs always, your dipped-in-sugar-and-coated-with-honey-words bought a sweet smile to my face!
ReplyDeleteHeart touching and a lovely expressive post, Marvelous!
Love, Risha :)
Dutiful daughter and wife as best friend. Every man craves or that. The last line won my heart.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant read!
Wow.. loved it.. very nice..:)
ReplyDeleteDutiful child are friendly wife are true inspirations. No doubt. Well written
ReplyDeleteA life does certainly change so much after kids are in the picture! A part of you and a part of your spouse are in one new being. It feels like a dream after a baby is born. Unreal, but real at the same time.
ReplyDeleteexcellent...as always!!
ReplyDeleteWell written...Gift of a perfect family...compliments...
ReplyDeleteVery Good!
ReplyDeleteThe Good You do,
Comes back to You..
Wow. First time here and impressed.
ReplyDeletevery wordful poetry :)
ReplyDeletelovely
Nothing is impossible for a man, who has a dutiful child,
ReplyDeleteAnd, whose wife is his best friend.
life's truth
nice
nice happy poem
ReplyDeleteso true your concluding thought
Saru,
ReplyDeleteYour poem is a fine piece that narrates the essence of life. I totally agree with the last lines. Simply ecstatic.
Beautiful thoughts, very true too.. Loved it :-)
ReplyDeletevery very very nice poem..:)
ReplyDeleteawesome lines Saru Ji. i feel like quoting your last line from now on. brilliant :)
ReplyDeletevery beautifully written all thru with a very lovely ending!
ReplyDeleteloved it!
wonderful..Loved it <3
ReplyDeletePicture perfect...
ReplyDeleteLike Chintan, I also liked the last line :)
ReplyDeletePicture Perfect.. I think every man desires a family like this!
ReplyDeleteHow wonderfully put!!
This was again a great great read Saru!
Awesome piece :)
Really nice.. a complete story spanning two generations in just one paragraph!!!
ReplyDeleteNice one :)
ReplyDeleteSubtle yet clear narrative quality...loved the last lines:-)
ReplyDeleteWonderful read! Loved the last few lines! :) :)
ReplyDeleteI have never been disappointed when I come over here to read your poetry...
ReplyDeleteNice one!Enjoyed reading it:-) and yes it is the truth the happiness and the success of a man lies with the bond he shares with his family...beautiful creation!
ReplyDeleteawwwww this is so cute i just loved it!
ReplyDeletegreat piece
So much of depth in the poem saru! Loved the composition of every single line :)
ReplyDeleteHow do you manage to go soooo deep and bring out such colorful shades of human emotions using measured words that are just too apt??? Esp the daughter relationship..loved every single word of it...you know your poems are so light...yet so powerful...hats off to you Saru...dont have words for you...will never have.... portraits by the way are never complete without love...:) god bless you and your family...pl convey my regards to all..:))))
ReplyDeleteReading ur poem reminded me these Martin Luther King's words.
ReplyDelete"There is no more Luvly,Friendly and a charming friendship,communion or company than a good marriage".I felt the truth behind these words after reading this post of 'Words'.
Thanks for sharing it.Luv ur blogging!.
Excellent thought....Loved it...
ReplyDeleteLoved it. You are right - dutiful kids and a wife who is a best friend are all a man needs!
ReplyDelete@Chintan- Thanks Chintan, it's the essence of life.
ReplyDelete@Hemant- It is indeed a poem for family and thanks for liking it.
@~Serendipity~- Thanks so much and I hope Aunti likes it too:)
@Anand- Thanks Anand:)
@डॉ॰ मोनिका शर्मा- Thank you Monica!
@Pythoroshan- :)
@induravisingh- Thanks Indu...My brother loved your poem:)
@SUB- Thanks Subhrasis:)
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@Risha Kalra- Awww, you made my day. Thanks Risha:)
@Red Handed- Thanks a ton:)
@KP- Thank you so much!!!
@Hariharan Valady- Thanks a lot Sir:)
@alissa4illustration- Very true, kids are the most important part of our lives...
@Sneha Sunny- Thanks Sneha:)
@Ketan - www.ketansnadar.com- Thanks Ketan and welcome here!
@Being_AC- True Sir and I am glad you liked it.
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@metagravity- Thanks Mi and congrats on your award. Lovely acceptance speech:)
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@Nasnin Nasser- Thank you...
@Lavender- Thanks and last 6 lines are my favorite too...
@Farila- Thanks and means a lot coming from you...
@swati- Thanks Swati and we know who is behind Mohit's success...
@Rosette Princess- Thanks :)
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Beautiful poem. Love the last line!
ReplyDelete♥ very nice ♥
ReplyDeleteNo one can miss you
ReplyDeletemore than your better half
No one will wait for you
more than your little soldier
No one can love you
More than your family
Gowardhan
http://nothinggserious.blogspot.com
beautiful last lines...very very well put :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines! Loved the last line, Saru. It means so much.
ReplyDeleteSuper... Puneet... http://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=72809
ReplyDeletehow do you manage to carve out words so beautifully? You are an artist!
ReplyDeleteGood One!! Like many others loved the last line!
ReplyDeleteHey Saru, this is a lovely poem!! Loved it...
ReplyDelete"The truth is behind every successful man there is a family." awesome! This line deserves to be one among my FB status... with your permission? :)
wow... what a poem and what a great thought!! a whole life story narrated in few lines and very heart touching...
ReplyDeleteAwesome :)
ReplyDeleteNice written. loved it :)..
ReplyDeletefrom da heart.. very nice... last line is toooo gooooddd
ReplyDeleteSuperb...loved the last lines..
ReplyDeleteWow , wonderfully written .
ReplyDeleteLovely piece of art written directly from the heart. My heart definitely skipped a beat while reading the lines
ReplyDelete'Nothing is impossible for a man, who has a dutiful child,
And, whose wife is his best friend.' :)
Nice one.
ReplyDelete@SG- Thanks and welcome here:)
ReplyDelete@amrendra "amar"- Thank you Amar!
@Gowardhan- That's really beautiful...
@aludarm ;- Thanks a lot:)
@Harsha- Thank you Harsha...
@Puneetkumar Pattar- Thanks a ton Puneet!
@Animesh Ganguly- Thanks for such a lovely comment, I'm touched:)
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@Sunil Padiyar- Thanks Sunil but tell me Do friends need permission???:)
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@vertu- Thanks Vertika and I can't access your blog dear, Please check!
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@Deepthi- I'm glad you liked it and welcome here:)
@surya k- Thank you!
Very nice poem, great feelings. "Nothing is impossible for a man, who has a dutiful child,
ReplyDeleteAnd, whose wife is his best friend."
I found ur last 2 lines really awesome..great work!!
Really its true......a family is behind a perfact man.....very sweet poem..
ReplyDeletePicture perfect, beautiful wordplay Saru.
ReplyDeleteIt indeed is the family for all the happiness. Every member contributes.
Beautiful post.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
nice!!! :) keep it up
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeletesuperb.. :)
ReplyDeletenice.. :)
I've been busy.. :(
saw ur comment in my blog in mobile nd got hold of a comp to check ur blog.. :):)
You're a hell of a writerYou're a hell of a writer
ReplyDeletewhat a play of words...lovely indeed! and yes..one can never underestimate the backup of a strong family in the background...:))
ReplyDeletesarah
My pleasure and welcome to my blog as well :)..!!Do provide me with suggestions and comments on improving my writing...
ReplyDeletePoem of many lives. Thanks for sharing those wonderful words of wisdom :)
ReplyDelete@manaskhatri- Thanks Manas...:)
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@Deepthi- Deepthi, you write so beautifully. I might need valuable insights from you...:)
@Kiran @ KiranTarun.com- Thanks Kiran!
Splendid! Beautifully written.
ReplyDeletenice one ! :)
ReplyDeleteThis poem is so full of love and hope. You have started and ended it in great style:)
ReplyDeletestraight from the heart! what beautiful piece
ReplyDeleteIndeed a great compilation. I liked the summary of this beautiful poem which says
ReplyDelete"Overrated thoughts for success but one thing I say strongly,
The truth is behind every successful man there is a family."..:)..Thanks :)
:) well, thanks for that.. and yeah, I shared it on FB along with the link to this post..
ReplyDeletenice one...yes behind every man there is a dutiful child and best friend wife....but one man must not forget what his child wants and what his best friend wants...
ReplyDeletecertainly overrated thoughts
right from start it was about the man only...
for the man to be successful...the best friend and child goes through a numerous compromises...
just my opinion...
Thank you so very much. It really means a lot :)
ReplyDeletelovely lines...beautifully crafted words!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful as ever !
ReplyDelete@Aakash Kokz- Thanks Dear!!!
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@sajeevkmenon- Thank you so much and means a lot coming from you...
@confusedyuppie- Thanks a ton:)
@Nisheeth- Thanks Dear:)
@Sunil Padiyar- Thanks Sunil and please post the final part of the story...
@ZeroCool- You're right...and thanks :)
@Deepthi- :)
@Kalyan- Thank you so much!
@Angel- Thanks Angel:)
Hi Saru! I have sorted out the problem,check again and let me know..
ReplyDeleteWonderful,excellent expression.
ReplyDeleteI am finding no words to praise
your nice presentation.
@vertu- I checked it and all is fine now...:)
ReplyDelete@Rakesh Kumar- Thank you so much Sir, I'm so happy that you liked it.
simple word hiding a profound meaning:) i like:)
ReplyDelete"Two senseless people baffled by crowd.
Just to protect us from gazing eyes,
We used to whisper and not speak aloud." haha brings back some memories:))
@TD23- Happy to know that:) Thanks for liking it dear:)
ReplyDeleteHi Saru i just read your poems.
ReplyDeletegreat work..just impressive keep writing.
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@Manu Rana- Thanks Manu and welcome here:)
ReplyDelete@Ashwini- Can't thank you enough dear:)
ReplyDeleteI WAS SPEECHLESS AFTER READING YOUR POEM. IT IS THE TRUTH WRITTEN BY A TRUE HEART. HATS OFF TO YOU SARU.
ReplyDelete@Latha Vijayakumar- Thanks a ton latha and welcome here:)
ReplyDeleteLoved the post. You definitely have a way with words.
ReplyDeleteKeep 'em coming :)
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RoHiT
dial-a-denial.blogspot.com
A best friend wife and a dutiful child. Man can't ask for anything more. But what is more important and neglected is the sacrifices(don't know if you can call it so) they make for his success.
ReplyDeleteGood one.. Especially
"Nothing is impossible for a man, who has a dutiful child,
And, whose wife is his best friend."
............
The most important thing a father can do for his children is to love their mother.
@RoHiT Iyer- Thanks Rohit and welcome here:)
ReplyDelete@leoPaw- I guess love is the only binding factor in every relationship. Rightly said dear...:)
Good One! A loving family can inspire one to be the best...
ReplyDeleteI loved the portrayal of the ideal family.
Thank you Nisha:)
DeleteNothing is impossible for a man, who has a dutiful child,
ReplyDeleteAnd, whose wife is his best friend.- I loved those lines and the last line ofcourse!! :) It's such an adorable poem a father to daughter straight! WOW Saru ,WOW :)!!
Thank you, I wish my father can read this and Who Am I, Dad?
DeleteXOXOXO
Wonderful Poem....great use of words. Thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThank you, means a lot coming from you...:)
DeleteAwesome Poem, Loved the choice of words :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Deepansh!
DeleteSuperb thoughts.. may our lives really be so Rosy & Peach!! Cheers..
ReplyDeleteCheers to that thought Vineet!!!
DeleteThank you so much for reading :)
excellent... :) beautiful indeed...
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteLoved it.. especially the last line:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteJust amazing!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Amit!
DeleteWonderful Expressions Saru!
ReplyDeleteThank you, lla!
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