You Create Beauty...

By -

After a long tiring day,
When my heart seeks consoling,
In the night,
When my views are strolling,
To make me live,
You create beauty in life.
Sometimes, when you're away,
My skin feels bare.
Cuddling myself with your photo,
I look for you everywhere.
To tell me life is better than it seems,
You create beauty in dreams.
When the world makes me dumb-struck,
And I sit like a neglected art, ground struck.
To tell me not to care afterward,
You create beauty in words.

Comments

  1. AnonymousAugust 10, 2011 at 10:32 AM

    you are so in love :D

    ReplyDelete
  2. Jidhu JoseAugust 10, 2011 at 10:33 AM

    beautiful poem with ur lovely lines

    ReplyDelete
  3. VyankateshAugust 10, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    Very beautiful :)

    ReplyDelete
  4. UnknownAugust 10, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    Emotions..! dripping down..! Good work :)

    ReplyDelete
  5. HarshaAugust 10, 2011 at 11:25 AM

    Awesome..! High on emotions. :)

    ReplyDelete
  6. induravisinghjAugust 10, 2011 at 12:15 PM

    Awesome Saru this is outstanding ....

    ReplyDelete
  7. AngelAugust 10, 2011 at 12:28 PM

    A soulful piece ! Beautiful expression..

    ReplyDelete
  8. Being_ACAugust 10, 2011 at 12:42 PM

    A good promise!
    Unbreakable by distance,
    Unchangeable by time...

    ReplyDelete
  9. KPAugust 10, 2011 at 1:47 PM

    Beauty and love expressed in every word..! very nice..!

    ReplyDelete
  10. UnknownAugust 10, 2011 at 3:21 PM

    When you pen down words like above in here,
    Thinking they gonna reach the one meant for and stay,
    Love rushes in fast and envelopes him on the way,
    Makes him blush and giggle inside with simply no words to say :)

    Beautiful!! :)

    ReplyDelete
  11. Amit CharlesAugust 10, 2011 at 3:23 PM

    "And I sit like a neglect art"

    Good one

    keep it goin;)

    ReplyDelete
  12. swatiAugust 10, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    just wow :-)

    ReplyDelete
  13. NehaAugust 10, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    Super like...

    ReplyDelete
  14. magiceyeAugust 10, 2011 at 10:01 PM

    pining.....

    ReplyDelete
  15. VertuAugust 10, 2011 at 11:02 PM

    awesome...<3

    ReplyDelete
  16. --August 10, 2011 at 11:50 PM

    I really *love* this, Saru! So beautiful! x0x

    ReplyDelete
  17. Santosh BangarAugust 11, 2011 at 12:21 AM

    amazing!!!! words play very important role in our life

    ReplyDelete
  18. AamiAugust 11, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    Nice words... really makes us think abt our loved one, who create beauty in life and in dreams...

    ReplyDelete
  19. Red HandedAugust 11, 2011 at 12:34 AM

    U had me craving for some more lines..lovely!

    ReplyDelete
  20. smiling soulAugust 11, 2011 at 12:56 AM

    wow what a feel saru...wonderful thought!!
    keep smiling always :)

    ReplyDelete
  21. VenkyAugust 11, 2011 at 1:29 AM

    Beautiful!

    ReplyDelete
  22. Realms of fantasy...August 11, 2011 at 1:51 AM

    Deep emotions coming 4m widin...beautiful...:)

    ReplyDelete
  23. shvetilakAugust 11, 2011 at 1:51 AM

    Aah! just love it :)

    ReplyDelete
  24. नीरज द्विवेदीAugust 11, 2011 at 2:33 AM

    Awesome ...

    ReplyDelete
  25. AnonymousAugust 11, 2011 at 2:34 AM

    You create beauty in words, Saru..

    Beautiful :)

    ReplyDelete
  26. AnonymousAugust 11, 2011 at 3:00 AM

    very touching n written beautifully :)

    ReplyDelete
  27. shashi purwarAugust 11, 2011 at 3:58 AM

    very beautiful ....... beauty is everywhere...... in your writing .... in heart .in soul . lovely thought . :)

    ReplyDelete
  28. AnonymousAugust 11, 2011 at 4:23 AM

    I think for every poem, the basic idea first forms in one or two lines and those one or two lines carry the entire philosophy or weight of the poem. What the poet does is, spreading the basic idea like a bird spreads its wings, to may it fly.

    "To tell me life is better than it seems,
    you create beauty in dreams"

    These are fine lines and perhaps, the basic idea for this poem might have been formed in these two lines, since they appear to be carrying the entire weight of the poem.

    "you create beauty in dreams"

    To me it somehow appeared, this line would have been fuller, had it been like this

    "you create beauty in my dreams"

    ReplyDelete
  29. Sunil PadiyarAugust 11, 2011 at 4:34 AM

    Soulful magic with words.. yet again.. :) Loved it..

    ReplyDelete
  30. chitraAugust 11, 2011 at 5:05 AM

    very nice poem.....:)

    ReplyDelete
  31. Suresh KumarAugust 11, 2011 at 5:28 AM

    one of the effective definition of love with true sentiments...I think!!!
    welcome to my blog..

    ReplyDelete
  32. Deepa GopalAugust 11, 2011 at 7:02 AM

    The last 6 lines Saru...I read and reread several times....it's just Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love the feel of the poem...Beautifully expressed! (I mean more than that:))

    ReplyDelete
  33. UnknownAugust 11, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    Lovely Poem Saru..you are an amazing writer :)

    ReplyDelete
  34. UnknownAugust 11, 2011 at 10:03 AM

    supa...the power of love!

    ReplyDelete
  35. Blasphemous AestheteAugust 11, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    Beautiful :)
    The loved sure creates the worlds beautiful, the real world when he/she's around, and when they are out of sight, the dream world has spring with their fresh blooming thoughts.

    Very nice post.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

    ReplyDelete
  36. Spiritual SherpaAugust 11, 2011 at 10:59 AM

    You create beauty in dreams....that's the best part...:)

    ReplyDelete
  37. TeamgsquareAugust 11, 2011 at 11:13 AM

    Wonderful

    ReplyDelete
  38. डॉ. मोनिका शर्मा August 11, 2011 at 12:23 PM

    Beautiful Creation with a very different thought....

    ReplyDelete
  39. Kiran @ KiranTarun.comAugust 11, 2011 at 12:26 PM

    Beautiful poem, and thanks for dropping into my blog :)

    ReplyDelete
  40. A FineappleAugust 11, 2011 at 12:30 PM

    "To tell me not to care afterwards,
    You create beauty in words"

    I'm speechless.. its so so so lovely.. :)

    ReplyDelete
  41. Subhrashis AdhikariAugust 11, 2011 at 1:33 PM

    wow...awesome...life is beautiful with love :)

    ReplyDelete
  42. AnandAugust 11, 2011 at 1:51 PM

    wow.. u must be in great love to write these poems.. enjoyed it :)

    ReplyDelete
  43. SoumyaAugust 11, 2011 at 1:55 PM

    You're good. Great infact :)

    Cheers!

    ReplyDelete
  44. Saru SinghalAugust 11, 2011 at 3:58 PM

    @Chintan- I was when I wrote this poem years ago...:)

    @Jidhu Jose- Thanks Jidhu...:)

    @Vyankatesh- Thanks a lot dear.

    @aerosum- Thanks and welcome here...:)

    @Harsha- Thanks Harsha:)

    @Ram Pyari- :) :) :)

    @induravisinghj- Thanks Indu:)

    @Angel- Thanks Angel, I wanted to title it 'Angel' earlier...:)

    @Being_AC- Beautiful expression...

    @KP- Thanks for such a nice comment...

    @Risha Kalra- Risha, you are writing masterpieces these days...:)

    @Amit Charles- Thank you Amit:)

    @swati- I am so thankful to you, you take out of your busy schedule and each of my post...:)

    @Neha- Thanks a lot Neha.

    @magiceye- :)

    @vertu- Thanks a ton Vertika...

    @~*Lady Fiona*~- Thank a lot, it's very inspiring to see your beautiful comments.

    @Santosh Bangar- They do and thanks :)

    @Sivapaurnami- Thanks and welcome...

    @Red Handed- Thanks a ton...

    @sowmya- Thanks Sowmya...:)

    @Venky- Thanks...

    @Realms of fantasy- Thanks a lot dear... I really felt like this when I wrote this poem.

    @shveta- Thank you Shveta:)

    @Neeraj Dwivedi- Thank you!!!

    @metagravity- Thanks Mi...:)

    @some unspoken words- Thanks Dear...

    @sapne-shashi.blogspot.com- Thanks Shashi for such a wonderful comment.

    @venkat.b.rao- You are right about the theme. Will keep your advice in mind for my next creations. Thanks...:)

    @Sunil Padiyar- Thanks Sunil, loved your recent hindi poem...

    @chitra- Thanks Chitra:)

    @Suresh Kumar- Thanks Suresh...

    @ShutterbugKevin- Thanks a lot :)

    @Rohit Sareen- Thanks Rohit:)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete- Love is the most beautiful feeling and being in love is superlative... Thanks...

    @India's no.1 blog- Oh now I know, where you get ideas for HP, in your dreams. LOL, thats the only word you saw...:) Thanks...

    @Team G Square- Thank you:)

    @डॉ॰ मोनिका शर्मा- Thanks Monica...

    @Kiran @ KiranTarun.com- Thanks and will be dropping more often to get inspired from your beautiful clicks...

    @Arpitha Holla- Thanks Arpita, my favorite lines from this poem. My husband said a very beautiful thing which inspired me to write these lines.

    @SUB- Thank a lot Subhrasis...

    @Anand- Yeah I was and thanks Anand for admiring it...

    @Soumya- Thanks a lot dear:)

    ReplyDelete
  45. N.S.KirtiAugust 11, 2011 at 9:09 PM

    wow... this is so wonderfully magical!! lovely poem. :)

    ReplyDelete
  46. AnonymousAugust 12, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    Beautiful Poem
    "Sometimes, when you're away,
    My skin feels bare.
    Cuddling myself with your photo, "
    I loved these lines...They are so...cute, well

    ReplyDelete
  47. MyKitchen Flavors-BonAppetit!.August 12, 2011 at 5:06 AM

    Dear Saru!,This one is a beauty.Luv it!.

    ReplyDelete
  48. Raj @ Blogging GuideAugust 12, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    so much of love left unspoken... ;)

    ReplyDelete
  49. UnknownAugust 12, 2011 at 9:31 AM

    Beautiful...

    ReplyDelete
  50. AnonymousAugust 12, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    Seriously,You have created beauty in in your words! Awesome :)

    ReplyDelete
  51. ♥ BrajaAugust 12, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    Nicely done :)

    ReplyDelete
  52. Nasnin NasserAugust 12, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    "When the world makes me dumb-struck,
    And I sit like a neglect art, ground struck."....that was profound! Good one dear...keep going:-)

    ReplyDelete
  53. Richa SonpatkiAugust 12, 2011 at 11:51 AM

    Hi there...your work seems to be pretty deep and I do appreciate the simplicity of your words. Well written!

    ReplyDelete
  54. Dan NoirAugust 12, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    A Lot Like Tishani Doshi, somehow...

    ReplyDelete
  55. AnonymousAugust 12, 2011 at 3:30 PM

    This poem is full of emotions and has a unique interprttation of life...Really nice.

    ReplyDelete
  56. Saru SinghalAugust 12, 2011 at 4:07 PM

    @N.S.Kirti- Thanks a ton!

    @slaith.com- I am happy to know that you like this one. Thanks...:)

    @amrendra "amar"- Thanks :)

    @Sujatha Sathya- Thanks, I have placed you permanently on my blog...:)

    @MyKitchen Flavors-BonAppetit!- Thanks, I am glad!

    @Raj @ Blogging Guide- :)

    @Vikram- Thanks Vikram...

    @My Soul's Journey- Thanks for such a nice comment:)

    @♥ Braja- Thank You!!!

    @Richa- Thanks Richa...

    @Dan Noir- I checked her work after your comment and she looks outstanding. So, I will take as a compliment...:)

    @manaskhatri- Thanks Manas:)

    ReplyDelete
  57. AyushiAugust 12, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    I gave you an award here :)

    http://littlemomentsofbliss.blogspot.com/p/once-upon-time-in-awardville.html

    Loved this :)

    YOU actually create beauty :)

    ReplyDelete
  58. NVSAugust 13, 2011 at 1:24 AM

    beautiful......living is being together!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  59. PriAugust 13, 2011 at 3:33 AM

    ahhh..the power of love

    beautiful lines!!! :)

    ReplyDelete
  60. SameeraAugust 13, 2011 at 3:41 AM

    Very nice!! Left with a warm fuzzy feeling. :)

    ReplyDelete
  61. CharuAugust 13, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    Lovely poem! The italicised lines are all great :) Can imagine the scene.
    Take care and do keep writing...

    ReplyDelete
  62. KalyanAugust 13, 2011 at 6:53 AM

    nice lines... beautifully crafted words to express the ecstasy!

    ReplyDelete
  63. Ankit pandeyAugust 13, 2011 at 7:20 AM

    Very,very,very..... Nice post,Thanks.

    ReplyDelete
  64. Bengts fotobloggAugust 13, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    Very nice, great blog.

    ReplyDelete
  65. Aakash KokzAugust 13, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    Very deep, beautifully written ..

    ReplyDelete
  66. An Apel a DayAugust 13, 2011 at 11:56 AM

    It is interesting how people can impact just through thoughts.

    Very nicely written.

    ReplyDelete
  67. Vijay MenonAugust 13, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    beautiful :)

    ReplyDelete
  68. Sunil KumarAugust 13, 2011 at 1:10 PM

    just love it :)

    ReplyDelete
  69. Pakistani TeenagerAugust 13, 2011 at 4:36 PM

    wow this is just beautiful
    Loved it
    Keep writing =) <3

    ReplyDelete
  70. Chapters From My LifeAugust 14, 2011 at 3:02 AM

    Just adorable... I love the line about the beauty created in dreams. Makes one feel like falling in love ;)

    ReplyDelete
  71. Saru SinghalAugust 14, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    @~Serendipity~- Thanks a lot for the award and thanks again for such a beautiful comment.:)

    @Naveen S- It is indeed, thanks a lot!

    @pri- Thanks :)

    @Sameera- Thanks a ton...

    @Charu- Thanks Charu, that's so sweet of you...:)

    @Kalyan- Thanks for appreciating it, dear:)

    @Ankit pandey- Thanks and welcome here!

    @Bengts fotoblogg- Thank you so much!

    @Aakash Kokz- Thanks Aakash:)

    @alissa4illustration- Thanks for such lovely words:)

    @Vijay Menon- Thanks Vijay...

    @Sunil Kumar- Thank you so much Sunil...

    @Rosette Princess- Thanks a lot!!!

    @Farila- Thank you so much...

    ReplyDelete
  72. prathima gangadharAugust 14, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    Honey dipped words! sweet to hear,deep to think.

    ReplyDelete
  73. Adsense PerformanceAugust 14, 2011 at 6:01 PM

    Dear friends!
    Sending you this present with my heart and with that you'll be happy in fullest measure. May the happinest things alway happen to you.

    ReplyDelete
  74. rafatAugust 15, 2011 at 4:56 AM

    beautiful and heart touching poem.may god bless you with many many better poems .thanks

    ReplyDelete
  75. Debanish AchomAugust 15, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    Liked it so much!

    ReplyDelete
  76. Saru SinghalAugust 15, 2011 at 1:53 PM

    @Prathi- Thanks for such a beautiful comment!

    @Adsense Performance- Thank you so much:)

    @rafat- Thanks dear and welcome here!

    @Debanish Achom- Thanks a ton...

    ReplyDelete
  77. Saru SinghalAugust 15, 2011 at 3:31 PM

    @Smita- Thanks Dear and welcome here!!!

    ReplyDelete
  78. Stuti DhyaniAugust 18, 2011 at 2:18 AM

    and in all shades of red,green and blue,
    i never fail to find you,
    at a ceratin distance or in dear proximity,
    in moments rare with tears strewn...

    ReplyDelete
  79. Saru SinghalAugust 18, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    @A grain of sand- Such beautiful words, be it colors or distance, the expression you used it marvelous. LOVELY...

    ReplyDelete
  80. Ranjeet ParadkarAugust 29, 2011 at 9:03 AM

    Wonderful words...!!
    I couldnt keep myself from translating this to Marathi -

    एक सरता न सरणारा दिवस
    कसाबसा ढकलून झाल्यावर
    जेव्हा मनास कुणी तरी गोंजारावंसं वाटतं
    जेव्हा सगळं जगच भरकटल्यासारखं भासतं
    तेव्हा जगण्याची उमेद देण्यासाठी
    तू जीवनातलं सौंदर्य दाखवतोस

    कधी तरी तू जवळ नसताना
    बोचरं एकटेपण साहताना
    तुझ्या फोटोला कवटाळताना
    भिरभिरती नजर तुला शोधत असते
    ती अगतिकतेची क्षणिकता संपवण्यासाठी
    तू स्वप्नातलं सौंदर्य दाखवतोस

    ही दुनिया जेव्हा मला हतबुद्ध करते
    आणि मी एखाद्या नाकारलेल्या निर्मितीसारखी हताश बनते
    सगळी कटुता भुलवण्यासाठी
    तू शब्दांतलं सौंदर्य दाखवतोस...


    ....रसप....
    २९ ऑगस्ट २०११

    If you permit, I will publish this poem with your english poem (with your name) on my blog and on my groups on Orkut & FB.

    Thanks in advance..!

    Ranjeet Paradkar

    ReplyDelete
  81. Saru SinghalAugust 29, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    @रणजित पराडकर- It will be an honor for me, thank you...

    @Ashwini- You have made my day with your wonderful comments:)

    ReplyDelete
  82. Rajendra RaikwarNovember 16, 2011 at 6:12 AM

    hmm , nice one ..

    ReplyDelete
  83. Vishal BheerooDecember 14, 2015 at 9:09 AM

    Beauty and love in words:)

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Bricks, brickbats, applause - say it in comments!

Popular posts from this blog

Rewind - September 2023

By -
 I wrote the following in September. Sometimes, I feel I will forget the art of writing couplets because I am not writing at all this year. I strongly believe you have to practice to hone your craft. And I am not doing that. Perhaps I schedule a time to write a poem. Or I need better time management skills. Date Published 09/05/2023 मुझे उसके जाने का इतना अफ़सोस नहीं हुआ  जितना इस बात का कि इतने सालों तक उसे रहने ही क्यों दिया  Love, Saru
Read more

यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं

By -
Image
फ़ुर्सत में मिलना मुझसे यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं  सिर्फ़ हाल चाल नहीं पूछना बातें करनी है तुमसे कई देखना है तुम्हें एक टक शिकवे करने है तुमसे कई हज़ार जब नाराज़ हुए थे तुम मुझसे और जब छेड़ा था मुझे बीच बाज़ार चवन्नी-अठन्नी सा ढोंग मत करना मान लेना मेरे हर कहे को सुबकियाँ से काम मत चलाना बेहने देना ग़र आँसू बेहे तो  सख़्त होने का दिखावा छोड़ आना नुक्कड़ वाले बनिये की दुकान पे सिद्दत से एक बार बोल देना  कि गलती होती है इंसान से तुम मुझे छोड़ गए उसका तुम्हें कभी अफ़सोस हुआ है क्या मैं नहीं तुमसे पूछूँगी  कि मेरे बाद मेरी तरह किसी को छुआ है क्या  ना मैं इस युग की मीरा हूँ  ना हो तुम मेरे घनश्याम बस इश्क़ है तुमसे बेपन्नह मुझे बाक़ी सब कुछ है मुझमें आम  तुम भी सोचते होगे ना  यह तीली सा इश्क़, ज्वालामुखी कब हुआ यूँ समझ लो तुम्हारे जाने के बाद तुम्हारे ख़याल ने दिन में 100 बार मुझे छुआ अब गणित में तो तुम अव्वल हो हिसाब लगा ही लोगे पर सोच के आना जनाब  पिछले 15 सालों का हिसाब कैसे दोगे  तो आना बस फ़ुरसत में  यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं  सिर्फ़ हाल चाल नहीं पूछना बातें करनी है तुमसे कई
Read more

I Am Not Alone

By -
Image
Last year blessed me, He walked silently into my life. It was Love, That took me in its stride. One evening we walked holding hands, Then, I told him what I felt in heart. He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts. To bring the parts together, We fought with the world and tied the knot. Being one soul, Gave life a whole new spot. Chirping birds, floating clouds, Nature conspired for us. Always swimming against the tide, Life was in an adrenaline rush. This year cursed me, He walked silently out of my life. It was Death, That took him in its stride.       Yesterday his soul was saying, Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on. He will stay and admire me, Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn. Image Source - Here
Read more