Last year blessed me, He walked silently into my life. It was Love, That took me in its stride. One evening we walked holding hands, Then, I told him what I felt in heart. He said we were one soul, Who were living in parts. To bring the parts together, We fought with the world and tied the knot. Being one soul, Gave life a whole new spot. Chirping birds, floating clouds, Nature conspired for us. Always swimming against the tide, Life was in an adrenaline rush. This year cursed me, He walked silently out of my life. It was Death, That took him in its stride. Yesterday his soul was saying, Fearing memories will fade, he can’t move on. He will stay and admire me, Standing always by my side from dusk to dawn. Image Source - Here
Beautiful post, liked the new look of the blog :)
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ReplyDeletebeautiful pic to go with start of the affair
ReplyDeletethe pic and the words ...just superb...
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hahaha...lovely! an excuse enough to be light and happy,anything for that!
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Oh, how wonderful! And the picture is perfect to the text. You are goood:-))
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ReplyDeleteThe pic tells it all.Rhythmicly worded poem.Luv it.
ReplyDeleteSaru! I can assure you that this will be an affair to remember!! Lovely lines and pic to go with it
ReplyDeleteAll this is happening, in the beginning of my affair... liked it very much:)
ReplyDeleteLovely words as always! And the picture is so apt and brings out the meaning superbly, just like your words :)
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ReplyDeleteTake care and keep writing.....
iterestingpost with cute pic
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I was reading..
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i don't know why ;)
Once again the beauty of your words touched my heart !
I like your new template,nothing dynamic but so organised with positive vibes :)
A love feeling...indescribable ! As always exceptional post. BTW , i copied this pic in my blog and Thank you !
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ReplyDeletei am relying heavily on horoscopes these days...saru i like the new look of the blog :)
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I am in Love, Saru...What a wonderful poem... 'Ever lived a day with a shadow of hope,
ReplyDeleteAfter reading few lines in your horoscope'
how totally simple, natural and somthing that everyone can relate to..
I am really happy today..u made my day!!
Nice :) Love the new template...simple and perfect:)
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wonderful lines and beautiful template.. :)
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Love the new look of your blog...look so classy and elegant! Just like this post...and the picture is damn suiting!
ReplyDeleteNice beginning of affair, together with lucid and pleasant atmosphere... :)
ReplyDelete"In the drop of rain your 'self' belongs." Loved this in particular.
ReplyDeleteSomething very nice about the short poems - they the tug the heart. :)
Wishing you a good week ahead!
Now..who wouldn't want to be in love..with someone who can express it so beautifully.. :) :D
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Sweet ...Very Sweet....
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ReplyDeleteAh - the excitement and beauty of new love! Fabulous writing.
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ReplyDeleteTouching hearts of people with your words.. thats what you surely must be doing.
Awww, you remind me "Love is beautiful". I must tell you that you're so awesome when it comes to spreading love in the air.
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now this made me smile. Good work Saru. You have always proved me that you are an awesome poet.. and I agree
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"Feet tap with mist of fragrance in the air,All this is happening, in the beginning of my affair."
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the pen filled with lot of love and scribbling something with keep our beloved one in our mind is a poem.. u proved that...
ReplyDeleteThat's the advantage of falling in love; I think the girl is enjoying her affair with this 'Loverman'. My advanced regards for their future marriage.
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Reading this post made me happy. Also made me want to get wet in the rain and hols hands with someone special.. But let's not get carried away Zeba
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Wonderfully written.. :-)
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cute post filled with lots of love in the pen.loved it
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ReplyDeleteThe beginning of an affair is so different..people walk on cloud nine. You have captured the feelings well. Reminded me of the Kuch Tu Hua hai song from Shahrukh movie "Kal ho na ho"
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Hello.
ReplyDeleteIt's easy at the beginning of an affair. The hard part is maintaining the love.
Very nicely penned & your image fits a person in love perfectly.
Thanks for sharing & for commenting on my latest post:
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Nice Lines...
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*SMILES* .. refreshing :) Nice one saru jee.. as always. And yeah, liked your new blog design.. (Sorry, I saw it today, couldn't read blogs since few days... )
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First time here.. I love your words.. Beautiful poem and if I have to mention then 5 and 6th line are too good.. Love it..
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Yea! 'We are in love' of your Words as reflected through the calender of 84 pages comments..
Best of luck Saru.
Atanu
short sweet lines to cherish
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Loved the last 3 lines. Beautiful poem Saru :)
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good..interesting..
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Wow!!! the way you crafted the very first part of every love-story, is jus awesome !!! So wht's nex...Does the aroma still continue or.....
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done!
@Veby- It does continue...:) Thanks for a lovely comment:)
ReplyDeleteI loved it...Nicely done. No word is a filler in this poem. Fantastic write. Thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThank you Shamsud, means a lot coming from you!
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