Perplexed

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Tipsy because of weather, my heart is on mindless race.
Which one to admire more,
The tresses caressing your cheek or your lovely face.


Comments

  1. magiceyeOctober 20, 2011 at 11:05 AM

    brilliant!
    beautifully crisp

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  2. RahulOctober 20, 2011 at 11:15 AM

    i wud go for the face...but if it's about love for Dove hair care,I guess I can settle for the tresses as well...:-D

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  3. MyKitchen Flavors-BonAppetit!.October 20, 2011 at 11:16 AM

    Impressive and wonderful Dear.Luv it

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  4. Bikramjit Singh MannOctober 20, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    BOTH i would say :)

    Bikram's

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  5. äмän ♥October 20, 2011 at 11:52 AM

    Nice :)
    xx

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  6. HarshaOctober 20, 2011 at 11:53 AM

    Haha..that was so lovely, Saru. :):) And the image is so perfect for your lines.

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  7. FirstTimeMotherOctober 20, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    aahaa ! really nice..
    Its going with the lovely face :D

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  8. Pooja AbhayOctober 20, 2011 at 12:21 PM

    Awwwww..so nice..I wish someone would say the same to me someday but I doubt it because I myself know that my hair is much much better than my face:)

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  9. केवल रामOctober 20, 2011 at 12:23 PM

    Really Very Nice ...!

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  10. AnandOctober 20, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    aahh.. someone is on a romantic race... beautiful Saruu!! :) so sharp feelings and a lovely pic! :)

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  11. Rakesh KumarOctober 20, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    What should I say Saru?
    I feel you are always excellent.
    Thanks for this nice post.

    Find time to visit my blog.please.

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  12. Deepak DoddamaniOctober 20, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    That was naughty yet cute expression..
    Saru,it's really sweet n short poem :)

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  13. Nasnin NasserOctober 20, 2011 at 12:42 PM

    Exquisite!!

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  14. SameeraOctober 20, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    I love how this short poems express so much in so few words.

    Tipsy because of the weather...Lovely! :)

    Wishing you a warm day!

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  15. Red HandedOctober 20, 2011 at 1:24 PM

    I wish someone actually said those lines out loud to me :(
    How beautifully u express!

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  16. Shilpa MudigantiOctober 20, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    Oh wow! this is one of the most romantic pieces I have ever read! I loved it, Saru! You are so talented!

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  17. TeamgsquareOctober 20, 2011 at 1:35 PM

    Superb .

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  18. cloud nineOctober 20, 2011 at 1:57 PM

    Thats ossome! Sweet and crisp...Btw, the picture is lovely, it complements the read:))

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  19. SOctober 20, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    This is soulful :)

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  20. Atanu ChatterjeeOctober 20, 2011 at 2:53 PM

    Creditably! converted to a 4D image...
    The last line made it 3D, while prefix lines denotes extra dimension of timing..:)
    Now it appeals perpetual..Good work Saru:)

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  21. NehaOctober 20, 2011 at 3:09 PM

    Lovely...

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  22. The PoetOctober 20, 2011 at 3:10 PM

    Hello.
    Beautiful expressions of love are like food for the soul.

    Perfect imagery Saru.
    Thanks for sharing & for your visit/comment. Much appreciated.

    The Sweet Voice Of Love

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  23. TaniaOctober 20, 2011 at 3:35 PM

    Just L♥vely:-)

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  24. RajOctober 20, 2011 at 4:01 PM

    You know how to create magic in just a minute! Exquisite as usual. :)

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  25. SuKupedia ™ :) :)October 20, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    crispy sweet :) :)

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  26. An Apel a DayOctober 20, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    I feel this way lately, tipsy from the weather!!!

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  27. Akshay Kumar GOctober 20, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    Short and Sweet :) Love it <3

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  28. --October 20, 2011 at 7:01 PM

    Lovely! :)

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  29. Rahul BhatiaOctober 20, 2011 at 7:04 PM

    Short n sweet!

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  30. sriramnivasOctober 20, 2011 at 9:06 PM

    Every romantic male needs to be good in poetry to woo thir sweet hearts. So, sweethearts never get compromised by these soothing lines. Make them work hard to win ur invaluable love.
    'Short and crisp' lines and thanx for sharing.

    From: sriramnivas.wordpress.com

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  31. Writing BeeOctober 20, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    Maybe because I am in the worst of moods right now, it brought tears into my eyes!! Soulful as always..

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  32. Anshul GautamOctober 20, 2011 at 11:26 PM

    beautiful & sweet short compose. :)

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  33. BGTOctober 21, 2011 at 12:08 AM

    Short & Sweet !!

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  34. kalpak n.October 21, 2011 at 12:58 AM

    if i cud just produce stuff like u, i'd be one chick magnet yaar. ur too good :)

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  35. induravisinghjOctober 21, 2011 at 1:07 AM

    wow!!!!!!!!!beautiful.....

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  36. Stuti DhyaniOctober 21, 2011 at 1:10 AM

    in love you are with life!..thats simple, short and sweet...the weather,ahh.tickels many feelings..but so does the long tresses :D
    wonderful read, as ever!

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  37. KPOctober 21, 2011 at 1:19 AM

    Crisp and beautiful!

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  38. Pakistani TeenagerOctober 21, 2011 at 2:54 AM

    Beautiful :)

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  39. UnknownOctober 21, 2011 at 3:07 AM

    wanted a lil more... but the lines and pic put together are simply lovely!

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  40. AnonymousOctober 21, 2011 at 3:15 AM

    Tresses :-)

    Women can so relate to this....a very intimate moment captured in fewer words...

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  41. Chandra81October 21, 2011 at 6:18 AM

    Lovely :-)

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  42. Sahana RaoOctober 21, 2011 at 6:20 AM

    Whattay confusion! Super!

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  43. Spiritual SherpaOctober 21, 2011 at 6:31 AM

    Indeed a delightful dilemma :)

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  44. KunalOctober 21, 2011 at 9:00 AM

    The tresses may be beautiful, The face so lovely.
    But that is all external.
    I would peek in to her heart. Through her eye.
    There the real beauty lies. Which is eternal.

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  45. ShaifaliOctober 21, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    I am curious..when you wrote it? and how and why?

    :-)

    its beautiful indeed.

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  46. Subhrashis AdhikariOctober 21, 2011 at 9:38 AM

    brilliant...short but sweet :)

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  47. KittyOctober 21, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    Short and sweet with a pinch of naughtiness :)
    saru I would love to see a haiku from you..as you are good with few words too! :)

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  48. AnonymousOctober 21, 2011 at 1:20 PM

    Charming
    Much said in few words

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  49. smOctober 21, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    nice poem

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  50. SwapnaOctober 22, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    Lovely!!!

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  51. Chetan MaheshwariOctober 22, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    wow...cute

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  52. UnknownOctober 22, 2011 at 2:10 PM

    Beauty!

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  53. UnknownOctober 22, 2011 at 2:10 PM

    You have me wanting for more of such posts,

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  54. VyankateshOctober 23, 2011 at 2:01 AM

    Beautiful and full of love!!

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  55. umashankarOctober 23, 2011 at 2:52 AM

    I see you are a celebrity already! I had a tough time scrolling down to find a place for my thoughts and by the time I reached here I forgot what it was I wanted to say!

    But you thoroughly deserve the accolades. I get sick of the crowd writing contrived rhymes and using words, unaware of the connotations. Your poetry sounds genuine, emanating right from the heart. Carry on, poetess!

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  56. சேகர்October 23, 2011 at 3:03 AM

    sweet and short.. but feel...

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  57. Mr.JovitaOctober 23, 2011 at 3:04 AM

    ive been wanting to write a 3 liner.. cudn yet.. well done!! :)

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  58. AnonymousOctober 23, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    Wonderful rhythm and feeling in this one.

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  59. kranthiOctober 23, 2011 at 11:26 AM

    a great romantic poet is there in you definetely.show ur love infinite to the world

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  60. Thousif RazaOctober 23, 2011 at 2:23 PM

    why cant we have both???... YAYYYYYYYYYYY :P... sorry internet meme's have taken a toll on me :)... but i so love the thought and the pic too :). They are lovely :) the words are so soulful. Love them :)

    Take care and keep writing..........

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  61. Saru SinghalOctober 23, 2011 at 11:28 PM

    @magiceye- Thank you Deepak Sir:)

    @Rahul- Thank you Rahul!

    @MyKitchen Flavors-BonAppetit!.- Thanks a lot Dear.

    @Bikramjit Singh Mann- Great way to win her:)

    @äмän ♥- Thank you Aman!

    @Harsha- Thanks a lot Harsha:)

    @Reicha Ahluwalia- Your pick Reicha...:)

    @Pooja Sridhar- It's so good to have lovely hair...Thanks for the comment Pooja...

    @केवल राम :- Thanks.

    @Anand- Thanks a ton Anand:)

    @Rakesh Kumar- Thank you so much Sir...

    @deepbaazigar- Thanks Deepak for liking it!

    @Nasnin Nasser- Thanks a lot dear...

    @Sameera- Thanks for a warming comment Sam:)

    @Red Handed- Somebody would... :) :) :)

    @Mehak- Thank you!

    @Shilpa- Thank you Shilpa for such a beautiful comment:)

    @Team G Square- Thanks...

    @cloud nine- Thank you dear!

    @S- Thank you!!!

    @Being_AC- Thank you so much Sir:)

    @Neha- Thanks Neha...

    @Andy- Thank you Andy!

    @Spiderdama- Thanks Tania:)

    @Raj- Thank you Raj for a lovely comment...

    @SuKupedia :) :)- Sweet like your cake...:)

    @alissa4illustration- Weather is great these days:)

    @AKSHAY KUMAR G- Thanks Dear:)

    @Lady*♥*Fiona- Thank you so much Dear...

    @Rahul Bhatia- Thanks Sir!

    @sriramnivas- I agree on your take...thanks!

    @The life-a-holic- :) :) :) Smiles for you Deepthi...

    @ANSHUL GAUTAM- Thank you!

    @Binu Thomas- Thanks Binu.

    @kalpak n.- Thank you Sir...:)

    @induravisinghj- Thanks:)

    @A grain of sand- Thank you Stuti...

    @KP- Thanks!

    @Rosette Princess- Loved your recent post dear...Awesome!

    @Rohit Sareen- I wish to write more but little busy these days. Thanks for the comment!

    @TheBluntBlogger- Thank you Chintan...:)

    @Chandra81- Thank you:) :) :)

    @Sahana Rao- Indeed...:)

    @India's no.1 blog- :)

    @Kunal- Beautiful lines Kunal...

    @Shaifali- I wrote it a night before posting and it just came to my mind...Hope that answers your questions:)

    @SUB- Thank you...

    @Kitty- Thank you Kitty, will try to write it!

    @matheikal- Thank you Sir!

    @sm- Thanks.

    @Swapna- Thanks...

    @Chetan- Thank you Chetan!

    @Animesh Ganguly- Thank you Animesh...

    @Vyankatesh- Thanks a lot!

    @umashankar- I'm not a celebrity, just blessed with beautiful people. Thanks for a heart warming comment...

    @சேகர்- Thank you!

    @Mr.Jovita- Thanks:)

    @Sridhar- Thank you Sridhar...

    @ladyfi- Thank you Dear:)

    @kranthi- Thank you kranthi:)

    @Thousif Raza- Thank you Thousif and thank God for your recent post...Will read it soon...:)

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  62. PurbaOctober 23, 2011 at 11:44 PM

    Why not admire both :)

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  63. MithlashOctober 24, 2011 at 12:06 AM

    Liked it:)

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  64. ArtiOctober 24, 2011 at 2:52 AM

    Touching it all in a few words... Fantastic!!

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  65. Neeraj KumarOctober 24, 2011 at 4:43 AM

    The tresses caressing your cheek or your lovely face.

    What a wonderful Dilemma!

    Just lovely as the tresses and the cheeks

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  66. UnknownOctober 24, 2011 at 6:33 AM

    The last line took my breath away!
    I can't really tell you how beautiful this made me feel :)

    Love, ~Moonlight~

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  67. joshi danielOctober 24, 2011 at 7:39 AM

    interesting and confused :p

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  68. Kiran @ KiranTarun.comOctober 24, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    Simple yet it takes one's breath away :)

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  69. AnonymousOctober 25, 2011 at 2:34 PM

    Fantabulous is the word :)

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  70. The Solitary WriterOctober 27, 2011 at 10:56 AM

    Saru Mam - this is really interesting. The way the last line goes...hats of to you. stay blessed

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  71. Aakash @ Love poemsOctober 28, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    Heart touching, super likes :-)

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  72. VertuOctober 28, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    Very Beautiful lines.

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  73. Ruchi JainOctober 29, 2011 at 6:46 AM

    romantic one...

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  74. AnuradhaOctober 30, 2011 at 1:16 AM

    three lines and so much meaning! too good!

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  75. pramodOctober 31, 2011 at 9:35 AM

    what a brilliant expensive words chosen, best wishes.
    I am feeling like a nut, having written 3000 words,

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  76. Bindu JunejaNovember 1, 2011 at 1:11 AM

    Sometimes lesser words create more magic :-)

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  77. Defiant PrincessNovember 4, 2011 at 10:18 AM

    Oh my god, Short and SWEETER!
    :)

    check out my entry too, http://khanvibes.blogspot.com/2011/11/even-hair-has-life.html
    xoxo

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  78. Someone is SpecialNovember 4, 2011 at 5:32 PM

    both.... Saru.. beautiful post...

    Someone is Special

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  79. chitraNovember 4, 2011 at 9:16 PM

    Superb as usual saru..:)

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  80. SampathNovember 5, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    very lovely quotes..
    My good wishes..
    Hope u will promote my post "The Girl i loved"
    http://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=88938
    Plz promote it :)

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  81. bemoneyawareNovember 6, 2011 at 11:25 PM

    Are you sure the reason for tipsy was just the weather :-). You pack a punch in few words!

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  82. Sunil PadiyarNovember 22, 2011 at 1:43 AM

    Well, I would say - both :) Nice quotes..

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  83. AnonymousNovember 23, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    very beautifu and romantic expressions

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  84. JaganDecember 9, 2011 at 2:31 PM

    Brilliant quote.

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  85. Positive ThinkingDecember 9, 2011 at 2:32 PM

    Very Nice quote.

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  86. Saru SinghalDecember 12, 2011 at 2:00 PM

    @Purba- Sure:)

    @Mithlash- Thanks Mithlash...

    @Arti- Thank you Arti!

    @Neeraj Kumar- Thank you Neeraj...:)

    @~Moonlight~- Thank you so much dear and welcome here...

    @joshi daniel- Ought to be, choice is so difficult...:)

    @Kiran @ KiranTarun.com- Thank you Kiran:)

    @--- Bagya ---- Thanks:)

    @The Solitary Writer- Thank you dear:)

    @Aakash @ Love poems- Thank you so much Aakash...

    @vertu- Thanks:)

    @Ruchi Jain- Thank you Ruchi!

    @Anuradha- Thanks Anuradha:)

    @pramod- No Sir, it is a beautiful post, I read it a hour ago...:)

    @Bindu Juneja- Thanks Bindu!

    @Defiant Princess- Thanks a lot dear:)

    @Someone is Special- Thank you:) :) :)

    @chitra- Thanks dear...

    @Sampath- Thank you!

    @bemoneyaware- Thank you...:)

    @Sunil Padiyar- Thanks:)

    @zradar- Thanks dear:)

    @Jagan- Thank you!

    @Positive Thinking- Thanks a lot!

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  87. FUE Hair Transplantation UKMay 18, 2013 at 3:22 AM

    Lovely blog post :-)

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