All Dressed Up - II

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All dressed up...I was walking by your side,
Comforting myself in your eyes.
Should you come near my skin?
For my thoughts have taken a stride.
With femininity, I hunched on,
Your lips were on mine.
I read your movements...As I am your girl,
This all makes our love divine.
You lifted me in your arms,
For this…I have no words.
I inhale your passion...I exhale it too,
To feel you inside my body was not enough.
With my dress on the bedside now,
Can I say something to you?
No matter how I look,
I love dressing up for you.

Click and read ~All Dressed Up - I~

Comments

  1. Saru SinghalFebruary 6, 2012 at 2:08 PM

    When love is in the air, poetry is ought to happen. I wrote this poem in 2009 for the love of my life – My husband.

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    1. UnknownFebruary 6, 2012 at 10:43 PM

      AWWW SARU! He is indeed very lucky! :)

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    2. raFebruary 7, 2012 at 2:22 AM

      he is damn very lucky to have you!!!

      very romantic indeed. i must share this with my wife. she will love it !

      regards
      rahul

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    3. VaisakhiFebruary 7, 2012 at 1:20 PM

      soooooo romantic....lucky man i must say...lovely...:)

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    4. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 5:54 PM

      @AKILA VENKAT- I will ask him, if he feels lucky(keeping the fingers crossed for a yes)...:)

      @rahul aggarwal- Hope she likes it....:)And thanks for your comment...:)

      @vaisakhi- Thanks dear...:)

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    5. Shesha ChaturvediFebruary 8, 2012 at 12:52 AM

      B'ful words and nicely portrayed!!:)

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    6. Saru SinghalFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:36 PM

      Thanks a lot Shesha...:)

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    7. raFebruary 10, 2012 at 10:15 AM

      hey Saru,

      my wfie .. she liked it .. no .. she loved it :-)

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    8. Saru SinghalFebruary 10, 2012 at 11:20 AM

      Pass on my thanks to her...:)

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  2. Jidhu JoseFebruary 6, 2012 at 2:29 PM

    very romantic

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  3. swatiFebruary 6, 2012 at 2:30 PM

    Sensual... Sexy... Awesome... It just gave me goosebumps:):)

    Yeah!!! I'm the first one to comment.. It's an honor;);)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 6, 2012 at 4:56 PM

      Thank you Swati...Sorry for the comment being second. I guess you and Jidhu posted at the same time...a second here and there...

      But, your comments are always treasured in my heart. You are a great friend. Lucky to have you...

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2012 at 2:35 PM

    lovely,erotic,sensual,expressive,passionate and above all it came straight from ur heart

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2012 at 3:04 PM

    Dressing up for your partner is the most delightful part about love-making. And partners should consciously acknowledge that!

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 6, 2012 at 4:58 PM

      I agree...I am lucky in that ways...:) Thanks for your comment Sandy...:)

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  6. Harsha ChittarFebruary 6, 2012 at 3:17 PM

    It felt like it came right from the heart, a bit raw filled with emotions, it made a very good read. Good going...

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  7. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 6, 2012 at 4:04 PM

    Saru, So much sensuality and romanticism in so few lines! I feel so good to read these words early morning as I just begin my day:)I can see the love is in the air now as Valentine day approaches:) All the best!

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 6, 2012 at 5:05 PM

      We are smitten by the V-Day. It's nearly a week away and love is surely in the air. Though, I will be posting something in Hindi for that occasion.

      Thanks for liking this one, Sir...:)

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  8. Akshay Kumar GFebruary 6, 2012 at 4:22 PM

    So much passion and sensuality oozing out. Very romantic poem. :) When love is in the air, poetry is ought to happen. Very much agreed. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 6, 2012 at 5:07 PM

      Thanks Akshay. BTW, what are your plans for V-Day?

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    2. Akshay Kumar GFebruary 7, 2012 at 10:20 PM

      Oh, I will be all alone this V-Day, like always. I am not very lucky in love. :(

      I wish you and your hubby have a wonderful V-Day :)

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    3. Saru SinghalFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:39 PM

      I wish you find someone soon for lifetime. Thanks for your wishes Akshay :)

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  9. --February 6, 2012 at 5:26 PM

    I LOVE this one, Saru! It has a familiarity to it. Perhaps you've shared it before on your site? I recall reading a beautiful couplet you penned when I first joined your blog last year. Hope I'm not confusing the two. It left an indelible impression and so does this one!! Thank you for sharing and I hope and your husband have a LOVEly V~day :-)

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  10. --February 6, 2012 at 5:27 PM

    *you and your husband (oops!) :D

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 6, 2012 at 5:38 PM

      You have a great memory. It was a quartet with the same title. The subject is same but treatment is different in both these posts. Though, this one is original. Thanks for liking it and acknowledging the beauty of earlier one.

      Thanks for your wishes too. You too enjoy the day...:)

      As I always say, I love typing mistakes. It reflects spontaneity.

      Love
      Saru

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  11. Christy GeraldFebruary 6, 2012 at 5:52 PM

    Thanks fr quoting Wife's heart in WORDS.Delish again - even if shared once more!

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  12. magiceyeFebruary 6, 2012 at 8:05 PM

    dressing up is seductive too! have a lovely valentine's!

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  13. डॉ. मोनिका शर्मा February 6, 2012 at 8:10 PM

    Very Nice...

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  14. TeamgsquareFebruary 6, 2012 at 9:42 PM

    Wow , real passionate words .

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  15. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2012 at 9:57 PM

    So much in so few words. I like the way you close your poems.

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 5:55 PM

      Delighted to know that...Thanks for your comment:)

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  16. Sujatha SathyaFebruary 6, 2012 at 10:23 PM

    so sensuous Saru & romantic. kya baat hai!! loved it

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 5:57 PM

      See, I am such a good wife Sujatha. I cook, do all household chores and write poetry for him...

      Thanks for liking the poem...:)

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    2. Sujatha SathyaFebruary 9, 2012 at 10:08 AM

      haan yaar lakhon mein ek! roz roz nai bante aapke jaise! very lucky guy :)

      now i am curious about his that one poem he wrote for u

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    3. Saru SinghalFebruary 9, 2012 at 6:01 PM

      Sujatha, it is such a kiddish poem. I hope he doesn't read this comment. But, I was bowled over by his simplicity and emotions for me...:)

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  17. Spiritual SherpaFebruary 6, 2012 at 10:41 PM

    I second Sujatha...my thoughts exacto...this one is romantic to the core n sensuous :)

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  18. JennyFebruary 6, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    Totally passionate.. Aww I so miss my husband now.. have to share this with him :-) Lovely as usual!

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 5:58 PM

      Please share and tell us whether he likes it or not...Thanks for the comment Jenny:)

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  19. Jyoti MishraFebruary 6, 2012 at 10:49 PM

    Smiles..
    its very lovely !!
    so many strong emotions clubbed together :)

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  20. Writing BeeFebruary 6, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    Awwwwwww...!!! Goosebumps!!!! Marvellous!!!

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  21. ASFebruary 6, 2012 at 11:40 PM

    ohh! thats really a romantic one !

    :)

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  22. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2012 at 11:52 PM

    romantic one...

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  23. UpasanaFebruary 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    Passion,romance both in one!! Its too cute Saru!! Your husband must be delighted that you write such beauties for him!

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:01 PM

      I have to ask him...And thanks for liking it Upasana...:)

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  24. PrashanthFebruary 7, 2012 at 12:37 AM

    Pure love, nothing else....:) God bless you both...:)

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  25. SoniaFebruary 7, 2012 at 12:57 AM

    Wow dis is so soulful.. Every word in dis poem shows the divine love for him. Lucky he :):):)
    I loved every word of urs:)

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  26. HarshaFebruary 7, 2012 at 1:46 AM

    Aww! Soulful yet sensual. :):) Very cute lines for your husband. As Prashanth said, it's pure love :)

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  27. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comFebruary 7, 2012 at 2:29 AM

    beautiful saru.. :)
    subtle yet full of passion..

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  28. shashi purwarFebruary 7, 2012 at 2:52 AM

    For this…I have no words.
    I inhale your passion...I exhale it too,
    To feel you inside my body was not enough. .......very beautiful passion saru , very romantic touching .................lovely poem . love ur passion .......:):):):) fully express .:)

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  29. MiFebruary 7, 2012 at 3:03 AM

    "No matter how I look, I love dressing up for you".. This is the thing which struck me then, and struck me now too! :D:D
    Lovely poem Saru and lucky husband ji of yours!! :D :D

    Loved it <3

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:05 PM

      It always strikes me whenever I dress up for him. Thanks for liking the poem Mi and sorry for a long absence on your blog.

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    2. MiFebruary 7, 2012 at 10:21 PM

      That's Olrite :) <3 <3

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    3. Saru SinghalFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:40 PM

      <3 <3 <3 You're such a sweetheart!

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  30. RachitFebruary 7, 2012 at 3:13 AM

    Simply Amazing. Loved every word! Your rhymes have a heart of their own Saru! So candid, so true and so flowing. He's fortuitous to have you.
    I don't need to say I'm really inspired. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:07 PM

      What can I say...Thanks a ton Rachit for such a lovely comment.
      Honestly, I think your work is an inspiration. I just write random lines.

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  31. BikramFebruary 7, 2012 at 5:02 AM

    now that is saucy and romantic and BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLLLLLL ...

    Bikram's

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  32. sriramnivasFebruary 7, 2012 at 5:43 AM

    Love is all about making your better half happy; obviously it is the look that matters the most so why not dress to your sweetheart's choice...........Nice work !!!!

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:08 PM

      Yeah, dressing up is a good gesture to keep the romance alive. Thanks Ram for liking it!

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  33. Atanu ChatterjeeFebruary 7, 2012 at 7:41 AM

    Words Designer! Marvellous,
    Well blended, an extra mile in terms of excitement:)
    Best wishes..

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:09 PM

      Awww, thanks Sir. 'Word designer' I won't forget this term ever...:)

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  34. AditiFebruary 7, 2012 at 8:04 AM

    ECSTATIC !
    such passion is at times so difficult to put in words
    and then you come and do it so brilliantly.
    Lovely words Saru.

    Lucky HIM :)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:11 PM

      Speechless...It feels so good when someone has as great company as you. You act as an inspiration to write better. Thanks a ton dear.

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  35. KittyFebruary 7, 2012 at 8:10 AM

    very sensual n romantic ! wow ! :))

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  36. RiàFebruary 7, 2012 at 8:12 AM

    This is so romantic and passionate!! Loved it.

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  37. smFebruary 7, 2012 at 8:19 AM

    romantic
    nice pic

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  38. RamakrishnanFebruary 7, 2012 at 9:21 AM

    Wow this little poem is superb,scintillating & sensuous !

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  39. RajFebruary 7, 2012 at 10:12 AM

    There is something so compelling in your words that just mesmerizes the reader. So beautifully romantic! :)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:13 PM

      When someone who writes as brilliantly as you says something like this...I feel humbled...Thanks Raj...:)

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  40. Elvira Lobo(Elli)February 7, 2012 at 10:43 AM

    really romantic:)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:14 PM

      Thanks Elli...:)

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    2. Elvira Lobo(Elli)February 8, 2012 at 1:04 PM

      hiiiii....
      a surprise awaits u...do visit my blog http://elli-itsmylife.blogspot.in/ and read the post titled 1st Versatile Blogger Award;)

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    3. Saru SinghalFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:53 PM

      Thanks a lot for it Elli...:) :) :)

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  41. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2012 at 12:57 PM

    Aww, such a lovely composition! It was so so sweet. Love is indeed really sweet if your lover is so loving.
    "I love dressing up for you." Loved it. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 7, 2012 at 6:15 PM

      Love is indeed very sweet if you a good partner...Thanks a ton for your comment Akriti...:)

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  42. SuKupedia ™ :) :)February 8, 2012 at 12:17 AM

    iisshhhhhh *blinking blinking* romantic romantic :)

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  43. Ruchi JainFebruary 8, 2012 at 2:27 AM

    This is called a candid expression, and whatever u wore, the man in your life will love u for what u are, not for the dress..:)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:48 PM

      I wish so Ruchi...Thanks for your comment dear...:)

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  44. JennyFebruary 8, 2012 at 5:55 AM

    Saru, this was what my husband had to say :-)

    "Hey Saru, really liked it !! superb fluency in poem to elucidate romance :-) "

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 8, 2012 at 9:49 PM

      So sweet of you to share it with him. And pass on my big big thanks to him...
      *Humbled*

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  45. RajaFebruary 8, 2012 at 8:34 AM

    these words inspire bachelors ;)

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  46. SunbyanynameFebruary 8, 2012 at 11:05 AM

    Excellent poem. I like the new look of your blog too

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  47. AnonymousFebruary 8, 2012 at 11:29 AM

    :D I had the VIP pass for this one ;)

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  48. BrijeshFebruary 8, 2012 at 1:03 PM

    You husband is indeed a very lucky man.
    You have penned some amazing lines on your blog.

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  49. AbhyudayaFebruary 8, 2012 at 1:57 PM

    Amazing poetry. Would love to have a wife like you. Jealous of your hubby. :) So romantic.

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  50. SagittarianFebruary 8, 2012 at 7:47 PM

    Oh, soulful Sharing Saru! :) Love it! :)

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  51. BGTFebruary 8, 2012 at 11:07 PM

    Wonderful one Saru!! I actually would like to know how your husband reacted to this!! :)

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    1. AnonymousFebruary 8, 2012 at 11:15 PM

      I wish there was a like button here on comments too :D :D I like Binu's comment! :D
      Saru we wait for your reply on this! :D

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    2. Saru SinghalFebruary 9, 2012 at 6:04 PM

      @Binu Thomas- He gifted me a book and we went for lunch. Thanks for liking it Binu...:)

      @Metagravity- XOXOXO...:) Even I got many;)

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  52. ZachFebruary 9, 2012 at 2:00 AM

    I have given you an award at my blog. Do check it out :)

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  53. Sunita SriramFebruary 9, 2012 at 2:21 AM

    Oh my my...... guileless expression of love!

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 9, 2012 at 6:16 PM

      Love as they say know nothing...Thanks for reading it...:)

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  54. Mr.JovitaFebruary 9, 2012 at 4:04 AM

    ooooooh!! lalita!! :D hehe

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  55. UnknownFebruary 9, 2012 at 4:48 AM

    true lines expressing true love :)

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  56. Bhargav BhattFebruary 9, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    This all makes our love divine.

    very true... awesome.. so simple yet so touchy

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  57. Stuti DhyaniFebruary 9, 2012 at 5:32 AM

    very romantic! so doused in passion it is:)

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  58. LadyFiFebruary 9, 2012 at 8:44 AM

    Passionate and sensuous!

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  59. प्रेम सरोवरFebruary 9, 2012 at 10:07 AM

    With my dress on the bedside now,
    Can I say something to you?
    No matter how I look,
    I love dressing up for you!!!

    A piece of excellent romantic poem . Thanks. .Plz visit my blog.

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  60. Pooja AbhayFebruary 9, 2012 at 11:02 AM

    Oh my God..oh my God..so beautiful!! I am in love with this poem Saru..I really am :)

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  61. Anshul GautamFebruary 9, 2012 at 1:48 PM

    so passionate...I love to stop by here... :)

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  62. PranitaFebruary 9, 2012 at 9:59 PM

    Wow... u have a very beauteous feel to your poems! Love it.. Waiting for more... :)

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  63. SprigBlossomsFebruary 9, 2012 at 10:55 PM

    O, my heart just skipped a beat...! It's awesome, Saru, very romantic :) :)

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  64. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    superb poem saru
    full of romance

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  65. Mr.MiglaniFebruary 10, 2012 at 12:15 AM

    so erotic
    yet so romantic
    so picturistic
    so sweet
    and yest cute
    I like thsi

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  66. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺February 10, 2012 at 12:32 AM

    That was so romantic <3
    Wow...Feb season..romantic posts all over <3

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  67. NishaFebruary 10, 2012 at 1:36 AM

    So very Romantic...

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  68. ArtiFebruary 10, 2012 at 2:12 AM

    Wowow!!! So beautiful! Your poems have that something in them.. Superb work Saru! :)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 10, 2012 at 11:29 AM

      Thanks a lot Arti. Coming from you it's a big compliment...

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  69. AmitAagFebruary 10, 2012 at 2:33 AM

    Romantic..passionate..sensuous..sensual..sensitive,and with the element of 'Ahness' at the end quite dramatic too!! Very well written Saru!
    amitaag.blogspot.com

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  70. SuruchiFebruary 10, 2012 at 5:20 AM

    the concluding lines made me smile...they are so beautifully sketched...and the passion within the core of the poem is definitely warming to say the least:-)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 10, 2012 at 11:33 AM

      That's the most beautiful way of summarizing this poem. Thanks a lot Suruchi...:) :) :)

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  71. RajFebruary 10, 2012 at 8:00 AM

    Saru.. Words cannot express this.. Very beautifully spoken, totally describing love in its deepest element.. Gr8 stuff..

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  72. KusumFebruary 10, 2012 at 8:23 AM

    Beautiful thought! I liked the last line the most!

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  73. Deepak DoddamaniFebruary 10, 2012 at 9:23 AM

    Superb; Happy Valentines day Saru :)

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  74. Debdatta Dasgupta February 10, 2012 at 11:33 AM

    Very Passionate... What timing too... Just before Valentine's day!!!

    Awesome!!!

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 10, 2012 at 11:39 AM

      Yeah, I thought of showering love on the blog in such a romantic season. Thanks for liking it and welcome here...)

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  75. AyushiFebruary 10, 2012 at 12:02 PM

    Divine love :)
    Passionate Saru Di :)

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  76. Nitin JainFebruary 10, 2012 at 2:30 PM

    Nice poem...interesting title and the romance that flows throughout..take care wish you guys great time ahead !

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 10, 2012 at 10:32 PM

      Thank you so much Nitin for your comment and wishes...:)

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  77. Someone is SpecialFebruary 10, 2012 at 3:58 PM

    whenever I stop by words,
    I loved reading words!

    though I'd love to word,
    I've no words for your words!

    simply I return with words,
    enchanting the words!

    words, words, words, words,
    saru's words, the best words!

    Someone is Special

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 10, 2012 at 10:37 PM

      Speechless...Only you can write such words...Thank you so very much...:) :) :)

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    2. Someone is SpecialFebruary 12, 2012 at 4:55 AM

      :-) Thanks for you comment on my Day 11 post. The prompt is to write a Haiku inspired by the image and that's the reason to see the same image on Vinay's blog too..

      Someone is Special

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  78. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2012 at 10:13 PM

    Are you attempting to put lover's "in the mood" with this poem? It was quite passionate, indeed! :)

    You sure do get many comments! I hope you see mine, and will visit my humble little poetry blog.

    http://the-poetic-madame.blogspot.com

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 10, 2012 at 10:39 PM

      I was trying to...:)Thanks for a lovely comment and liking the poem...:)

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  79. MithlashFebruary 11, 2012 at 4:25 AM

    Last two lines are awesome...perfect for archies card..:)

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  80. Jen..The Butterfly EffectFebruary 11, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    Aww.Such an adorably sensual poem! I could actually visualize everything! So beautifully written! Love it! :)
    Happy Valentine's day in advance babe! :)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 11, 2012 at 10:33 AM

      Even I visualized everything when I wrote this.;)

      BTW, I wrote this after watching 'Pretty Women'. Thanks for your wishes and wish you the same...

      <3 <3 <3

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  81. Chetan MaheshwariFebruary 11, 2012 at 6:43 AM

    romantic..i will save this for my wife(after marriage) to read

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  82. Writefully YoursFebruary 11, 2012 at 6:22 PM

    its a beautiful expression and the dignity in expression is commendable!

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  83. Stilettos DiaryFebruary 11, 2012 at 11:04 PM

    very well penned.. I love poetry :) going through all your poems :) lovely
    love
    megha
    http://meghafashionista.blogspot.com (i might be a fashion blogger but I love reading john milton, wordsworth and now you :) )

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 12, 2012 at 10:30 AM

      Glad to know that you admire poems. Welcome here Megha...:)

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  84. AkshyFebruary 12, 2012 at 10:04 AM

    Nice:). Very romantic:).

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  85. Subhrashis AdhikariFebruary 14, 2012 at 1:00 PM

    wow...awesome...Not many people have the talent of expressing what they feel....lucky husband i must say :)

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    1. Saru SinghalFebruary 14, 2012 at 3:15 PM

      I will convey this to Alok and ask for a gift. He will take your words very seriously...:)

      Thanks for admiring it:)

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  86. Saru SinghalFebruary 14, 2012 at 3:14 PM

    Thank you Ash...Where are you these days?

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  87. joshi danielFebruary 14, 2012 at 11:10 PM

    so sweet especially the ending part!

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  88. MadhushaFebruary 15, 2012 at 2:26 PM

    This is just so romantic. speechless

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  89. PrabhavathiFebruary 16, 2012 at 2:59 AM

    wow...what a romantic lines.
    big hug to the poetess saru dear

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  90. AnkithaFebruary 18, 2012 at 12:31 PM

    Like alwayssssssss saru ur sooo Goood with ur words..:)
    Sorry cudn be in touch..:)

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  91. AnkithaFebruary 18, 2012 at 12:33 PM

    Hez lucky obviously..:) U bet..!

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  92. Santosh NambyMarch 11, 2012 at 12:17 AM

    beautiful poem Saru....

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  93. Dipthi SomeshJune 18, 2012 at 7:29 AM

    "no matter how i look, i love dressing up for u".. awwwww, sooo true..
    loved it every word..

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    1. Saru SinghalJune 18, 2012 at 11:28 AM

      Seriously we love dressing up for our men. :) Thanks for reading Dipthi:)

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फ़ुर्सत में मिलना मुझसे यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं  सिर्फ़ हाल चाल नहीं पूछना बातें करनी है तुमसे कई देखना है तुम्हें एक टक शिकवे करने है तुमसे कई हज़ार जब नाराज़ हुए थे तुम मुझसे और जब छेड़ा था मुझे बीच बाज़ार चवन्नी-अठन्नी सा ढोंग मत करना मान लेना मेरे हर कहे को सुबकियाँ से काम मत चलाना बेहने देना ग़र आँसू बेहे तो  सख़्त होने का दिखावा छोड़ आना नुक्कड़ वाले बनिये की दुकान पे सिद्दत से एक बार बोल देना  कि गलती होती है इंसान से तुम मुझे छोड़ गए उसका तुम्हें कभी अफ़सोस हुआ है क्या मैं नहीं तुमसे पूछूँगी  कि मेरे बाद मेरी तरह किसी को छुआ है क्या  ना मैं इस युग की मीरा हूँ  ना हो तुम मेरे घनश्याम बस इश्क़ है तुमसे बेपन्नह मुझे बाक़ी सब कुछ है मुझमें आम  तुम भी सोचते होगे ना  यह तीली सा इश्क़, ज्वालामुखी कब हुआ यूँ समझ लो तुम्हारे जाने के बाद तुम्हारे ख़याल ने दिन में 100 बार मुझे छुआ अब गणित में तो तुम अव्वल हो हिसाब लगा ही लोगे पर सोच के आना जनाब  पिछले 15 सालों का हिसाब कैसे दोगे  तो आना बस फ़ुरसत में  यूँ दो चार घंटे के लिए नहीं...
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