मौसम
सिमट के आती है वो!
गर्मी के मौसम को भी,
ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो!!
हर सुबह बालों को बाँध कर,
जब घर से बाहर जाती है वो,
ठंढी चाँदनी सी रास्तों में फैलाती है वो,
गर्मी के मौसम को भी ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो!
तपती धूप में मुझे देख कर,
जब धीरे धीरे मुस्कुराती है वो,
राग मल्हार की याद दिलाती है वो,
गर्मी के मौसम को भी ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो!
कभी सफ़ेद कभी हलके रंगों में,
सिमट के आती है वो!
मेरे हर मौसम को,
ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो!!
Wonderful! Saru,
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the flow..
Thank you so much Sir...
Deletecan be a good material for a soft romantic gazal!
ReplyDeletenice one it is :)
I wish someone sings my poem. Thanks for an encouraging comment dear :)
Delete"raag malhar ki yaad dilati hain woh.."
ReplyDeleteI knew you would like this line Dip. Thank you so much for reading :)
DeleteI too loved that line! :D
Delete:) :) :)
Delete"जब धीरे धीरे मुस्कुराती है वो,
ReplyDeleteराग मल्हार की याद दिलाती है वो.."
बहुत ही खूबसूरत लिखा है आपने!! आपकी लेखनी हिंदी में भी उतनी ही बढ़िया है.. :)
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद् !
Deleteमासूम का सुन्दर रंग बिखेरती
ReplyDeleteआपकी यह भावमय प्रस्तुति
बहुत ही खूबसूरत लगी.
सुन्दर हिंदी लेखन के लिए बहुत बहुत बधाई.
समय मिलने पर मेरे ब्लॉग पर आईएगा.
कविता पढ़ने और आमंत्रत्न के लिए धन्यवाद् !
DeleteBeautiful lines. I am a fan of such Shayari and have attempted a few myself. :)
ReplyDeleteGood to know that dear, will surely read it.
Deleteबहुत खूबसूरत!
ReplyDeleteधन्यवाद् सर!
Deleteवाह! रूमानी एहसास हैं....
ReplyDeleteशुक्रिया!
Deleteबहुत ही ख़ूबसूरत रचना सरू ...और आशा करता हूँ इस रचना को पढने के बाद , जिनके जीवन में प्यार है उन्हें गर्मी का एहसास शायद नहीं होगा :)
ReplyDeleteबहुत खूब कहा आपने ! प्यार से हर मौसम खूबसूरत हो जाता है ! सुन्दर टिप्पणी के लिए धन्यवाद् !
Deleteहर रचना को खूबसूरती से पिरोती सारु :)
ReplyDeleteसदा मनभावन रचना ले आती है वो ...
आपकी टिप्पणी भी आपकी लेखनी की तरह सुन्दर है, इंदु ! धन्यवाद् !
DeleteVery loveable and beautiful lines they are, Saru! Made me smile all the way! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Rachit!
DeleteSo tender & loving--beautiful lines!
ReplyDeleteThanks Indu...:)
DeleteAdoring the fines beauty through words ..:)
ReplyDelete:) :) :)
Deleteजीवन के बेहद महत्वपूर्ण पक्ष को आपने इस कविता के माध्यम से अभिव्यक्त किया है ....! सशक्त रचना ..!
ReplyDeleteकविता पढ़ने और सुन्दर टिप्पणी के लिए धन्यवाद् !
DeleteWow!! The whole description has been so beautifully woven...I love this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ria...:) :) :)
Deleteगर्मी के मौसम को भी ख़ूबसूरत बनाती है वो !कभी सफ़ेद कभी हलके रंगों में,सिमट के आती है वो !
ReplyDeletecool
आशा है आपको कविता पसंद आई ! इस ब्लॉग पे आपका स्वागत है !
Deletea beautiful poem .. MaUSAM indeed
ReplyDeletehow the world would be if there were no Mausam's ...
Bikram's
Yeah, true. Like these seasons we have various shades in life. Thanks for reading Bikram.
DeleteCool poem in such a hot mausam!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteI don't read hindi poems and stories quite often coz I never seem to like them. But, I read this poem several times and loved it. Nice flow and nice words. Great work . . .
ReplyDeleteKeep writing . . .
Ashwini Dey
That's a huge compliment. Thanks for reading Ashwini...:) :) :)
DeleteWoww! Loved the closing lines especially :):) Beautiful as ever Saru :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Harsha. You know I love the picture here more than the poem. :)
DeleteMe too! Even I wondered how could you find such an apt pic. :)
DeleteSo soft and beautiful Saru... :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Swati!
Deletedon't know why but reminded me of that song "Ghar se nikalte hi, kuch door chalte hi..."
ReplyDeleteGood to know that. Though this poem is not that great but if it evokes the memory of a beautiful song, I am thrilled
Deleteditto sujatha.... :)
Deletepoem is as beautiful as the song is..
Awww...thank you Sumukh :)
DeleteVery lovely.
ReplyDeleteMausam being compared so beautifully is amazing Saru. Kaabile taareef hai :)
Thanks Mak. :) :) :)
Deleteअनुपम भाव संयोजित करती हुई बेहतरीन अभिव्यक्ति ।
ReplyDeleteसुन्दर टिप्पणी के लिए धन्यवाद् !
DeleteMasha-allah.. Flow of the words is so magical:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sonia...:)
DeleteSaru Ji
ReplyDeleteSimple yet exquisite & beautiful. Pure magic.
Thanks for admiring the beauty of the written lines. :) :) :)
DeleteBeautiful poem. Perfect lines for the summer season. Loved it as always. :)
ReplyDeleteमाफ़ कीजिये सरूजी इस बार मेरी राय देने में तोड़ी देर होगई. :(
No problems, Akshay. I always know that you are busy with your work and life. Thanks a ton for reading and liking the poem. :)
DeleteAwesome - I could actually feel the romance in the air :)
ReplyDeleteAwww...That solves the purpose of writing the poem. Thanks Me..:)
Deleteu crazy girl--that is a gender bender poem! How could you write with the romantic heart of a guy? Smiles...how do you manage to have fluency in both English and Hindi--you write artistically in both languages?
ReplyDeleteIt's all about feelings, Bhavna. And many thanks to the romantic movies which feed these lovely thoughts in my mind. Thanks for appreciating the work. Truly honored!!!
Deleteoh..wow..lines from the heart...lovely..:)
ReplyDeleteTasty Appetite
Thanks dear :)
Deletevery beautiful!! lovely lilt!! would love to hear it!! you should upload a recital of your poetry..
ReplyDeleteI wish someone can recite or sing it for me. I am not so good at reciting my work. Thanks for a lovely suggestion and for liking it, Sir. :)
DeleteKhoobsurat lines, Saru. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton!
DeleteLovely lines Saru..Super like..:-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear:)
DeleteWow!...absolutely b'ful poem, Saru, 'ठंढी चाँदनी सी रास्तों में फैलाती है वो' is par excellence!
ReplyDelete...am here again to read it once more:)
DeleteThe accompanying pic is pretty cool:)
Sir, even I like the picture a lot, it is exactly what I thought while writing the poem. Thanks for liking that line, I wrote this and malhaar line before and then wrote the entire poem. Means a lot to be appreciated by you...:)
Deleteread thrice, felt it... closed my eyes for a second and rhym it... big five for this one.... so so so beautiful....
ReplyDeleteAwww...I think I will read it your way to re-live the poem. Thank you so much for a lovely comment. :)
Deleteबहुत सुन्दर रचना है सरू जी
ReplyDeleteशब्दों को ऐसे सजाती हो तुम
कविता यू बनाती हो तुम
दिल से लगता सुनाती हो तुम
इतने सुन्दर शब्दों के लिए शुक्रिया ! आपकी टिप्पणी ने इस कविता की शोभा बड़ा दी !
DeleteWonderful Saru...beautiful lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks Seema and welcome back!
Deletebeautiful is the word!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!!
Deletekaun? :P :D
ReplyDeleteNice one!
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
:) Kaash pata hota...:) Thanks for reading Anshul...:)
DeleteThank you!
ReplyDeleteआपका गीत हवा के झोंके की तरह आया और चला गया . कुछ समय बाद ये एहसास हुआ की मैं वहां पर अब न था . मैं तो हवा के उस झोंके के साथ बह गया था .
ReplyDeleteक्या बात है ! ऐसा लगता है मानो किसे ने कविता की परिभाषा ही बदल डाली है ! कविता पड़ने और सुन्दर टिप्पणी के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद् !
DeleteSo soothing, serene and touching. Simply adorable words and they flow like a river! As always. :) I have always had a unique admiration for poets. Because to be a poet, you need to have a combination that is so rare to have: a fertile mind, a pure heart and a perfect language. And as I have told you before, you are the best poet I will ever know. :)
ReplyDeleteSpeechless!
DeleteEven in your comments you make very sure that you show your writing genius. Thanks for gracing this blog, Raj.
Beautiful, as always
ReplyDeleteThank you Meera!
DeleteThanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteWe are visiting US(New York) in May.
Where are u in US,Saru.
Please check your mail, Sir :)
DeleteLovely
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Deletenice............
ReplyDeletereally beautiful..........
anu
Thanks a lot Anu!
Deletelight and lovely...very nice:)
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Sir.
DeleteI am not getting updates from your post. Actually i am not getting updates from so many people :-(
ReplyDeleteThe poem has etched a figure in my mind, and somewhere reminds me of madhuri from Dil to pagal hain. Soothing and beautiful!
Ah, Madhuri looked so beautiful in that movie. And it is such a motivating comment. Thanks a ton Jenny!
Deletelovely !
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteHi Saru, I like your writing a lot..
ReplyDeleteI know you've been appreciated several times, here goes another:
http://life-stance.blogspot.in/2012/05/my-first-ever-blog-award.html
:)
Thats so sweet and nice of you. Feels great, thanks :)
DeleteFor all the guys madly in love, this is how you feel when your partner appears in front of you! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Saru.
Thank you Binu. I wanted to create an image with this poem and feels great that I succeed to an extent.
DeleteDear Saru,
ReplyDeleteI'm inviting you and your friends to join me this Saturday May 5th for Blog Hop Saturday!
I'm also having another collaboration. I know you just missed out participating last year, so I'm giving you early notification. It will be held over at my new blog Lovers' Cove Hope you can join all the fun!
Sorry, I missed the Saturday Blog Hop but we make sure to be a part of the Lover's Cove. Thanks for the invitation Andy :)
Deletean enticing poem..while i was reading this,the poem made the song-'ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga....' reverberate in my ears:):) beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteIt is a soulful song and glad to know that this poem reminded you of that. Thanks for reading and for a beautiful comment.
Deleteawesome ma'm
ReplyDeleteSaru, Its beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteNice to read Hindi poem after so long!
Wish to read many more like this ...
Keep writing :-)
Simran, please feel free to explore the hindi poems tab on the top of the blog. Hope you will enjoy it. Thanks for reading!
Deletenow i don't have the ability to decode the message with this poem! this wasn't that Saru-Kinda-Poem... :( sorry! for disappointing you with this comment...
ReplyDeleteI should be saying sorry for disappointing you as a reader. Thanks a ton for an honest feedback!
Deleteबहुत ही सुंदर प्रस्तुति । आप तो भूल ही गई पर मैं आपका भुल नही पाया हूँ । मेरे पोस्ट पर आपका इंतजार रहेगा । धन्यवाद ।
ReplyDeleteज़रूर सर ! टिप्पणी के लिए धन्यवाद् !
DeleteBeautiful !
ReplyDeletebahut acchi hai...
ReplyDeleteThanks !
DeleteHow beautiful and lyrical, Saru :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Arti for a lovely comment!
DeleteYour writing is flawless! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Juhi...:) :) :)
DeleteHi,
ReplyDeleteI know you've got appreciations before, but guess you deserve it again and again :)
please check http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/05/non-stop-generosity.html
Regards,
Anupam
Thanks a ton Anupam...:) :) :)
DeletePlease check :)http://iamdirtyineedwashing.blogspot.in/2012/05/sunday-blogging.html
ReplyDeleteThanks Shamsud :)
DeleteBeautiful poem! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayush!
DeleteBeautiful and soulful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Prateek!
Deleteराग मल्हार की याद दिलाती है वो...Simply beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Kitty :)
Delete"...और हिंदी में भी क्या खूब लिख जाती है वो :)
ReplyDeleteOn a serious note.... really nice!!
Thanks a lot, means a lot coming from you...:)
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