On A May Day...
Love so gratifying, love so profound.
Love at its height, love, I found.
It was the season, it was May.
Air spoke of Love, it was raining every day.
Stars didn’t come, they went out to romance.
Clouds sheltered them, showing their stance.
Morning schemed passion, evening, on fire.
Sensed like everything brimmed with desire.
Should I say or else keep quiet?
For my man will laugh at my plight.
It happened in summers, I loudly say.
I fell in Love on a May day!
Love needs no reason and no season. However, this poem is dedicated to all those who found their love in the month of May, as I did.
celebrate love and life!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful!!
Thank you Sir :)
DeleteLove is beautiful, I read
ReplyDelete'Love' and its beauty on 'Words'!
On a rainy day, I read
'Love', 'Romance', 'Passion' and 'Desire'
painted by 'Words' on 'Words'!
It happens only here, I write
and say,'I fell in love with this beautiful poem Saru!'
Someone is Special
You can judge and weigh the words so beautifully SIS. Thanks for a ever wonderful comment :)
DeleteAwesome.....
ReplyDeleteTrue,Love needs no reason no season,it just happens.It is so addictive that you cant come out of it that easily.Tjose feelings are difficult to express and you have written it so beautifully that it just took me to those days when I felt that passion for someone special.....my husband.
There is magic in these words.Once again its awesome.Good work.
Good to your side of the story. Thanks a ton for reading and for a lovely comment! :)
DeleteMay Magic... :)beautiful indeed! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Shesha :)
DeleteWish you lots of love and happiness!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sir :)
DeleteBeautiful lines, truly heart touching....love really needs no reason or season for celebration!
ReplyDeleteThanks and love needs nothing at all to blossom...:)
DeleteAh- there is something about May! Lovely and romantic.
ReplyDeleteSure and thanks you dear for reading the poem :)
DeleteSounds so lovely...and gr88 to see u connecting the dots..
ReplyDeleteThank you dear :)
DeleteSurprisingly, it doesn't rain here in May anymore :)
ReplyDeleteBest loves are taken and strung in words like these.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
It rains here now. In fact raining everyday since the beginning of May. Thanks for a lovely comment Anshul :)
Delete"Stars didn’t come, they went out to romance.
ReplyDeleteClouds sheltered them, showing their stance."
My favorite lines. So beautiful and romantic. It reminded me of your earlier poems, "I'm in Love" and "13, Cambridge Street". So much so that I went back and read them again. Amazed as always, Saru. :)
Hopefully love happens to someone like me as well, very soon. :)
I hope so too Akshay and thanks for remembering all these posts. Felt so fresh and great after reading your comment. :):):)
Deleteah blesss :) month of may
ReplyDeletei will keep my eyes wide open he he he who knows who i might jsut see
Bikram's
Yeah and I will keep my fingers crossed for you:)
DeleteAll I can say is awww!!
ReplyDelete"Stars didn’t come, they went out to romance.
Clouds sheltered them, showing their stance." - I loved these lines Saru.. Can't get romantic anymore... Amazed... :)
Yes, love needs no reason and no season.. It just blooms :)
Thank you...:) And hope you find love soon. :)
DeleteGood one :)...very light...could be made into a song :)
ReplyDeleteBtw, I didn't understand ur message about my profile.....would u send me an email plz.
Thanks
Thanks Prateek :) :) :)
Delete'Love' is a beautiful and noble feeling that can change any heart with its touch and you just wrote a equally beautiful poem on this beautiful feeling. Every word of this poem touched my heart.
ReplyDeleteCheers to you Saru . . .
Ashwini Dey
Love is indeed a great feeling and thank you so much for such a lovely comment Ashwini :)
DeleteI guess, I read this already! Anyway, this is so lovely :):) I agree with Prateek, this could be made into a song :)
ReplyDeleteYes, you have and thanks a ton for all your comments Harsha :)
DeleteStars didn’t come, they went out to romance.
ReplyDeleteClouds sheltered them, showing their stance.
Morning schemed passion, evening, on fire.
Lovely poem.I salute to your poetic sense.
Thank you so much Sir. :)
DeleteBingo ! But can't say that publicly at the moment you know :( A couple of years to go before I settle down... Been 6 years since I had THAT 9th of may :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteLovely poem Saru,especially when I know how relevant it is to me :P God bless you!
It was 8th of May for us. :)
DeleteFinally you are writing something on a love poem. Thanks for a lovely comment Mishra Ji :)
The stokes of passion could best ignite on a fiery May day!Incidentally, Saru, 'Mayday' is also the distress signal used internationally:)
ReplyDeleteWhenever I read the title of this poem, this thought comes to my mind. MAY DAY...But I can never find a better or an appropriate title than this...
DeleteThanks for reading Sir :)
Wow! nice words....
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteSrau...I got this thru email.....Mayday...as called the labour day and your labour had now been succefull by love being bestowed upon you....superbly written...nice way to convey a day when you fell in love
ReplyDeleteAwww...thank you so much dear...:)
Deletevery sweet :)
ReplyDelete:) :) :)
DeleteGreat expressions as always. Those two lines from 'morning schemed...' have all so many emotions! Super stuff.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rohit and when will you be back???
DeleteI bow to thee... :-)
ReplyDeleteMindblowingly beautiful..
What can I say, Kunal!
DeleteA humble thank you :):):)
i fell in love with the poem, so enchanting and am astonished to see,how this summery MAY can be so beautiful..
ReplyDeleteYeah, that year it was very beautiful. Thanks for reading Ruchi :)
DeleteLight, frothy and bubbly! good reading
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for a beautiful and crisp comment :)
Deletevery well described about romance in may relating the nature :) nice one saru! :)
ReplyDeleteLove is divine...u made me fall in love with ur words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ria, you are such a sweetheart!
DeleteThis is beautiful and one dancing post with one hell of a tune! You're so good, Saru. :D
ReplyDelete*Bows*
DeleteThank you!!!
Wonderfully expressed. And congratulations on your special may day :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jenny :)
DeleteAwww. Beautiful Saru.. yes love needs no reason or season it just happens:) Congrats :)
ReplyDeletelooooved it :)
Deletestars didnt come out they went to romance. Such a pretty line :)
@Sonia- Thanks and love needs nothing at all to happen...:)
Delete@Madhusha- Thanks dear. :):):)
Beautifully expressed with words
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing
Thanks Krishna :)
DeleteLovely lines depicting the Cupid affair. Falling in love is itself special and finding your love in the month of May adds to it. Nice work!!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ram for such a beautiful comment. Sometimes, comments are far more beautiful than the poem. This one is one such comment. :)
DeleteWow! May it is...well gonna remain close to my heart too :-) Thank you Saru for this lovely poem
ReplyDeleteThanks Nikhil. :) :) :)
Deleteso sweet <3
ReplyDeleteWhat should I say? Your poems leave me speechless. I always want to say so much, appreciate you as much as I can but I'm always left spellbound and speechless with a smile on my face :-)
Nice work!! You rock! :-D
Awwww....That is so sweet of you...:) :) :)
DeleteXOXOXO
beautifully penned
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Thanks :)
Delete'Words' theory of relativity suggests that
ReplyDeletesome moments are real.:)
Really! like a inter continental ballistic 'P'.
Well launched!
Thank you so much. And in those moments we live million lives :)
Deletewow..mesmerizing lines..!
ReplyDeleteTasty Appetite
very mesmerizing lines.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteWell written, Saru!
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Thanks Rachna :)
DeleteVery romantic Saru :) loved it.
ReplyDeleteSeason of love at its best in may..
Awaiting to see a share come in my way!! :)
I shall pray for it to happen. Lovely lines and thanks for reading Mak...:)
DeleteBeautifully expressed....
ReplyDeletethanks
Lovely!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot!
DeleteMay is so special for me coz I and my bro are born in may and my parents wedding anniversary also comes on the same month.So I would love to find my love in May ;)
ReplyDeleteRegards
village girl
Amen to that thought :)
DeleteThat's a cute poetry :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Simran :)
DeleteI've missed you!!!!!!!!! But I am back :D Congrats on the custom domain -- you are rocking it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kiran and welcome back !!!
Deletelovely
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteNice rhyming words and a beautiful poetry :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Neha :)
DeleteI was reading this poem on my cellphone while is was raining, on my way back from work..And it's may! :) I just kinda fell in love with your writing! :) really candid!! :)
ReplyDeleteloved it! :)
So, you are finally enjoying Bangalore. Thanks for reading and liking it MI :)
DeleteMay you have many more Mays full of love :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Jaishree :)
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you Navin!
DeleteAwww, Saru, so beautiful!!! Who would have thought one could find love on a May day when sun screams through the torn ozone layer and leaves shrivel and wait...but one needs that fertile heart and the deep borewell of love within to find the love. I am so happy for you, Saru!!! May your all months be filled with May magic!!!
ReplyDeleteIt was raining that year and May was so pleasant. I think everything was magical that year in May. Thanks for your wishes and a lovely comment :)
DeleteBeautiful poetry... keep penning them... liked it... cheers!
ReplyDeleteThanks Vijay :)
DeleteLovely lines on love, Saru.
ReplyDeleteThanks dear :)
DeleteLovely. You write well. All the Best.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThank your stars you are not in Delhi where May is the worst season
ReplyDeleteI was in Delhi that year Sir but I will thank my stars for this year...Thanks for reading Sir :)
Deletebeautiful and lovely lines....
ReplyDeletei am waiting this may to happen with me...
Amen!
DeleteThanks for reading Chetan :)
Beautiful lines Saru....
ReplyDeleteThanks Seema :)
DeleteHi Saru, I agree love needs no reason or season..:) Love this post! Thanks! :)
ReplyDeleteHappy Mother's Day to all moms out there! :)
Thanks for your wishes and your comment Dear :)
Deletenice one :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Deletebeautiful...its Feb for me :)
ReplyDeleteThe Valentines Season :) Thanks for reading Sub:)
Deletebeautiful saru...but there needs to be a 13th month in a year that myt work for me LOL :)
ReplyDeleteI wondered when May worked for me, Alka. I am not at all romantic by nature...
DeleteVisiting after a short gap- only to see a cup overflowing love and romance!
ReplyDeleteThanks Kusum and welcome back. I am so busy even I have missed reading all my favorite blogs, including yours...:)
Deleteso cupid hit you in may! may your love and life be as beautiful forever just like these lines
ReplyDeleteThanks dear :)
DeleteBeautiful. May has always been a special month for me because I was born in the month of May and on every birthday, its a brand new recollection of love for me, facilitated by my significant other. :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely way of writing. Wish you and your significant other, lots of happiness. Thanks for reading!
Deletebeautiful poem Saru:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rekha :)
Deletedamn !
ReplyDeleteif i would have known that you'll write this wonderful poem for the month of may .. i should have got married in may :P
beautiful poem Saru !
regards
rahul
You tell me which month you got married. I will write a poem for you and Sarita. I hope I am correct with her name. Thanks for reading Rahul :)
Delete:)
ReplyDeleteThere is certain kind of sadness in this poem, may be I am reading too much in to it, may be I need to unlearn the meaning of may-day.....
xoxox
Chintu
Not at all Chintan, whenever I read this poem MAY DAY comes to my mind. But, as I was telling Rahul Sir, I haven't found a better tittle for this poem. Maybe, you can suggest one. Thanks for reading and welcome back :)
DeleteYou write awesome.. glad to know you! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shubham, means a lot coming from you...:)
Deletelovely ! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Dear!
DeleteHave a romantic May, every year..!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton dear :)
DeleteYes! Thanks for reading Ash :)
ReplyDeleteI found love in the month of May! My beautiful wife! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Saru...
Good to know that, Binu...:) Thanks for reading :)
Deletelove indeed has no season., the story of my love started one july...
ReplyDeleteloved the poem..
DeleteJuly, a bit of summers and a bit of rain:)
DeleteThanks for reading dear:)
Sweeet...
ReplyDeleteThanks:)
Deleteawwsome...heart touchinG...soooo soooo soooo romantic...wot a chwt chwt choosinG combination of word....luv u alot...keep writinG foh us plsssssssssss :)
ReplyDeleteyou cant believe dat i hv been ur biG fan by reading ur only one poem...love u alotta :)
ReplyDeleteAwwww...that is so sweet of you. Truly honored to read your comment. Thank you so much and welcome here:)
Deleteso btfl
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteWonderful .. loved the way you portrayed it !
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankur.
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