Will you be my Sunshine?
The April sun was shining harshly and the mercury was breaking all previous records. In the sunlit garden, with even the birds resting under the shades of leaves, they walked hand in hand. The roundness of her baby face was highlighted by a hint of pink to her cheeks. Both were unaware what ‘moving’ meant; they thought he is going to London and will come back after the vacation. After an hour, when they finally waved hands with a smile, a budding love story was dashed with the craze to settle abroad.
Tans from that April day faded easily but the
memories were preserved in the corner of their growing hearts. Life moved on,
even her family to a bigger city with more pollution and less time. With a
faint memory of a childhood friend, Anjali grew up as a Lecturer in a College
in Mumbai. She was happy, she was good at what she does and for the rest, she
never cared. One Saturday afternoon when she opened her Facebook account, she
received a friend request from a long lost friend, Gautam, a handsome man in
his late twenties, with fair skin and a gorgeous smile.
Perfectly content with her looks till date,
she became conscious. She looked at her faded mauve shirt and tanned arms. She
thought for a while and asked her younger sister Payal, ‘How do I look?’
‘Since
when you started caring about your looks,’ Payal replied without even looking at her sister.
It took Anjali 26 years to wake up as a
woman. A desire to look pretty, to dress up, and to be complimented filled her
mind. A glimpse of a long lost friend, rather, a handsome man prompted her to type
few words on the internet.
She surfed for hours and concluded that she
needs to drink a lot of water, wear soft colors, eat lots of fruits and always
wear a sunscreen when she steps out. She could do all that but for sunscreen,
she would need some advice. She thought she would ask her colleague Pooja on
Monday. While she was on the verge of letting herself go again on the old careless
self, she got a message from Gautam. Gautam was coming to India with Mark and his girl friend Kyra in June and wanted to meet Anjali.
With an urge to groom her looks, Anjali called for her mother. ‘Mom,
do you know anything about Sunscreen Lotions? I think I need one, my arms are
all tanned,’ she asked
her mother who was watching the repeat of her favourite soap, Bade Achhe Lagte Hain.
‘Wait
Anjali, Priya has sent a divorce notice to Ram,’ her mom said in a worried tone, not sensing
that a love story is about to stir the life of her elder daughter.
Anjali stared at the television screen but
this time she was noticing the heroine and her makeup.
‘What
were you saying?’ her mother asked during the commercial break.
‘I want
a sunscreen, which one I should buy?’ Anjali asked in a casual tone. She
didn’t want her mother to read between the lines.
‘I don’t
know much, you can ask your friends,’ her mother replied.
Their conversation was interrupted by the
word ‘tanning’ in a television commercial. They watched the Lakmé commercial
intently, looked at each other and said ‘Lakmé’
together. Her mother was using Lakmé products since ages and nodded in approval...
Anjali took the scooter keys and went to the nearby departmental
store. She looked for the personal care section and found Lakmé Sunscreen.
While she was scanning the products, she also found ‘Lakmé After Sun Range’;
she bought both After Sun Range and Sunscreen Lotion to repair and nurture her
skin.
Anjali followed a proper diet and skin care routine thereafter.
Tans started fading away; with proper eating habits and increased water intake,
she started glowing. Not only she became more confident with her looks, she
enjoyed the compliments on her ravishing skin. She was carefree, playful and
enjoyed everything under the sun...Literally!
Gautam called Anjali a day after he landed in Mumbai. He asked if
she could accompany him to Juhu beach later that day, Mark and Kyra wanted to
see a beach in Mumbai. Anjali agreed to meet them at Cafe Coffee Day near Juhu
Beach.
In the afternoon, when Gautam entered the Cafe with Mark and Kyra,
Anjali surprised him. He expected her to be pretty but not breath-taking
beautiful. He smiled, fully aware that she had dressed up for him. He walked to
the table, soaked some sunshine peeking through the blinds and greeted her with
a handshake. After the introduction and enjoying Frappé, they stepped outside.
To Gautam’s surprise, Anjali was comfortable in scorching sun like Kyra. He
had not thought of an Indian girl being so comfortable going out in the sun in
peak summer. His thoughts were seldom still and he was amazed by her level
of comfort, as well as, her sparking and refreshing skin.
Kyra and Anjali enjoyed the day, the sunshine, the sand, the water
and the company of handsome men. Both girls shared many stories from their
lives and not to forget the same ease basking under the sun. As they say,
in every girl’s life, there's a boy she'll never forget and a summer where it
all began...It was definitely that a summer in Anjali’s life.
But for Gautam, a day spend with Anjali brought back the memories
of the many summer evenings they spend in his garden. After that evening, he
met her few more times and each time he wouldn’t miss noticing her ever
sparkling face. About a week before he was to return to London, he felt a
strong desire to talk to Anjali; the restlessness of his body sent signals; he
broke some boundaries, went ahead, called her and asked, ‘Will you be
my Sunshine?’
Anjali looked at the Lakmé Sunscreen Lotion kept on the table and
smiled.
A movie script!!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes!!
Thank you so much Sir :)
DeleteLovely story, Saru! Best wishes for the contest:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sir!
DeleteWonderfully written.
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DeleteSuperb:):)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Swati:)
Delete:-D What do we have here??? ANother winner?????
ReplyDeleteI hope so, fingers crossed. Thanks for reading and all the best to you too:)
DeleteLove VS beauty,, so well expressed Saru,, and all the best and i pray that u will win this contest...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Ruchi!
Delete...highly dramatic...can be made into a movie. Great work Saru!
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Thank you Sir :)
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DeleteSo sorry...just saw this message. I think I didn't click on email notifications. You can read me @ www.foundinfolsom.blogspot.com....that's really sweet of you to ask for my link...thank u again...:)
DeletePleasure is all mine.:)
DeleteThat's a great story!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteCute...and nice...and what an ad!!! Good luck! ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shreya:)
DeleteWow excellent writing....I m sure u will win! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ria for having confidence in me...:)
DeleteBeautiful story Saru Di.. Definitely you are the winner:) Good luck..
ReplyDeleteThanks Sonia but there is a tough competition out there. Your post is so warm and honest. Good luck to you too:)
DeleteNice presentation and nice story too...The flow of this post is lovely and superb and compel to get hooked till finish. I can see Your this part also improving. All the best and keep writing and rocking:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Mithash. :)
DeleteWow, nice story and loved the ending :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Neha:)
DeleteHi Saru,
ReplyDeleteI initially thought Kyra was Gautham's girlfriend and I read the whole thing with that idea in mind ha ha
Then I read it again and realized that she was in fact Mark's GF.
Good Luck for the contest!
Jaishree, I read it again and was wondering where I went wrong. Sorry, for leaving that impression and thanks for your wishes.:)
DeleteAhhh! A cute and feel good story. Definitely filmy but you have narrated their story in a beautiful way. You won 3rd place in the previous contest and I hope you win 1st this time. All the very best, Saru. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is the first short story I have posted on the blog. I have written some but they are all thrillers. Glad that you liked it as I was worrying how would I fare as a story writer. Thanks a lot for your wishes Akshay:)
DeleteYou are as good a story-teller as you are as a poet. I would love to read your thriller stories too. :)
DeleteNice piece of writing! Best wishes for the contest:)
ReplyDeleteThank you!!!
Deleteyeh to filmy hai ji.......:))
ReplyDeleteyaa it does feel like a nicely penned movie script....:)
My best wishes for the contest.
Thank you so much Irfan.
Deletea lovely, good bollywood stuff!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteGr8 piece of writing...
ReplyDeleteThanks...
DeleteWell done , Saru, what a beuaifully crafted tale of beauty..all thebest, for the contest..
ReplyDeleteI also wrote a love story but in few lines..last week..there too a face glows.. do have a look..
http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/05/she-glows.html
Thank you Sir and I read your post, it was beautiful. I think brevity is the soul of wit.
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ReplyDeleteThanks Gaurav and welcome here:)
DeleteNo idea about these sun screen lotions, but nice story though .. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumit:)
DeleteIts a perfect script for a shortfilm.Awesome and written very well.
ReplyDeleteAll the best.Will be waiting to know the results. :)
Thanks and I will keep you posted.:)
DeleteLooks like a perfect love story!!!!! The sunscreen does add purpose to the story and all the best.....................
ReplyDeleteThanks Ram :)
Deletelilting and tender writing as always:):)
ReplyDelete:) :) :)
DeleteIt was like reading M/B after many many years!
ReplyDeleteI'll take that as a compliment. Thanks a lot for reading :)
DeleteI love when creativity and imagination take a flight together. Wonderful read. Best to you.
ReplyDeleteThank a lot :)
DeleteThat was a lovely account of Lakme changing one's life :)
ReplyDeleteMaybe they can make it into an ad.
I wish so...Thanks for reading:)
DeleteThis could actually be an advertisement for Lakme products.. well written. I knew what was going to happen, but I was glued to the text.
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See, how much I lack it bringing the originality. But glad you liked what I wrote. Thanks for reading Anu:)
Deletecute story& very appropriate use of Lakme-neither too much nor too little.good luck for the contest.
ReplyDeleteI actually worked hard to maintain that level, glad you noticed. Thanks for your wishes.:)
DeleteWow! Nice Script. All the best. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!!!
DeleteI can't stop 'awww'ing! This is your best of prose and you kept me glued till the end. :):) And what a filmy script, Saru :) Also you worked very well on contextually promoting Lakme. My best wishes for the contest...you should win this time too!
ReplyDeleteSpeaking of being in awe, I was in that state today morning when I read your post. How can you come up with a well executed post, that too with elegance. Please Harsha, share your secret. Thanks a lot for the wishes and I won't be surprised if you make it to the winning list.
DeleteAmazingly beautiful story Saru. I am sure you would win this contest. All the best.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mak:)
DeleteGreat writing!! I loved the way you wove the story around that Lakme sunscreen lotion..! :)
ReplyDeleteBest of luck for the contest! :)
Thank you so much :)
Deletecopyright it immediately else Ram gopal verma or no no some other person will steal it ..
ReplyDeleteLoved reading the story .. beautifullllllllllll
Bikram's
Thank you Bikram, glad that you liked it:)
DeleteOh my my.. Dis is sooo gud..
ReplyDeleteLike sooo much happening in front of u n u just penned down..
Lovely post saru..:)
Thank you Ankitha and welcome back :)
DeleteI've put up the first interview on my blog if you'd like to take a look...
ReplyDeleteOh and
This story is awesome! Such a superb entry, so best of luck! Very sweetly crafted :)
I read the interview and sorry for delaying the reply from my side. And thanks for your wishes:)
DeleteThis was one of the best entries that I've read :)
ReplyDeleteThank you and thats really sweet of you to say that :)
Deletelovely post saruji...:)
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check out mines at
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Yours was beautiful. Thanks for reading:)
DeleteWow Saru ... brilliant !! This is going to be a very stiff competition for others ... all the best :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sangeeta...:)
DeleteFeels great to be appreciated by someone like you. Thanks a lot Ash for your wishes and your motivating comment.:)
ReplyDeleteActually, the problem arises when they are looking only on the fairytale aspect of movies. Our movies teach a lot but we shun the realities they project and look the glossy side of it.
ReplyDeletePlease don't apologize, glad you shared your thoughts here.
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ReplyDeleteThanks Rajesh :)
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ReplyDeletend sorry for not visiting ur blog since a long time :(
Thanks and don't be sorry dear.:)
DeleteVery well written about a face that shined with love and care!
ReplyDeleteBeauty is indeed skin deep!
It is...Thanks for reading Sir :)
DeleteWell written. i enjoyed the whole read from beginning to end.
ReplyDeleteAll the best and keep the good work going
Thanks for your comment and wishes.
DeleteQuite an elaborate post... I wish you could have been a bit more subtle while mentioning the sponsor's name or bringing in a picture of a product. With such inclusions, a post tends to remain just another sponsor's post -- it's value gets dated.
ReplyDeleteI will keep that in mind Sir. Thanks for reading!
DeleteYou have did the best ..tanning is the worst skin problem faced in summer..and then potraying lakme as something that canh elp us prevent tanning was a great idea
ReplyDeleteall the best with the contest
Thank you so much :)
DeleteSaw everything happening in front of my eyes...you have penned it very well and i do hope that you win this contest ..amazing thinking and i am happy for you :) and yeah about your comment on my fb status...chennai was good and match was good too
ReplyDeleteThanks Ste for a motivating comment and do post some photos on the FB.
DeleteI think the story depicts "Today". Nicely written and more importantly i give 100 marks to the flow which is impeccable. I think you have a definite style and this is waht makes you a winner irrespective of you win this competition or not :)) Keep Writting. Yes...Please start posting your thrillers.
ReplyDeleteYour comment is a relief Shamsud. I was worried of what you might think of this writing. Thanks for reading and an encouraging comment.
Deletethis is award winning material for sure
ReplyDeleteThanks, means a lot as this is my first short story.
Deletedon't just think of it as a contest entry. take a printout and pin it to your diary. coz its a pearl.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mani for a motivating comment and welcome here.
Deleteoh ho...Saru Ma'am...this story takes the cake:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Elli!
DeleteWow!! Lovely post!!! Best wishes for the contest :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ashwini:)
DeleteLovely flow of thoughts. One of the very few fiction, that I have read completely.
ReplyDeleteAll the best.
Thanks a lot Durlov:)
Deleteoh no! creative and hope this wins :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for your wishes Joshi!
Deletebeautiful story love the narration
ReplyDeletegood luck for contest
Thanks SM!
DeleteThank you so much for your comment. I'm glad you like my work. I always look forward to reading your work :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, that story has an interesting beginning.:)
Deletefor me, you are a winner for this contest ..
ReplyDeleteloved every bit of it...
advance congratulations!!!
regards
rahul
Awww, thanks for showing faith in my writing...:)
DeleteKya baat hai, kya baat hai, ek lotion, jo badal de aapki zindagi :D
ReplyDeleteNice story!
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Ab sponsor ko limelight mein toh rakhna hi padta hai, kya kare! Thanks for reading Anshul!
DeleteOMG, how do you manage to write such great stuff for contests? I keep racking my brain and come up empty and then I back out and say contests are not for me. You make this look so easy.
ReplyDeleteMeera you are so good with writing, I can't believe that. You can write whatever you want. Thanks for reading!
DeleteGreat post! Surprising when you say this is your first attempt! Good luck on the contest!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading and your wishes Danny. Welcome here!
DeleteA nice post to read after the break,
ReplyDeleteSmart one for the contest!
Good wishes..BOL
Thanks Sir and hope your vacation was great!
DeleteChic... this was a great post... until i saw the pic, i had no clue you were writing for a product!! :) you have a great flair for prose and fiction, Saru/... :) Loved this one! :)
ReplyDeleteI've missed so much on ur blog..baapre... blame my laziness :P
Yes! you are lazy and I think you will take some time to settle in Bangalore, then you will be fine. Thanks for a lovely comment, hope the sponsor's like it too:)
DeleteHie Saru, Read it now... been busy as told ya... I loved the composition... how did the result go?
ReplyDeleteThanks Shesha, waiting for the result. *Fingers Crossed* :-)
DeleteA great story indeed.
ReplyDeleteIt's a winner for sure.
Thank you Alissa :) :) :)
DeleteGud story.. simple moments everybody can relate wid :)
ReplyDeleteit'd be so gud if in real life care proucts help gals to this much extent..
balle balle ho jati ladkiyon ki :))
Some products actually help, like shampoos and a good lotion. BTW, dancing reading the last line of your comment.
DeleteThanks for a lovely comment Jyoti!