To You, With Love...

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The day, I trusted my life with you, 
The day, I said, I do.
My heart shed a happy tear,
And I shunned all my fears.
Brick by brick, smile by smile,
This voyage took us many miles.
You always reckon what's inside,
Even when I try to hide.
Sinking together in these mellow ties, 
Let's promise each other.
As good a father you will be, 
You'll help me being a good mother.
You are my pillar of strength, 
The roots of my family tree.
Together we'll paint a picture, 
Picture perfect it will be.

Finding you seems like a fortune,
This world is now so new.
We all have our own angels,
And I have found my angel in you.

 *This is a work of fiction.
**Image Source - Here


Location: Hackensack, NJ, USA

Comments

  1. MithlashSeptember 24, 2012 at 11:32 AM

    Lovely!

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  2. Rahul BhatiaSeptember 24, 2012 at 11:43 AM

    Lovely poetry Saru,and hope this picture remains fresh as ever:)

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  3. Anupama TripathiSeptember 24, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    So nice ...
    subtle ...yet so profound ...!!
    Loved it ...!!

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  4. Found In FolsomSeptember 24, 2012 at 12:38 PM

    Beautiful..congrats girl!!

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 10:47 AM

      Thanks and it is a work of fiction, I will accept the congratulations for future :)

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  5. Ranita SinhaSeptember 24, 2012 at 12:45 PM

    Awesome Saru and hope your family tree grows more and more..:)congrats!!

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  6. UpasanaSeptember 24, 2012 at 1:06 PM

    Each line makes one go awwwww Saru! Its brilliant! Congrats!

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 10:48 AM

      Awww for such a sweet comment and congratulations accepted for future :)

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  7. प्रवीण पाण्डेयSeptember 24, 2012 at 1:09 PM

    Beautiful..

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  8. Satish MutatkarSeptember 24, 2012 at 2:56 PM

    lovely.....picture perfect and word perfect! Very very nice, a worthy piece to celebrate 1 lakh hits! Congrats!!

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  9. TaniaSeptember 24, 2012 at 3:12 PM

    Oh, how romantic is this:-) Just lovely

    Happy week to you!

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  10. Writefully YoursSeptember 24, 2012 at 6:25 PM

    If it is, what it looks, then heartiest congrats :)

    Great words :)

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  11. Harsha (@CriticLeo)September 24, 2012 at 11:31 PM

    Lovely, and so soulful! :):) I agree with a comment above, each line makes one go aww! :)

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  12. Nandita PaiSeptember 24, 2012 at 11:50 PM

    Lovely poem Saru, made me smile all the way! :) Awesome lines, each one.. Could feel the love :)

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  13. Shah NawazSeptember 25, 2012 at 12:12 AM

    Wov!!!! nicely written...

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  14. BGTSeptember 25, 2012 at 12:37 AM

    Thats amazing Saru.. Wonderfully written and apt! i wanted to ask you something and then I read its a work of fiction. Hence, I keep my words to myself :)

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 10:52 AM

      LOL. I added that line after receiving so many congratulations. Thanks for reading and liking it :)

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  15. vinaySeptember 25, 2012 at 3:49 AM

    Nicely written.
    Felt good reading it. :)

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  16. Gayatri SoniSeptember 25, 2012 at 4:33 AM

    I must say your husband must be very happy while reading this :) May god bless you with love always & you keep smiling! :)

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 10:54 AM

      He was very happy, I dedicated this poem to him. Thanks for the sweet wishes Gayatri :)

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  17. BikramSeptember 25, 2012 at 4:59 AM

    oh yes .. paint the picture .. paint the TOWNNNNNNnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

    beautiful romantic poem , loved reading it

    Bikram's

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  18. SoniaSeptember 25, 2012 at 5:01 AM

    How beautiful di:) Well, the last line *This is a work of fiction broke my heart :( I was so ready to congratulate u :) Just loved it..

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 10:55 AM

      Oh! don't worry you can congratulate me when the time comes as we will always be in touch. Thanks for reading, you are too sweet :)

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    2. SoniaOctober 1, 2012 at 3:24 AM

      Sweetness naturally oozes out when I am in a more sweeter company :) Yes we will always be in touch:) Love u <3

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    3. Saru SinghalOctober 1, 2012 at 2:26 PM

      Yes, we will be.

      XOXOXO :)

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  19. Owais Ashraf PhotographySeptember 25, 2012 at 5:40 AM

    i am out of words to capture the beauty of your work...congratulations.

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  20. Alka GurhaSeptember 25, 2012 at 6:38 AM

    Lovely thoughtful weave...

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  21. Sheldon CoelhoSeptember 25, 2012 at 12:03 PM

    Quite beautiful. Well done!

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  22. TTTSeptember 25, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    awwwwwww...... this is such a lovely poem . A truly beautiful poem just full of love ...

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  23. Sri ValliSeptember 25, 2012 at 12:15 PM

    I got a pleasant feeling while reading this poem....So sweet and romantic!

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  24. Akshay Kumar GSeptember 25, 2012 at 12:55 PM

    Ahh such a beautiful and romantic poem. Pure and innocent - the way it should be. :)

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  25. MadhureshSeptember 25, 2012 at 8:46 PM

    Just a single word, 'Lovely'!!

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  26. raSeptember 26, 2012 at 12:29 AM

    wooow .. so beautiful...

    once more i fell in love with your poetry .. every lover should read this masterpiece ..!

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 10:59 AM

      I wish and hope they like it too. Thanks for reading and a sweet comment! :)

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  27. MeowwSeptember 26, 2012 at 12:43 AM

    Beautiful words! wow effect!

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  28. AmitAagSeptember 26, 2012 at 12:56 AM

    Beautiful poem, Saru!
    *This is a work of fiction:)

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  29. Jayashree SrivatsanSeptember 26, 2012 at 1:41 AM

    Very beautiful Saru!

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  30. YashikaSeptember 26, 2012 at 1:58 AM

    lovable..wow!

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  31. Rajni SinhaSeptember 26, 2012 at 1:59 AM

    Absolutely beautiful

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  32. ekta khetanSeptember 26, 2012 at 3:08 AM

    Beautiful...Loved it....there's nothing as precious as love, togetherness and understanding!

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:02 AM

      True, nothing more precious than these feelings. :)

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  33. PritiSeptember 26, 2012 at 3:22 AM

    Awww...what a lovey poem, simply heart touching! Yeah, it is "work of fiction". :-)

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  34. magiceyeSeptember 26, 2012 at 5:52 AM

    Beautifully idyllic

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  35. Suhas NaikSeptember 26, 2012 at 6:44 AM

    Lovely compostion

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  36. gurufrequentSeptember 26, 2012 at 6:55 AM

    *this is work of fiction ...LOL
    i hope your hubby will see the disclaimer ..
    but...this is some awesome poem :) loved it :)

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:05 AM

      He saw that and I had to add it, I was getting a lot of congratulations. Thanks for reading the poem.

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  37. Privy TriflesSeptember 26, 2012 at 7:30 AM

    Beautiful poem .... it is simply so romantic <3

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  38. KunalSeptember 26, 2012 at 7:33 AM

    Awww!!!
    This would please any...romantic or otherwise! :)

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  39. indu chhibberSeptember 26, 2012 at 9:52 AM

    Beautiful lines Saru,your thought flow & expression are wonderful.

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  40. DibyaSeptember 26, 2012 at 11:27 AM

    Finding you seems like a fortune,
    This world is now so new.
    We all have our own angels,
    And I have found my angel in you.


    Lines to remember forever. :) Awesome poem indeed. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:07 AM

      Glad you liked those lines. Thanks for reading Dibiya :)

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  41. Subhrashis AdhikariSeptember 26, 2012 at 11:36 AM

    u really needed to put that last comment :p

    beautiful writing...so romantic...

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  42. IrfanuddinSeptember 26, 2012 at 11:43 AM

    as usual.... Awesome...:)

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  43. GokulSeptember 26, 2012 at 12:16 PM

    Nice one!

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  44. PanchaliSeptember 26, 2012 at 12:38 PM

    awww..the emotions flow naturally. Let me congratulate both of you r for your love and togetherness, and wish you peaceful and wonderful times ahead in life. May God bless you both ♥
    Very nice :)

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  45. UnknownSeptember 26, 2012 at 12:41 PM

    Been away from blogverse for a year... good to be back..!! and read your poems..!! great to know that you are still rocking..!! Nice poem to say the least.. and I hated the postscript that its a work of fiction.. !! (No reader cares, they are happy to be in a fantasy land..)

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:15 AM

      Oh! I had to add the disclaimer, I was getting a lot of congratulations. Welcome back and thanks for a beautiful comment.

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  46. Ashish KumarSeptember 26, 2012 at 12:46 PM

    wonderful creation... superlike... :)

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  47. UnknownSeptember 26, 2012 at 1:33 PM

    ..sweet and beautiful.. :)
    sometimes the good things are so much repeated that an article looks pretty average.. but the same subject has been dealt with beautifully by you..

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  48. SwapnaSeptember 26, 2012 at 1:47 PM

    And they lived happily ever after..... Just what I like!

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  49. provoqdSeptember 26, 2012 at 3:17 PM

    Had the disclaimer not been there at the end, I would have continued dreaming along with the lines in the post :)
    Nicely written Saru :)
    Keep posting :)

    Regards

    Jay
    http://road-to-sanitarium.blogspot.in/

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:21 AM

      Thank you Jay but I had to add that disclaimer, I was getting a lot of congratulations :)

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  50. We CognizeSeptember 26, 2012 at 6:03 PM

    Cute lovely poem :)

    I really wish more and more people dream positive and have the strength and honesty to keep the dreams and promises.

    Love :)

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:25 AM

      I wish so too and world will be such a beautiful place then.
      Thanks for reading...❤

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  51. D.NambiarSeptember 26, 2012 at 7:28 PM

    Lovely. I can relate to this. :)
    Fiction? I was hoping there you had 'news' for us.

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  52. D.NambiarSeptember 26, 2012 at 7:28 PM

    That's a lovely picture too. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:56 AM

      Good to know that you can relate and it is a fiction for the time being for me. And yes, the picture is so beautiful.

      Thanks for reading dear :)

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  53. manjulika pramodSeptember 26, 2012 at 11:23 PM

    Nice creation..

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  54. ArtiSeptember 26, 2012 at 11:50 PM

    WOW! Lovely emotions, touches a sweet chord! Very very beautiful, Saru :)

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  55. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2012 at 1:07 AM

    So damn beautiful -i am in love with this post -its such a cutee one :) :)

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  56. T F CarthickSeptember 27, 2012 at 1:41 AM

    A love poem with a practical touch instead of making it all airy-fairy and dreamy.Nice.

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  57. the little princessSeptember 27, 2012 at 2:00 AM

    At the end u say "it is a work of fiction" was it intended to be that way to add that touch of humour?

    btw..so beautifully written!!

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 12:20 PM

      Humor? Sorry, I didn't understand your question. :(

      Thanks for reading.:)

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  58. JennySeptember 27, 2012 at 3:42 AM

    Oh My Saru! I guess this is what it means to be in true unconditional love. To be of one another for ever. Lovey words. We all wish to attain that some day!

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 12:22 PM

      I wish too. These happy poems are so beautiful, world looks a better place after reading them. Thanks for reading Jenny!

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  59. UnknownSeptember 27, 2012 at 4:28 AM

    beautifully put:) i really like the repitition of words in certain consecutive lines.
    "Brick by brick, smile by smile,
    This voyage took us many miles." really goood:)

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  60. UnknownSeptember 27, 2012 at 4:40 AM

    This is definitely not fiction. So beautiful and Amen to that. God bless :D

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 12:24 PM

      It is a fiction for me, for time being. Thanks for your wishes Ghazala :)

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  61. ilaksheeSeptember 27, 2012 at 4:42 AM

    What a warm poem...stay happy!

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  62. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2012 at 7:28 AM

    So gorgeous!

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  63. Suhas NaikSeptember 27, 2012 at 8:43 AM

    Excellent poem, simple and sensible.

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  64. NoopurSeptember 27, 2012 at 12:35 PM

    Loved the lines.... beautiful... :)

    http://apparitionofmine.blogspot.in/

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  65. Chapters From My LifeSeptember 27, 2012 at 12:37 PM

    Your poetry makes me to want to fall in love all over again. Very beautiful

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  66. sulaiman saitSeptember 27, 2012 at 4:24 PM

    short, sweet and a lovely post mam. .!!

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  67. RajSeptember 27, 2012 at 8:35 PM

    Love and togetherness cannot be expressed more poetically and soulfully. It was beautifully simple and yet simply beautiful. Your words bring a smile in everyone’s heart. This poem is a lovely tribute to you two lovely people. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalOctober 1, 2012 at 2:25 PM

      Glad you liked it. At times, simple words are more profound than heavy vocabulary.

      Thanks for reading Raj :)

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    2. RajOctober 1, 2012 at 8:31 PM

      You don't have to ever thank me for reading. :) If you write something, then I will definitely read it. In fact I have to thank you for writing and giving me the privilege to read. :)

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    3. Saru SinghalOctober 3, 2012 at 9:56 AM

      Awww...thats so sweet of you. On a serious note, your comment is very motivating and inspiring. :)

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  68. Ruchi JainSeptember 28, 2012 at 12:53 AM

    as usual..superb one,,:)

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  69. Someone is SpecialSeptember 28, 2012 at 12:55 AM

    Poetry Perfect! This is a gem post Saru :)

    Someone is Special

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  70. Sunil PadiyarSeptember 28, 2012 at 5:42 AM

    How romantic Saru-jee :) Lovely...

    P.S: Is it really a work of fiction? :)

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  71. Rakesh KumarSeptember 28, 2012 at 12:25 PM

    lovely.
    presented emotions beautifully.

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  72. Anu ~*~September 28, 2012 at 1:47 PM

    Superab saru di ... Very well exectued !!
    Liked it !!
    Way2express~

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  73. Tarang SinhaSeptember 29, 2012 at 6:02 AM

    Beautiful poem Saru! You expressed the emotions really well:)

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  74. Saru SinghalSeptember 29, 2012 at 11:08 AM

    Yeah, true, very true and thanks for reading :)

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  75. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comSeptember 30, 2012 at 1:29 PM

    sweet :) hope d picture stays perfect n beautiful always :)

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  76. joshi danielOctober 1, 2012 at 2:44 AM

    sweet :)

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  77. RachnaOctober 2, 2012 at 9:55 AM

    Why fiction? I thought it was perfect for your hubby :). Great one as always.

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    1. Saru SinghalOctober 3, 2012 at 9:57 AM

      Actually, I got a lot of congratulatory messages after posting this poem. So, added the disclaimer. Thanks for reading Rachna :)

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  78. Mr.DEEPAK DODDAMANIOctober 12, 2012 at 12:11 PM

    Hey Saru; that was really nice.very emotional and touching.

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  79. Chetan MaheshwariOctober 14, 2012 at 1:16 PM

    very sweet:)

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  80. AnonymousOctober 15, 2012 at 10:53 AM

    Thanks saru for wonderful and impressive thought...I used it to impress my GF...and it worked very well...Thanks ....

    MALAV

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    1. Saru SinghalOctober 15, 2012 at 2:29 PM

      WOW! Happy to know that :) Stay together and Stay Blessed!

      Thanks for reading.
      Saru :)

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  81. JincyOctober 17, 2012 at 9:52 AM

    Awesome! :)

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  82. Shamsud AhmedOctober 17, 2012 at 1:08 PM

    Beautiful...Simple and Powerful.

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  83. OnePourTreeOctober 23, 2012 at 1:41 PM

    Good one!!!!!!

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  84. Dipthi SomeshOctober 25, 2012 at 7:46 AM


    "Together we'll paint a picture,
    Picture perfect it will be."

    love it.. love it.. <3
    and more than nythin, love the title..

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    1. Saru SinghalOctober 25, 2012 at 2:14 PM

      I dedicated this to my Husband. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading it.:)

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  85. SindhuMarch 8, 2013 at 8:49 PM

    You wrote this..but I read it as my words. Best in life is a good partner. Well written Saru..

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  86. AnonymousJune 1, 2013 at 7:56 AM

    This is beautiful! So wonderful to read such lyrical words in today's times! God Bless!

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  87. Hey Wait, Listen!August 6, 2013 at 4:01 AM

    WOW, LOVELY! JUST TOO GOOD! :)

    http://howdypancakes.blogspot.in/

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  88. Vishal BheerooDecember 31, 2015 at 8:00 AM

    Happy New Year, Saru. What a beautiful post to read and end the year. Love is all that we have:)

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  89. Raj VoraFebruary 7, 2016 at 10:48 PM

    There is magic in the way you mince words; it grabs attention and connects me :-)

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