ये लफ्ज़...

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मुद्दत से दबा के रखा था,
अब बेरोक जुबा पे आते हैं!
थोड़े नमकीन, थोड़े आवारा से,
कमबख्त, ये लफ्ज़ रुसवा कर जाते हैं!

उसकी आहट पे परेशान हों, अब वो दिन गये,
धीरे-धीरे हर बार अब कुछ नया कह जाते है,
थोड़े हसीन, थोड़े आवारा से,
कमबख्त, ये लफ्ज़ रुसवा कर जाते हैं!

उलज़ गई कल मैं बातोँ के जाल में,
मेरी बेबसी पे भी गुस्ताख कहाँ शरमाते है,
थोड़े  बेखॊफ़, थोड़े आवारा से,
कमबख्त, ये लफ्ज़ रुसवा कर  जाते हैं!

छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा और बातें करें चुपचाप!
मेरी आँखों में ही छुपे हैं मेरे ज़ज्बात!!

Location: Hackensack, NJ, USA

Comments

  1. AkankshaDecember 24, 2012 at 11:49 AM

    Wow! Truly conveys how routine things are special as well :)
    Lovely,really!

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  2. Rahul BhatiaDecember 24, 2012 at 11:52 AM

    Words ,लफ्ज़, will never fail you, Saru:) Beautifully penned!

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 25, 2012 at 4:15 PM

      Thank you Sir for a beautiful comment, it's very encouraging as well :)

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  3. ShashankDecember 24, 2012 at 11:53 AM

    OMG u r such a good poet...loved this poem...छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा और बातें करें चुपचाप!
    मेरी आँखों में ही छुपे हैं मेरे ज़ज्बात!!...awesome...

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  4. Some solved riddlesDecember 24, 2012 at 11:53 AM

    wow
    great one
    excellent poem

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  5. Anupam KarnDecember 24, 2012 at 11:55 AM

    छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा और बातें करें चुपचाप!
    मेरी आँखों में ही छुपे हैं मेरे ज़ज्बात!!

    Good One Saru!!!

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 25, 2012 at 4:35 PM

      Thank you Anupam, Glad you liked the ending couplet.

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  6. Ruchi JainDecember 24, 2012 at 12:08 PM

    Every time..you rock with ur poems....

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  7. UnknownDecember 24, 2012 at 12:18 PM

    Hey Saru, you've not only played with the words but won the game...Cheers and Merry Christmas!!! :)

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 25, 2012 at 4:38 PM

      That was a sweet comment Priti. Merry Christmas to you and yours. :)

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  8. प्रवीण पाण्डेयDecember 24, 2012 at 12:49 PM

    कितना कुछ कह जाती आँखें,
    सूखी ही बह जाती आँखें।

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  9. Writefully YoursDecember 24, 2012 at 5:51 PM

    Ah! Nice, refreshing, short n sweet! :)

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  10. Harsha (@CriticLeo)December 25, 2012 at 8:35 AM

    Hehe! This is lovely! :) Closing lines are brilliant.

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  11. BikramDecember 25, 2012 at 1:34 PM

    they do say that Eyes tell the truth always :)

    Bikram's

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  12. AnonymousDecember 25, 2012 at 7:37 PM

    Loved it :)

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  13. SoniaDecember 26, 2012 at 2:54 AM

    This one is killer :) And the last lines in bold are just bang on..

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 26, 2012 at 8:59 AM

      Thank you Sonia and congrats on the Engagement :) God Bless!

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  14. jahidDecember 26, 2012 at 9:08 AM

    Wow, Superb !

    Regards,
    Jahid
    My Blog

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  15. RahulDecember 26, 2012 at 9:54 AM

    Beautiful..

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 26, 2012 at 2:15 PM

      Thank you Rahul and good to see you after a long time...

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  16. MS MahawarDecember 26, 2012 at 10:16 AM

    मैं रुसवा हूँ , मैं तनहा हूँ
    उस चांदनी रात का एक दिलकश लम्हा हूँ
    अल्फाज़ नहीं मेरे पास तारीफ करने को
    ये जज़्बात ही काफी है जो बहुत कुछ कह जाते हैं......
    .
    these lines from my side dedicated to u and ur great poem...
    Simply Awesome creation!

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  17. Rajni SinhaDecember 26, 2012 at 12:17 PM

    very very beatiful

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  18. Gayatri SoniDecember 26, 2012 at 1:01 PM

    Wah-wah, wah-wah! Well, it doesn't fit with your blog, coz lafzon ke sahare hi to aap sab kuch kehte hain! ;)

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 26, 2012 at 2:22 PM

      Bilkul Sahi!!! :) Glad you liked reading it Gayatri. :)

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  19. CYNOSUREDecember 26, 2012 at 4:13 PM

    sometimes its easy to let eyes say the truth coz finding the perfect words ain't easy everytime...
    Beautifully composed...

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 27, 2012 at 9:42 AM

      Yeah, eyes can speak more effectively. Thanks for reading and finding it beautiful!

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  20. Chetan MaheshwariDecember 26, 2012 at 8:26 PM

    GOod display of emotions...and very good use of urdu words..liked it

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 27, 2012 at 9:46 AM

      Glad you liked it Chetan. Thanks for reading too :)

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  21. MithlashDecember 27, 2012 at 12:09 AM

    Beautiful! You played nicely and sweetly with the words and I liked these lines " उलज़ गई कल मैं बातोँ के जाल में,
    मेरी बेबसी पे भी गुस्ताख कहाँ शरमाते है,
    थोड़े बेखॊफ़, थोड़े आवारा से,
    कमबख्त, ये लफ्ज़ रुसवा कर जाते हैं !"

    Keep Rocking! :)

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 27, 2012 at 9:48 AM

      These are my favorite too, though many liked the ending couplet. Thanks for your encouragement. It's always a pleasure to have you here :)

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  22. KunalDecember 27, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    A hindi entry after long. Worth the wait, I will say..
    Been reading on blogger after long. :-)
    A happy new year in advance.. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 27, 2012 at 9:50 AM

      I don't remember when I last logged in the reading list of blogger. I looks so jam packed now. It's good to have you back and wish you a happy and prosperous New Year.

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  23. indu chhibberDecember 27, 2012 at 10:54 AM

    Saru your words do not betray you--they convey a lot!!!

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  24. AnonymousDecember 27, 2012 at 11:09 AM

    The Google Translate isn't working, but I can just imagine how lovely your words are.

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  25. MadhureshDecember 27, 2012 at 5:16 PM

    खूबसूरत नज़्म।
    "उलझ गई कल मैं बातोँ के जाल में,
    मेरी बेबसी पे भी गुस्ताख कहाँ शरमाते है"

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  26. Kulwant HappyDecember 27, 2012 at 8:58 PM

    उम्‍दा लफ्ज

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  27. HemantDecember 28, 2012 at 4:08 AM

    Subhanallah!!!!

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  28. provoqdDecember 28, 2012 at 5:05 AM

    Hi Saru,

    Bohot khoob likha hai.
    "ulajh gayi kal main baaton k jaal mein". Irshaaad :) :) :)
    Keep it up.

    Regards

    Jay
    My Blog | My FB Page

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 28, 2012 at 10:29 AM

      Glad you liked it Jay. Hindi poems have their own charm. Thanks for reading. :)

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  29. Saurabh ChawlaDecember 28, 2012 at 6:05 AM

    lovely one :)

    http://saurabhchawla2345.blogspot.in/2012/12/reincarnation.html

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  30. Anupama TripathiDecember 28, 2012 at 7:28 AM

    छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा और बातें करें चुपचाप!
    मेरी आँखों में ही छुपे हैं मेरे ज़ज्बात!!
    बहुत सुंदर एहसास .....

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  31. Akshay Kumar GDecember 28, 2012 at 9:49 AM

    Ahh so beautiful. You know how much I love your Hindi poems, I have been waiting to read a poem in Hindi since a long time and finally my wish has been fulfilled. :D

    Although, at first I found it slightly tough to grasp the meaning of the words (mostly due to my limited knowledge in Hindi), but after I read it a few times, I just fell in love with it. :):)

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 28, 2012 at 10:40 AM

      I was thinking of writing the meaning of few words as a footer to the post but then thought it would take away the beauty of this poem. However, after reading your comment, I think I should do it in future.

      Thanks for making the effort to read it and I'm so happy that you liked it. :)

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  32. Ashish KumarDecember 29, 2012 at 3:18 AM

    वाह वाह ! क्या बात है |
    बहुत अच्छी लगी आपके कलम से निकली आपके लब्जों के बोल |
    बहुत सुन्दर |

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  33. BGTDecember 31, 2012 at 6:32 AM

    Everytime I read one of your poems, I become more and more confident to say that you are one of the best poets I personally know! :) God bless.. And a Happy and a poetic new year :)

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    1. Saru SinghalDecember 31, 2012 at 11:42 AM

      You just made my day Binu. You know how much I admire your style of writing. Thank you very much and Wish you and your family a very happy new year, specially to your lil angel :)

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  34. BrijeshDecember 31, 2012 at 7:36 AM

    Bohat khoob. Itne kam shabdo mein bhi kitni gehrai hai.

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  35. RAKESH KUMAR SRIVASTAVA 'RAHI'January 7, 2013 at 5:31 AM

    लफ्जों का साहारा का सहारा तब जब वो सामने न हो, नहीं तो आपके छोड़ दे लफ्जों का साहारा से पुर्णतः सहमत हैं , खुबसूरत रचना।

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  36. raMarch 1, 2013 at 5:33 AM

    just one word - WOW!

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