मुहब्बत

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हर मौसम में हम जिया करते है!
मुहब्बत के जाम दिन में भी पिया करते है!
आग को लगा कर गले,
बारिश की तमन्ना किया करते है!
शाम को खुशबू जिस्म की,
साँसों में लिया करते है!
रौशनी को अँधेरे में छुपा के,
धीरे-धीरे चांदनी किया करते है!
नज़रो से बातें करके, 
चुपचाप जिया करते है।
शायद...
हर मौसम में हम युही मुहब्बत किया करते है!


Location: Hackensack, NJ, USA

Comments

  1. Anupama TripathiMarch 31, 2013 at 12:15 PM

    खिले रंग और ये मौसम ....मुहब्बत रंग लाती है ...!!
    सुन्दर रचना सारु जी ....

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  2. ANULATA RAJ NAIRMarch 31, 2013 at 1:48 PM

    मोहब्बत तो मोहब्बत है...मौसम के साथ बदल जाए वो आशिक नहीं....

    too good Saru...
    love
    anu

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  3. AJNABIMarch 31, 2013 at 3:19 PM

    Nyc poem.... Najro se baate krke chupchap jiya krte h... Awesome... You are very well hindi poem... Keep writing...

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  4. ओंकारनाथ मिश्र March 31, 2013 at 6:54 PM

    इस जाम को हर वक़्त पीना चाहिए हर किसी को :) सारा क्लेश मिट जाएगा.

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  5. Brad DuggMarch 31, 2013 at 9:37 PM

    hum aapki nazme padh padh kar khushiyon ki jaam piya karte hai
    aur ek nazm aapki padhne, har din jiya karte hai

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  6. Rahul BhatiaApril 1, 2013 at 12:13 AM

    सुंदर शब्द की माला:)

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  7. AnonymousApril 1, 2013 at 12:45 AM

    good one :)

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  8. Ranjana's craft blogApril 1, 2013 at 12:51 AM

    Nice one. Though it is difficult for me to read Hindi, loved this. Love is love.

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  9. Shah NawazApril 1, 2013 at 1:03 AM

    वाह! बेहद खुबसूरत अहसास!!!!

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  10. Tall Girl in Japan April 1, 2013 at 2:21 AM

    Bahut Badhiya !

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  11. MithlashApril 1, 2013 at 5:28 AM

    बहुत ही बढ़िया रचना सरू !

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  12. Saurabh ChawlaApril 1, 2013 at 7:44 AM

    wah wah :) Awesome one :) truly inspired me :)

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  13. प्रवीण पाण्डेयApril 1, 2013 at 1:29 PM

    अपना जलना, अपना छलना,
    कब सीखेंगे जीना अपना।

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  14. Ankita April 2, 2013 at 1:28 AM

    lovely Saru! aap to pakki shayar ban gaien hain!

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  15. RajnishApril 2, 2013 at 4:36 AM

    Mohabbat to Mohabbat hai...bina shabdo ke hi ek nai kahani ban jati hai..

    beautiful poem :)

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  16. Writefully YoursApril 2, 2013 at 10:11 AM

    Comes Spring, Comes Love :)

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  17. MalinyApril 2, 2013 at 11:05 AM

    i could read it from the first word till the last. I thought i would have forgotten my school hindi lessons. The poem is soulful and beautiful Saru :)

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  18. Jyoti MishraApril 2, 2013 at 11:45 AM

    love's in the air..
    and its everywhere all d time :)

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  19. Ritesh AgarwalApril 2, 2013 at 1:59 PM

    some of the lines are really powerful...U are one of those rare writers who hardly writes anything bad.....

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  20. Anupam KarnApril 2, 2013 at 2:18 PM

    Kaisa ye ishq hai...ajab sa...hai :)

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  21. UnknownApril 2, 2013 at 5:15 PM

    This is simply "Wowww"

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  22. UnknownApril 2, 2013 at 11:09 PM

    simply beautiful.

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  23. Vaishali JainApril 3, 2013 at 3:27 AM

    Ooooh! :D

    SO romantic ^_^

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  24. shvetilakApril 3, 2013 at 6:04 AM

    bahut atchi :)

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  25. Neo ImaginationsApril 3, 2013 at 8:52 AM

    One lethal killer you become, when you hold your pen to ink on blog posts. Mouth Zipped.

    http://neoimaginations.blogspot.in/2013/01/thru-my-lens-gwalior-shilp-mela-2013.html

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  26. Shamsud AhmedApril 3, 2013 at 12:43 PM

    every season is about love....maybe. nice write.love it

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  27. PanchaliApril 3, 2013 at 2:03 PM

    Be-had sundar!

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  28. C SureshApril 3, 2013 at 2:19 PM

    Muhabbat ko andar samaakar, shabdon mein diya karte hain? Saru - lovely!

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  29. RioZeeApril 4, 2013 at 1:14 AM

    sheer talent at it's ultimate. Bejaan shabdo me bhi jaan phook deti hai aapki kala. I always dreaded theft of your work. you have to be utterly cautious.

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  30. UnknownApril 4, 2013 at 2:15 AM

    achi h bahut...
    mai bi kuch esa likhti hu..
    vichar milte h apne shayad...

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  31. AnonymousApril 4, 2013 at 2:23 AM

    i've come here after a very long time! and read all the posts i missed. i want to sum up my comment and say, You get better each day!
    maza aa gaya! :)

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  32. BushraApril 4, 2013 at 3:00 AM

    Bade muhabbat bhare alfaaz hain Saruji:)

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  33. UnknownApril 4, 2013 at 3:16 AM

    Hi Dear Saruji,
    You have such nice Blog and i like you writing skills.
    Really those words touch my heart some where.
    Let such things come again,
    Cheers to you...;-)

    Rahul kale

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  34. डॉ. जेन्नी शबनमApril 4, 2013 at 4:50 AM

    दिन हो या रात मोहब्बत का जाम पीते ही रहना... बहुत प्यारी कविता. बहुत खूब. बधाई.

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  35. AkankshaApril 4, 2013 at 5:11 AM

    Beautiful, as always! :) I really love your hindi verses.

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  36. Akshay Kumar GApril 4, 2013 at 6:32 AM

    You are a pure romantic at heart, more so when you write love poems in Hindi. :) Gave me so much joy reading it. :)

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  37. umashankarApril 4, 2013 at 6:34 AM

    Who says rhyme and meter are the only wheels of the chariot of emotions?

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  38. RiàApril 4, 2013 at 7:15 AM

    Wow! Just wow...no words for this poem.

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  39. indu chhibberApril 4, 2013 at 11:32 AM

    very sweet poem-picture of a true romantic--or romantic saru?
    Love n hugs

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  40. asteria's canvassApril 4, 2013 at 3:22 PM

    hum hindi me apne khayalat wyakt karna chahte hai, fir baaki sab ki padh ke draft me bhool jaate hai...:P

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  41. UnknownApril 5, 2013 at 2:26 PM

    Wonderful lyrics and sweet recital in soundcloud !

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  42. Manjulika PramodApril 7, 2013 at 11:06 PM

    wah yeh mohabbat ke anokhe-ankahe rang..

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  43. D.NambiarApril 8, 2013 at 7:36 PM

    Beautiful!! :)

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  44. Deepak KripalApril 10, 2013 at 1:03 AM

    Yet another beautiful composition this.
    And you know what struck me the most about this one.
    आग को लगा कर गले,
    बारिश की तमन्ना किया करते है!
    I am always in for contradiction in feelings.

    LOVED IT. :)

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  45. MadhureshApril 10, 2013 at 7:48 PM


    वाह, माशाल्लाह! बेहतरीन पंक्तियाँ!

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  46. Monali S ChuriApril 12, 2013 at 5:20 AM

    nice composition saru...

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  47. Gayatri SoniApril 13, 2013 at 2:01 PM

    Tu shaayar to nahin???? ;) :)
    Nice shaayari! :)

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  48. Harsha (@CriticLeo)April 21, 2013 at 7:13 AM

    This is brilliant - Aag ko laga kar gale, baarish ki tamanna kiya karte! And this - रौशनी को अँधेरे में छुपा के, धीरे-धीरे चांदनी किया करते है! Such a dramatic composition. Bollywood will totally love this. :)

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  49. raApril 23, 2013 at 1:28 AM

    so beautiful .. you are so good with words ..!

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  50. AnonymousJune 7, 2013 at 3:11 AM

    Bahut Khub..

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  51. UnknownJuly 22, 2013 at 3:42 PM

    very touchy!

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  52. rahul kumarAugust 11, 2013 at 6:45 AM

    nice words, nice feelings

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  53. संजय भास्‍कर September 22, 2016 at 7:37 AM

    बहुत ही शानदार........दिल को छूती पंक्तियाँ ।

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