Scintillating Mornings...

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Melting in cold
Rubbing my fingers on your palm
Crossing my legs over yours
By ten minutes, I snooze the alarm

I press my body against yours 
Whisper a word or two
Drowning in the swivet of desires
My body feels blue

It happened last night
I could barely ask
Tides, waves; oceans deep
You touched all my body parts

Night consummated
It hummed a passionate soliloquy
Morning longs endlessly
Building its own fantasy

As you slide away
Uncovering lithe frame
I sigh, I sigh one more morning
With my desires still aflame 


...and I sing, 'Abhi naa jao chhod kar ki dil abhi bhara nahin'
 

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Comments

  1. Rahul BhatiaFebruary 19, 2014 at 2:59 AM

    Wow! Such a romantic verse setting desires aflame, Saru:)

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  2. Sindhu Devi KFebruary 19, 2014 at 3:34 AM

    How romantic saru!

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  3. Red HandedFebruary 19, 2014 at 4:14 AM

    Ah...the passion unfolds into something better!
    This was beautiful!

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  4. UppalFebruary 19, 2014 at 9:34 AM

    Romance and passion at their peak. Too bad,there are alarm clocks to steal the precious moments!

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  5. BloggerWloggerFebruary 19, 2014 at 10:08 AM

    Amazing! With each passing poem, you're having an even bigger fan! Beautiful :)

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 4, 2014 at 5:26 AM

      Awww.... You just gave me a reason to smile :)

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  6. Blasphemous AestheteFebruary 19, 2014 at 10:29 AM

    This is one sensual piece, a beautiful aftermath of culmination of desires!

    Awesome!

    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  7. Chetan MaheshwariFebruary 19, 2014 at 1:46 PM

    This is sensuous and beautiful.

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  8. Danny SimonFebruary 19, 2014 at 9:27 PM

    Beautiful! Love in the air?

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 4, 2014 at 5:27 AM

      Thanks and yes, love is always in air for me at least :)

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  9. संजय भास्‍कर February 19, 2014 at 11:10 PM

    Amazing! With each passing poem,..Awesome!

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  10. Jayashree SrivatsanFebruary 19, 2014 at 11:18 PM

    Passion aflame !

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  11. Deaf MammaFebruary 20, 2014 at 12:25 AM

    Bliss

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  12. HemantFebruary 20, 2014 at 1:39 AM

    Alarm clocks...worse :)
    And such a passionate poem...loved it!!

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 4, 2014 at 5:28 AM

      Damn, the alarm clock :D

      Glad you liked it, Hemant. :)

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  13. MiFebruary 20, 2014 at 7:10 AM

    Wow...loved how you ended it...this new twist in poetry writing could only be done by you...

    Superb, sensuous and very innovative! :)

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 4, 2014 at 5:29 AM

      <3

      And the effort is duly rewarded with a beautiful comment. :)

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  14. joshi danielFebruary 21, 2014 at 12:49 AM

    passionate :)

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  15. reemaFebruary 21, 2014 at 7:13 AM

    cool :-)

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  16. Pooja AbhayFebruary 21, 2014 at 2:12 PM

    This poem has some nice rhythm to it. I can hum it all day long. Beautiful. :)

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  17. Ankur AnandFebruary 24, 2014 at 5:12 PM

    blissful and passionate !

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  18. Alka GurhaFebruary 25, 2014 at 1:20 AM

    Uff! Hotness. Beauty too.

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  19. Writefully YoursFebruary 25, 2014 at 5:47 AM

    Another one of your sensual masterpieces! It's unleashing of desires with purity. Loved how you ended with the song...
    Btw, I think you have used the same image in another post of similar thought and that's why when I saw it on FB I thought you shared an old post...

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 4, 2014 at 5:31 AM

      Yes, whenever I have limited access to internet, I use pictures already uploaded on blogger. Saves many GBs.

      Thanks for reading Prateek :)

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  20. AnonymousFebruary 25, 2014 at 1:38 PM

    Such pure unadulterated passion! Such beautiful use of words! Mindblowing!

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  21. UnknownFebruary 25, 2014 at 10:44 PM

    Passion, emotion, romance, pure love .......all in one!!

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  22. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2014 at 12:15 AM

    Lovely. Unadulterated. Pure. A tad sensual. I could go on and on :)

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  23. RoshniFebruary 26, 2014 at 12:23 AM

    A very sensuous piece with a very sweet song!

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  24. Namrata MahalingamFebruary 26, 2014 at 2:24 AM

    A passionate post!

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  25. Namrata MahalingamFebruary 26, 2014 at 2:24 AM

    Love that picture!!!

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  26. Midnight scribblesFebruary 26, 2014 at 6:05 AM

    Wow. Beautifully expressed :)

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  27. Bhavana LalwaniFebruary 26, 2014 at 10:05 AM

    hehehehe .. be careful kahin censor board ki nazar naa pad jaaye :P

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  28. Preethi VenugopalaFebruary 26, 2014 at 10:23 AM

    Hot..Hot.. Hot..
    Sets temperatures soaring.. :)

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  29. UnknownFebruary 26, 2014 at 10:52 AM

    I will recite this on my wedding night. :)

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  30. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2014 at 11:09 AM

    Ah - so lyrically lovely.

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  31. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2014 at 2:00 PM

    Sensuous yet not vulgar! Lovely poem.

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  32. AmitAagFebruary 27, 2014 at 1:04 AM

    Scintillating!

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  33. Neeraj KumarFebruary 27, 2014 at 1:17 AM

    Lovely and amazing!!!!!!!!

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  34. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2014 at 1:32 AM

    Scintillating writing I say :)

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  35. UnknownFebruary 27, 2014 at 2:15 AM

    Beautiful and Romantic.

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  36. UnknownFebruary 27, 2014 at 2:21 AM

    I could feel the passion and not one word made me feel uncomfortable. What a classy piece of romance. Hats off to you Saru.

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    1. Saru SinghalMarch 4, 2014 at 5:47 AM

      Humbled with your generous feedback, Athena. :)

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  37. Puru@ShadowsGaloreFebruary 27, 2014 at 2:35 AM

    Phew ! Rekha comes to my mind :)

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  38. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2014 at 4:30 AM

    Wonderful!!

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  39. Afshan ShaikFebruary 27, 2014 at 9:51 AM

    aah !
    a sizzling one :)

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  40. Gayatri SoniFebruary 27, 2014 at 11:00 AM

    Very romantic ;)

    Abhi na jao chhod kar.... ;)

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  41. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2014 at 11:30 PM

    Aha, passionate.

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  42. A Homemaker's UtopiaFebruary 28, 2014 at 3:14 AM

    Romantic :-)

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  43. AnonymousMarch 2, 2014 at 12:53 PM

    Too good. Song added charm to the poem.

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  44. UnknownMarch 3, 2014 at 10:48 AM

    As ik was submerged in the theme of your poem,i felt"Tides, waves; oceans deep"Just great.

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  45. RachnaMarch 3, 2014 at 11:43 PM

    Aha! Filled with passion, this one :).

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  46. Saru SinghalMarch 4, 2014 at 5:45 AM

    :-)

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  47. AnonymousFebruary 1, 2015 at 11:47 PM

    So passionate and lovely.

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  48. Aayesha S HakimMay 13, 2015 at 9:11 AM

    This is ultra romantic! :D

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  49. Saru SinghalMay 13, 2015 at 3:06 PM

    Thanks Ashwini. :)

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  50. Roma Gupta SinhaSeptember 24, 2015 at 11:34 AM

    Wow Words :) Loved them to the core....

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  51. VaisakhiSeptember 27, 2015 at 5:11 AM

    Too much love! Beautiful Poem Saru di :)

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