Sing a rain song...

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Hold me,
Twirl those arms around my waist.
Tap your feet to the symphony,
Kiss me gently on my face.

Our senses will fade a little,
As we'll step into trance.
With lips interlocked,
Heart doing a happy dance.

Coloring me all red,
Heat in the body will flow.
Transporting me to a far off land,
With fine wine and French chateau.

Wait a bit longer,
Let's not rush.
With rain steaming my body,
I can never have enough.

There has to be something first,
Something that never goes wrong.
Rain, kiss, love, passion,
And a rain song.

So, what's your favorite rain song? Here's mine ~


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  1. K.A. AcharyaJuly 14, 2014 at 10:13 AM

    Wonderful poem Saru. :)

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  2. UnknownJuly 14, 2014 at 11:23 AM

    phew....need an cold shower now! :D.....How about....Kaate nahi katthe ye din ye raat Mr India 1987 :)

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 16, 2014 at 10:15 AM

      That's really beautiful and Sridevi looked stunning in that song.

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  3. UnknownJuly 14, 2014 at 11:27 AM

    Dekho Na - Song - FANAA - Aamir Khan | Kajol two of my fav.....Saru, yeh tune accha nahi kiya sawere sawere yeh post daal kar....haaye ab yeh din kab dhalegi :)

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  4. Ankur AnandJuly 14, 2014 at 1:21 PM

    romantic rain :D .. wonderful poem !

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  5. PriyashiJuly 14, 2014 at 7:30 PM

    Ahaa ! So romantic.... Beautiful Poem Saru.....Lovely.... :)

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  6. tks316July 15, 2014 at 1:32 AM

    Although I'm not a big fan of rain songs because the roads get all clogged up and hence you aren't left with many spaces to embrace your beloved, which I don't have even otherwise. But this eclogue had a perfect rendition and made me enjoy the rains even without being in them. :)

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  7. AnonymousJuly 15, 2014 at 2:05 AM

    A lovely poem!

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  8. AkankshaJuly 15, 2014 at 7:09 AM

    Just when I think, I am over romance, you do this! :)

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  9. BikramJuly 15, 2014 at 9:41 AM

    very romanticccccccccccccc :) and that is a lovely song ..

    my favourite song hmmmmm

    yeh daulat bhi le lo
    shauharat bhi le lo ..

    ..............

    magar mujhko lauta do bachpan ka sawan .. wohs kagaz ki kishti woh barish ka paani

    Bikram's

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 16, 2014 at 11:20 AM

      It's a good song but not exactly a rain song. What do you think?

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  10. Ankita July 15, 2014 at 10:21 AM

    this poem is as romantic as this song!

    <3

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  11. Saurabh ChawlaJuly 15, 2014 at 2:30 PM

    Very romantic poem Saru :) I was singing this song only today in office since morning :D

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 19, 2014 at 12:37 PM

      That's a lovely coincidence. Wait, for whom you were singing this song to?

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  12. Shivani SinghJuly 15, 2014 at 11:03 PM

    Ur poem is as sizzling as the Bollywood song i must say. i guess prolly it's my age or else i would've said i like Saawan ke jhoolay paday as my fav or Rhimjhim ghire sawaan but these days when it rains the song that always comes to my mind is that one from the movie Junoon (1978) Ghir aayee kaali ghataa matwaali saawan kee aayee bahaar re saawan kee aayee bahhar re, bela chameli kee kaliyaan mehak gayee, bela chameli....heck i started off. It was sung by Preeti Saagar i suppose . Cheers to monsoon and by saying this i am beckoning it to come and start raining in Delhi...:)
    Btw the one that Bikram shared is also another one Woh kagaz kee kashti woh baarish ka paani....hahahaha i guess humari umara mein aisa hee hota hai shayad hahahaha :) :) :)

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 20, 2014 at 2:58 PM

      Hahaha... I guess we love songs that were popular in our teenage days. My favorite will look ancient to kids these days. Btw, I love rhimjim ghire sawan.

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  13. Rahul BhatiaJuly 15, 2014 at 11:47 PM

    That was really passionate Saru! I hope it keeps pouring:)

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 20, 2014 at 2:59 PM

      I hope so too. It's really hot here these days.

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  14. Red HandedJuly 16, 2014 at 12:53 AM

    Ah...you make it all sound so magical. I WANT!

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  15. CifarJuly 16, 2014 at 12:54 AM

    nice poem, my favorite rain song is Rimjhim-Rimjhim,Rumjhum-Rumjhum from 1942 A Love Story

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  16. ManiparnaJuly 16, 2014 at 1:04 AM

    Ohhh! such a magical rainy poem Saru ..wonderful..:-)

    I love so many rain songs...the naughty,sensuous ones ... :-P :-D tip tip barsa is also in my list... :-)

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 20, 2014 at 3:11 PM

      Great mind, think alike :P

      Glad you like the poem.

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  17. RajlakshmiJuly 16, 2014 at 1:53 AM

    awww how beautiful.. The rain definitely does that to me :) lovely imageries and so so romantic :D

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  18. UppalJuly 16, 2014 at 3:01 AM

    Rain is always sensuous and you gave such an evocative expression to that!

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 20, 2014 at 3:20 PM

      Look very interesting and thanks for considering me, Arpit. :)

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  20. RachnaJuly 16, 2014 at 5:33 AM

    Hot stuff there. My fav rain song is Rimjhim gire saawan sulag sulag jaaye mann!

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  21. संजय भास्‍कर July 16, 2014 at 8:44 AM

    ऎसी रचनाएँ रोमांचित कर जाती हैं... एक अलग प्रकार का रोमांच होता है.

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  22. jkalwayeJuly 16, 2014 at 9:33 AM

    Amazing poetic snaps of deep romance .jk

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  23. AnonymousJuly 16, 2014 at 9:46 AM

    Rain and romance go hand in hand and you captured beautifully

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  24. UnknownJuly 16, 2014 at 10:42 AM

    I am very much old fashion. I will go with singing in the rain.

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  25. Reema D'souzaJuly 16, 2014 at 10:32 PM

    Amazing poem! :) The rain brings with it so many emotions!

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  26. Tomichan MatheikalJuly 16, 2014 at 11:20 PM

    The song is a consolation since the actual rains are shunning us (in Delhi, at least).

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  27. Ashish KumarJuly 17, 2014 at 12:50 AM

    lovely, romantic, beautiful poem...
    this poem is a perfect example of "romanticism"...

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  28. Yogi SaraswatJuly 17, 2014 at 3:19 AM

    Lovely & wonderful words Saru ji

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  29. SeetaJuly 17, 2014 at 7:28 AM

    very nice!!! I would like some wine and a French Chateau too :)

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  30. Anmol RawatJuly 18, 2014 at 3:37 AM

    Ah! I love romantic ones :)
    Good one :)

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  31. Anita SabatJuly 18, 2014 at 6:54 AM

    I love so many Bollywood rain songs! Loooong list, Saru :)
    Nice poem!

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  32. Anil BalanJuly 18, 2014 at 10:41 AM

    Lovely Saru Jee

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  33. Uma AnandaneJuly 18, 2014 at 11:51 AM

    Beautiful and romantic poem ! Btw nice choice of rain song and mine is a Tamil song " Thenmerku paruvakatru" rain song...see it in YouTube and you will love it as well :)

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 21, 2014 at 12:18 PM

      I listened to the song and it was good. Couldn't understand the lyrics though.

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  34. http://joshidaniel.com/July 21, 2014 at 3:54 AM

    nice mood :)

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  35. Pooja AbhayJuly 22, 2014 at 2:08 PM

    I love rain songs..my favorite is "Saawan barse tarse dil". :') Beautiful Saru.

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 24, 2014 at 11:24 AM

      Couldn't get it. Have to Google. Thanks for reading, Pooja.

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    2. Saru SinghalJuly 24, 2014 at 11:25 AM

      Got it, it's so soulful. Love the lyrics.

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  36. UnknownJuly 22, 2014 at 5:43 PM

    very sweet romantic song!! The Mohra song is actually pretty sensual in comparison!

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  37. sathishJuly 26, 2014 at 3:06 AM

    you drenched us with romance...

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  38. Sri ValliJuly 28, 2014 at 10:41 AM

    I read this poem on your fb wall and reading here too! Very romantic one Saru!!

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  39. Amrit SinhaAugust 15, 2014 at 2:04 PM

    Now this is one of those poems that I wish I could have written, but then, only the versatile Saru Singhal could have woven words so beautifully :-)

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    1. Saru SinghalAugust 16, 2014 at 9:44 AM

      Thanks Amrit. Bowled by your generous compliment.

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  40. DeeshaniJuly 16, 2015 at 3:52 PM

    Such a magical and romantic poem. Loved it. :)

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