Mr Right, Mrs Always Right And Both Doing Alright

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He loves me like a princess
On most occasions I would say
But if one fine evening I ask him to hold hands
He blames me for public display

His body is all mine
All but his fine ears
They won't budge on my melodious voice
Seems like frozen from last five years

Curiosity killed the cat
And I was murdered for asking someone's name
His stare pierced through my heart 
When I asked him a question in the middle of his favorite game

He buys me finest of jewels
His love is all stacked up in my safe
But a $10 scarf on sale is enough
For an extempore on - We should save!

It doesn't end with sports, money and food
Even my opinion is absurd
Mrs Roy was not being sarcastic
I shouldn't form my views on what I saw or heard

Please, don't blame him guys
He himself is a prisoner for life
Nearly misunderstood by a treacherous soul
His nasty-nasty wife

Between the two of us
We are doing almost alright
He is my Mr Right
And I am his Mrs Always Right

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Comments

  1. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2014 at 12:38 PM

    Poor considerate lady.Poem is very nice as always:)

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  2. Ankur AnandSeptember 1, 2014 at 12:53 PM

    thats the problem sometime when .. there is difference in thoughts process !
    nice poem as always :)

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2014 at 12:57 PM

    Ha ha - brilliant!

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  4. AathiraSeptember 1, 2014 at 2:55 PM

    Awww! That's a cute one :)

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  5. Rahul BhatiaSeptember 2, 2014 at 12:16 AM

    Very sweet poem! Hope Mr and Mrs Always Right, have lovely times together:)

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  6. Deaf MammaSeptember 2, 2014 at 3:52 AM

    Saru, i could relate to each line on shopping and otherwise. And loved the cute cups.

    http://sinhasat302.blogspot.in/

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 3, 2014 at 11:33 AM

      Thank you and the picture is really cute. I am thinking of gifting it to my husband on our anniversary.

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  7. Anunoy SamantaSeptember 2, 2014 at 4:26 AM

    " But a $10 scarf on sale is enough
    For an extempore on - We should save!"- Ye this one has highest frequency in our alright lives :-P
    Cheers Saru!

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  8. Afshan ShaikSeptember 2, 2014 at 6:09 AM

    Interesting . Is it every household's story ? I know we sure Dnt belong to same planet. We MEN And Women

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  9. Kokila guptaSeptember 2, 2014 at 1:31 PM

    Brilliant Saru ! its a full deal ... for every couple.
    but we all love those lines most ,with which we can relate to eggjaktly ... like in my case his fine ears.... frozen from 5 err.. 9 years :O And of course Mrs. Always right :)

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  10. RamakrishnanSeptember 3, 2014 at 5:34 AM

    Hilarious ! You compose with with nonchalant ease !

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  11. Red HandedSeptember 3, 2014 at 7:43 AM

    heheheheh..I am going to send this to a special someone.huihuihuihuiiiii

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  12. BikramSeptember 3, 2014 at 8:39 AM

    :) now that is romantic he he he Mrs Always right hmmmmmmmmm

    Bikram's

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  13. RekhaSeptember 3, 2014 at 12:49 PM

    Too good...sharing it with my Mr. Right. ;-)

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  14. A Homemaker's UtopiaSeptember 3, 2014 at 12:57 PM

    Just brilliant Saru..Loved each and every bit of it..:)

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  15. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2014 at 3:16 PM

    Lovely....men will be men and of course women will be women

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2014 at 3:21 PM

    Lovely and cute :) Brilliant again.

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  17. UnknownSeptember 3, 2014 at 7:02 PM

    I laughed out loud, I liked how Mr.Ramakrishnan has put it...It's hard to pick which one will be my fav stanza :) Although I will say I enjoyed the 2nd stanza very much. But beware, this is the perfect recipe that you can find in every successful marriage... There is this Mr.Right and Mrs.Always Right .... :) superbly written and a joy to read.

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 10, 2014 at 12:35 PM

      Most wives have faced the truth in second para. Thank you so much for reading and I look forward to read your comments.

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  18. M S MahawarSeptember 3, 2014 at 11:15 PM

    Lovely Poem :)

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  19. Vinay NagarajuSeptember 4, 2014 at 12:03 AM

    Ha ha ha, the last two lines say it all :D :) .. Nice one Saru :)

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  20. Yogi SaraswatSeptember 4, 2014 at 1:04 AM

    He himself is a prisoner for life
    the real words to understand partner . nice poem Saru

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  21. HemantSeptember 4, 2014 at 1:50 AM

    Perfectly narrated.....and thumbs up for the last line ;)

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  22. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2014 at 3:08 AM

    Wonderful poem !!! I can totally relate to it :-D .... Mrs always right

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  23. Datta GhoshSeptember 4, 2014 at 3:10 AM

    You captured the married life aptly, beautiful words...loved it a lot

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  24. Anita SabatSeptember 4, 2014 at 3:12 AM

    So what did, Mr.Right say after reading this, Saru?
    Alright, right? :)

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  25. PriyashiSeptember 4, 2014 at 4:04 AM

    Oh Lovely poem Saru.... enjoyed it...:)

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  26. thethinkinhatSeptember 4, 2014 at 9:09 AM

    Short and sweet. But firmly states the nuances of a married life! Loved reading it!

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  27. Writefully YoursSeptember 4, 2014 at 9:19 AM

    Let's try this again, may this time I will succeed in commenting!

    I found this really funny, even if that wasn't the intention. One of those times that give unmarried people like me, immense happiness! :D

    It was beautifully worded, as always, and the rhyme was great too. It was a very light composition so it went like a breeze.

    You should try recording it on Sound Cloud.

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 10, 2014 at 4:42 PM

      When you will get married, I will ask you then. I will try to record and upload on sound cloud.
      Thanks for reading.

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  28. Murthy K v v sSeptember 4, 2014 at 11:54 AM

    Well...something to understand..!

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  29. Someone is SpecialSeptember 4, 2014 at 12:53 PM

    Lovely Mrs Always Right!

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  30. Anmol RawatSeptember 4, 2014 at 3:31 PM

    Can we have a sequel to this telling us exactly what Anita said ;)

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    1. Anmol RawatSeptember 4, 2014 at 3:32 PM

      I mean 'asked' not said :p

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    2. Saru SinghalSeptember 10, 2014 at 4:49 PM

      It will be an empty post. He said nothing, apart from I am right, as always :)

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  31. www.lifepartneracademy.comSeptember 4, 2014 at 4:28 PM

    Very beautifully composed poem Saru. There's the spark of mismatch that matches the couples.

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  32. UnknownSeptember 4, 2014 at 10:44 PM

    Good one. Great quote.

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  33. Alka GurhaSeptember 5, 2014 at 11:10 AM

    Of course you are the boss
    My heart goes out to Mr. Right
    Unable to express his side of the story
    He gives up without a fight
    Because his missus is Mrs Always Right.


    I tried. Pathetic, isn't it.

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 10, 2014 at 4:58 PM

      It's wonderful and I bet, Alok will love it.

      Thanks Alka!

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  34. Nima DasSeptember 5, 2014 at 12:08 PM

    This is so cute.

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  35. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2014 at 1:47 AM

    Nice tongue in cheek poem Saru :)

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  36. Jyoti MishraSeptember 6, 2014 at 7:32 AM

    loved the much intended pun in those line :P

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 12, 2014 at 9:32 AM

      Hehehee... Your comment will change post marriage :P

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  37. Pooja AbhaySeptember 7, 2014 at 1:09 AM

    This poem could be very well an anthem for the husband species. :P

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  38. Jyotsna BhatiaSeptember 7, 2014 at 9:32 AM

    Brilliant :)

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  39. Beloo MehraSeptember 7, 2014 at 12:27 PM

    Such truth and wisdom, Saru :) Fantastic.

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  40. Manjulika PramodSeptember 11, 2014 at 12:38 AM

    Mrs. Always Right, the cup is a must in all houses...
    cute poem which says quite much between the lines..

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  41. silentdrashtiSeptember 11, 2014 at 3:55 PM

    Loved it..especially the line " all but his fine ears" lol

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  42. The ScribblerSeptember 12, 2014 at 3:32 AM

    Ha ha.. it reflects many of MINE... :D...and i have experienced this "He buys me finest of jewels.....We should save!" many times.. that too not for scarf but for fruit JUICE...+Saru

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    1. Saru SinghalSeptember 12, 2014 at 10:14 AM

      Yeah, on anything which he finds not worthy that particular moment. Life, sorry, married life, sigh!

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  43. Sampat kumariSeptember 13, 2014 at 4:01 AM

    An excellent poem and thanks for voting my post on indiblogger

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  44. MoonJuly 17, 2015 at 12:01 PM

    You create magic with words and the impact lingers for sometime even after I finish reading your post. Loved the poem. :)

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 23, 2015 at 10:14 AM

      That's very generous of you, Moon. Thank you :)

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  45. Makeup DiscourseAugust 25, 2015 at 10:16 PM

    'His' predicament nicely weaved! The rosy prosy start took me by romance, until you left those little narcissistic hints with self declaration. ;-)

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  46. Tina AcharyaSeptember 3, 2015 at 2:20 AM

    Ha ha ha...very sweet and lovely!!!!

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