Wandering Souls

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  1. Rahul BhatiaOctober 22, 2014 at 12:32 AM

    Beautiful flow of emotions, Saru! Wishing you and Alok a happy Diwali:)

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  2. joshi danielOctober 22, 2014 at 2:54 AM

    so strong and happy deepavali :)

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  3. Ankita October 22, 2014 at 3:13 AM

    Intense emotions are depicted in such a lovely way!

    <3

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  4. Brajmohan KumarOctober 22, 2014 at 5:09 AM

    beautiful one Saru!

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  5. Ranjana's craft blogOctober 22, 2014 at 11:31 AM

    I don't feel empty...so meaningful Saru. As usual Saru's intense words touch the heart

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  6. UnknownOctober 23, 2014 at 8:09 PM

    So sweet and gentle. I flowing wave.

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  7. AnonymousOctober 25, 2014 at 4:52 AM

    Incomparable, fantastic poem. A unique piece of writing.

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  8. Jyotsna BhatiaOctober 25, 2014 at 1:13 PM

    Wow. Just wow :)

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  9. Palak DuaOctober 25, 2014 at 1:15 PM

    This post was just so intense and deep.
    Terrific piece of work.

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  10. VINISHAOctober 27, 2014 at 12:05 AM

    WOW! SO INTENSE AND ROMANTIC :)

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  11. Red HandedOctober 27, 2014 at 1:14 AM

    Honey, the first two lines itself put me on a spell.
    How beautiful this was!

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  12. UnknownOctober 28, 2014 at 1:02 AM

    Wow Saru....... Amazing flow of words!!

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  13. Fascinating QuestOctober 28, 2014 at 1:53 AM

    Such passion... Beautifully expressed.

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  14. ArtiOctober 28, 2014 at 2:14 AM

    Beautiful words; and, together with the lovely presentation, creates a power packed impact.

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  15. AnonymousOctober 28, 2014 at 3:26 AM

    Lovely!

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  16. Nima DasOctober 28, 2014 at 3:32 AM

    That connection with souls!Lovely lines.

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  17. Yogi SaraswatOctober 28, 2014 at 5:26 AM

    Intense emotions are depicted in such beautiful words

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  18. Murthy K v v sOctober 28, 2014 at 5:42 AM

    Very much magic is there in your thoughts..!

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  19. Gowthama RajaveluOctober 28, 2014 at 6:01 AM

    Beautiful selection of words saru. Enjoyed reading it!

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  20. VeenaOctober 28, 2014 at 6:13 AM

    Just the right balance of words and emotions...Excellent lines

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  21. AnonymousOctober 28, 2014 at 6:27 AM

    Awsome......

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  22. Life StalkerOctober 28, 2014 at 8:54 AM

    simply beautiful :)

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  23. tks316October 28, 2014 at 9:40 AM

    Your words always blend into the tale and that too seamlessly. brilliant. :)

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  24. Deepak KripalOctober 29, 2014 at 12:22 AM

    that was intensely and deeply romantic Saru.. Loved the analogy to puff of cigarettes, and the line where you talk about the touch (where never been touched).. And like the new presentation (in image form), it prevents stealing.. I might just steal this method though :)

    this was romance at its 'deepest'.. thumbs up :)

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  25. AnonymousOctober 29, 2014 at 12:48 AM

    Just wow..... Toooooo good..

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  26. Neeraj KumarOctober 29, 2014 at 1:40 AM

    lovely, wonderful, stupendous!

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  27. Jyoti MishraOctober 30, 2014 at 11:42 AM

    Flow of the emotions.. Ahh :)

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  28. UnknownOctober 30, 2014 at 3:12 PM

    Saru yaar .... kahan se paida karti hai aisa emotions.... But this one still remains my top most fav:
    http://www.sarusinghal.com/2012/02/blog-post.html

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  29. Rigzin NamgyalNovember 1, 2014 at 9:15 PM

    ..sometimes words they flow like a river gently meandering down its way..enjoyed this dance of words laced with emotions and sweetness..keep it up Saru.. :)

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  30. Writefully YoursNovember 2, 2014 at 9:31 AM

    It's a beautiful expression. I derive freedom from it but it's open ended. What does "never reaching its shores" entail, though?

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  31. Amrit SinhaNovember 2, 2014 at 10:33 AM

    This is brilliant ... the stanzas are beautiful ... but the last two lines are just way out of the world ... AWESOME !!!

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  32. kikiNovember 10, 2014 at 7:09 AM

    Strong emotions expressed beautifully

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  33. UnknownNovember 10, 2014 at 7:17 AM

    Beautiful flow of emotions ...

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  34. AseemNovember 24, 2014 at 2:05 PM

    Truly intense and the emotions are expressed beautifully :).

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  35. Saru SinghalNovember 25, 2014 at 2:24 PM

    @Prateek - She is little wondrous and vagabond in nature, never does what normally happens. She tries to comply but never reaches that point.

    @Everyone - Thank you so much for reading and for your lovely comments.

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