Read Between The Lines

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  1. Deaf MammaNovember 18, 2014 at 12:48 AM

    Waah Saru, your hubby must be proud ! Hey, I missed you at my blog. Do find time to visit The Sinhas at 302 :)

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    1. Saru SinghalNovember 25, 2014 at 8:57 PM

      Welcome back! I will ask my husband whether he is proud of you or not...

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  2. AnonymousNovember 18, 2014 at 6:04 AM

    A sweet read!

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  3. Rahul BhatiaNovember 18, 2014 at 11:44 AM

    A lovely weave and re read a few times so as not to miss the commas and sugar coated words, Saru:)

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  4. Palak DuaNovember 18, 2014 at 11:18 PM

    Such a lovely and adorable post :-)

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  5. Ankita November 18, 2014 at 11:41 PM

    what a unique way of using words! loved it :)

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  6. HemantNovember 19, 2014 at 4:54 AM

    One of the amazing I had read in last few months....cheers to you Saru!!

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  7. joshi danielNovember 19, 2014 at 2:52 PM

    wow that is great :)

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  8. M S MahawarNovember 19, 2014 at 9:53 PM

    Lovely!

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  9. Tomichan MatheikalNovember 19, 2014 at 11:28 PM

    Intriguing and charming at the same time.

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  10. Yogi SaraswatNovember 20, 2014 at 12:48 AM

    Such a lovely and adorable post with emotions

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  11. CifarNovember 20, 2014 at 1:19 AM

    lovely and romantic,

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  12. UnknownNovember 20, 2014 at 2:01 AM

    Sugar coated yet perfect sweetness, neither too much nor too less. A really simple yet stunning read.

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  13. UnknownNovember 20, 2014 at 3:58 AM

    Wow...it's so romantic... Luv Rita

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  14. Saurabh ChawlaNovember 20, 2014 at 6:48 AM

    Romantic one Saru :) I liked the beginning very much. :)

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  15. D.NambiarNovember 20, 2014 at 6:49 AM

    Sad and sweet at the same time.
    Nice work, Saru.

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  16. PriyashiNovember 20, 2014 at 7:12 AM

    Wow Saru, one more masterpiece..... Loved it....:)

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  17. AnonymousNovember 20, 2014 at 10:46 AM

    Nice work!

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  18. ManiparnaNovember 20, 2014 at 11:35 AM

    Great one again Saru...love it... (y)

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  19. UnknownNovember 20, 2014 at 11:38 PM

    How great. What a powerful way to share a hero.

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  20. Writefully YoursNovember 24, 2014 at 12:42 PM

    This is beautifully written. Very light and breezy. It's kind of like renewing wedding vows :)

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    1. Saru SinghalNovember 25, 2014 at 10:34 PM

      Is it? It's light and easy, I agree. I wrote in less than 2 minutes. I made my own poem into maggi noodles :P

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  21. AseemNovember 24, 2014 at 1:46 PM

    A lovely read Saru. Simple yet powerful :).

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  22. iluvfictionNovember 25, 2014 at 5:37 AM

    Lovely poem, simple and really emotional in between lines.

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  23. Saru SinghalNovember 25, 2014 at 10:16 PM

    :)

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  24. Kokila guptaNovember 27, 2014 at 12:34 AM

    Beautiful, pleading and demanding at the same time !

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  25. Amrit SinhaNovember 30, 2014 at 5:56 AM

    Your poems have that magic feel good factor ... I loved this :-)

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