Inglorious Lovers
Draw a line, will ya?
I'll never cross, you never step outside of it.
Like those caged souls,
Just trying to fit in.
You continue to love me still,
I will die with your name in my heart.
Be in a cage all our lives,
Sphering why people kept us apart?
Or break-free, shall we?
Run away from this world to create ours.
You, me and twenty two doves,
Dancing in maiden showers.
People gotta say what they say,
Let's entertain them with a scandal.
Wet kisses, passionate hugs, no regret,
Too much heat for them to handle.
You be my Darcy,
Let me entice you like Marilyn Monroe.
Morning burns into evening,
Night burns into dawn ever so slow.
Inglorious, scandalous, infamous,
People will call us names.
Let's plot some carnal sins together,
Let passion run in our veins.
What will I love the most, you know?
By the end of this roller coaster ride.
We will have our own Mills & Boon story,
In which lovers never left each other’s side.
Let's entertain them with a scandal// that's right :D
ReplyDeleteloved the passion running in your verses
Hehehe... I love those who do what they want without caring about the world.
DeleteThanks for reading, Raj. :)
Sounds like a mills and boon story indeed;) Love the romance running all along the verses and specially beeline you be my Darcy. Waiting for my Mr. Darcy :p
ReplyDeleteMay you meet him soon, Sarah. :)
DeleteI read it last night and the lines were haunting me :)
ReplyDeleteOh, I hope in a good way. :)
Delete#FeelingRestlessThough
Very passionate:)
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading, Sir. :)
DeleteNice verses Saru.How you make them contemplate on eating the forbidden apple!
ReplyDeleteHehehe... The forbidden fruit is quite interesting, you see. :P
DeleteWho drws which line?
ReplyDeleteTo each his own. Only thing - don't make decisions to please people.
DeleteEach love story is special. Let others scandalize. Loved the message conveyed Saru... :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteNice Poetry.. Saru :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteSaru thats a fun poem. I like the idea of scandalizing others. Only thing, i think Darcy was not a big displayer of passion. Do you agree?
ReplyDeleteNothing to do with passion. Darcy is one of the most desired men from literature.
Deleteyou, me and twenty two doves - wow.. would love to know the significance of twenty two doves :)
ReplyDeleteRepresents their age, Roohi.
DeleteMorning burns into evening,
ReplyDeleteNight burns into dawn ever so slow.
Inglorious, scandalous, infamous,
People will call us names.
Let's plot some carnal sins together,
very passionate indeed
Thanks for reading, Yogi.
DeleteNever read M&Bs...but this tremendous poem reminds me of something inexplicable...Simply loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Sir.
DeleteLoved each & every line Saru!!
ReplyDeleteI am so amused by the way you craft such pieces...any tips to share :P
Just write what you feel and thanks for reading Hemant.
DeleteLovely lines....in the best of relations people are just themselves...doing whatever they want....being happy together...bliss....glorious lovers
ReplyDeleteWell said, Subhrashis. :)
DeleteNicely written!
ReplyDeleteLovely poetry........
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Hi Saru,
ReplyDeleteThat was filled with passion and romance to the core. So, it looks like you adore Monroe quite a lot. I had a poster of Monroe in my graduation hostel room handed down to me by my senior. Loved this piece.
Regards
Jay
My Blog
I can imagine a hostel room with her poster. Thanks for reading Jay and welcome back. :)
DeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
Deleteromantic...the pic is so M&B types..i read a few of those during college..
ReplyDeleteI haven't read any. I started one but could read only 3-4 pages. No my type. Thanks for reading my poem dear. :)
DeleteBeautiful poem
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletethis is a nice one :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome one Saru :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThat's a passionate love story intricately woven into a lovely poem :).
ReplyDeleteThank you Aseem.
DeleteVery well written Saru!
ReplyDeleteFlirts with SIN,,,,Blissful and beautiful...
ReplyDeleteHahaha... Thank you!
DeleteLove feels so young, bold n naughty... Brilliant work saruji!
ReplyDeleteLove is all that. Thanks for reading. :)
DeleteWell written poem Saru.Loved the way you have woven.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Sriram & Krithiga