Once upon a time...
Once upon a time, not so far away.
There was a little girl, who always wanted to play.
She knew nothing of this world so rough.
Chased butterflies, she had too much love.
If there was ever a problem, she ran to her mother.
Who would solve everything magically one after another.
There were a thousand things both mother-daughter did.
Played carom, snakes-n-ladders and took many trips.
As the girl grew, she made notes of all things nice.
Little treasures of her wonderland - her mother's love and sacrifice.
They had the most fun anyone could ever seek,
They had the most fun anyone could ever seek,
Her mother made new-new games week after week.
If it was 'Name Your Favorite Jungle Friends' one day,
'Spelling Competition' dominated another.
Happily playing, laughing and learning,
Girl had beautiful memories with her mother.
There was one game though, little girl most dread.
She kept counting on her fingers and in her head.
She would make excuses of the length of a fable.
Whenever mom called her to play 'Jumbled Tables.’
What to say, what to do and when.
She asked an innocent question when she was ten.
It became a running joke till a bigger story came.
That her mother ran store to store to buy hair ribbon of Aashiqui fame.
Too much hoopla over threads weaved on silk net.
There were however, few days in grey hue,
Girl couldn't get right from wrong, she had no clue.
She lived in another town, miles away from home.
Reluctantly one day she called her mother on phone.
I am too scared to do this - she said.
Mother replied - count on the goodness that lays ahead.
Every day since, her mother called her day and night.
To be there for her daughter and be her guiding light.
Troubled times went like skilled sailor sailed.
Since then.. that little girl was no more a baby.
Her mother groomed her into a fine lady.
There came a time when distance grew into oceans.
No words could fit in to express their vivid emotions.
Both keep daily chit-chats and memories by their side.
Daughter misses her mother and she is her mother's pride.
If you believe in fairytales, a place where love grows on trees.
All mothers are angels and this little girl is me.
My mother is my friend, my strength and #MyFirstExpert. And here's a memory from our daily chit-chat -
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A lovely tribute to mother!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kiran!
DeleteThe last snippet about visa had me smiling :) Very nice poem ...moms are amazing aren't they
ReplyDeleteThey are...
DeleteThanks for reading Jaishree. :)
A sweet ode to mother in verse.
ReplyDeletePrecious memories expressed with deep and pure emotions!
ReplyDeleteLittle treasures of life, ma'am. :)
Deletewonderful ...such a lovely poem...it captures the bonding so nicely...loved it
ReplyDeleteThank you and welcome here :)
DeleteI know you are winning this Saru, I so know, I lived every moment with that poem....it touched me really, coz I know how my mom had bought me a red net Ashiqui ribbon...oh my....you got me to tears...yes she has made you into a beautiful lady Saru...hugs babe!!
ReplyDeleteYou too, I was crazy about that ribbon. I had it in white. Good old days, Shweta. With every passing day I realize how much our mothers sacrificed for us.
DeleteThanks for a priceless comment, hugs <3
Agree with Shweta, a winner for sure, Saru:) Best of luck for the contest!
DeleteThank you, Sir. :)
DeleteWhat a wonderful write-up!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteAap to lafzon kee jadugar hain.
ReplyDeleteShukriya, shukriya :)
DeleteHey its my story too. I got goosebumps while reading this...Heartwarming indeed :')
ReplyDeleteHugs Maitreni! :)
DeleteSuch a detail in rhyme scheme. Hats off to you. Thoroughly enjoyed the bonding of mother & daughter.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Ravish and for a lovely comment. :)
Deleteloved it...fresh with emotions that make you smile......a delighting read Saru....:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sunaina.
DeleteAwww - what a lovely tribute to your mum!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteMothers love is unconditional.
ReplyDeleteTrue that!
DeleteThose were lovely words. Mom's are true angels.
ReplyDeleteThey are, thanks for reading.
DeleteA beautiful ode to your mom... loved it.... :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maniparna. :)
DeleteI very sweet post for mothers. :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem and yes, mothers are not just friends but they are the world for their kids.
ReplyDeleteVery true. Thanks for reading, Sir.
DeleteWonderful tribute yo your Mom!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rekha.
DeleteThis is such a lovely post! <3 Your love shows!
ReplyDeleteThanks dear! <3
Deletea sweet write-up :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Joshi.
Deletewonderful
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteWhat a lovely way to capture the sweet relationship so beautifully in a poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Somali!
DeleteThat was a lovely tribute to your mom :). The last graphic was the best :D.
ReplyDeleteHehehehe... thank you!
DeleteBeautifully written my dear <3
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteBeautifully crafted nice piece of literature. More alluring was the use of images well I ant to know how you made those ;)
ReplyDeleteHahaha... Thank you Apoorv! :)
DeleteBeautiful! Kudos
ReplyDeleteExcellent. Beautifully written mam.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Deletewow, so beautifully you have expressed everything :)
ReplyDeleteexcellent !
Thanks Deepti.
DeleteSaru, u weave magic with your words...its so sad once v get married n move awasy, moms r left behind praying for us n guiding us in every possible manner.
ReplyDeleteTrue that, they think and pray for us all the time.
DeleteTouching.... Wish u get to be with her more often. My regards to your mother.
ReplyDeleteI will pass it to her. Thanks Neo! :)
Deletelovely post :)
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DeleteIt is an amazing post Saru , this is story of every girl's life :)
ReplyDeleteTrue that and thanks for reading. :)
DeleteOh, God! So touching and emotional! Dil bhar aaya! Too nice, Saru!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteSo lovely Saru ! Beautifully expressed.
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