#TheEnd

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  1. SriviMarch 28, 2016 at 12:59 PM

    What an ending! Wonderful!

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  2. RekhaMarch 28, 2016 at 1:05 PM

    Brilliant Saru! So many people will relate to this. So many situations. Love the way you speak so much in so few words.

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  3. ShaiviMarch 28, 2016 at 1:08 PM

    Wow Saru! Your words bring out the beauty in simple situations of life. Loved the connection between hope and battery.

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  4. SangeetaMarch 28, 2016 at 5:01 PM

    Brilliant Saru

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  5. AnonymousMarch 29, 2016 at 12:46 AM

    Awesome Saru !

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  6. Devilish AngelMarch 29, 2016 at 2:37 AM

    Lovely...

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  7. Rahul BhatiaMarch 29, 2016 at 7:14 AM

    This reminds me of the Hindi saying, 'Gagar mein Sagar', Saru:)

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  8. joshi danielMarch 29, 2016 at 10:12 AM

    great :)

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  9. Vishal BheerooMarch 30, 2016 at 4:11 AM

    What a powerful analogy, Saru:)

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  10. Saurabh ChawlaMarch 30, 2016 at 4:54 AM

    True!

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  11. Chaitali BhattacharjeeMarch 30, 2016 at 11:22 AM

    Wow...intense.

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  12. UnknownMarch 30, 2016 at 12:09 PM

    Awesome !!

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  13. UnknownMarch 30, 2016 at 1:53 PM

    So intense and poignant! Loved it! :')

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  14. UnknownMarch 30, 2016 at 5:23 PM

    loved it and added my addon on FB :)

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  15. Jyotirmoy SarkarMarch 30, 2016 at 9:30 PM

    very intensive, awesome.

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  16. Tomichan MatheikalMarch 30, 2016 at 11:21 PM

    Highly suggestive.

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  17. Beloo MehraMarch 31, 2016 at 2:36 AM

    Intense. Invites the reader in. Very nicely done, Saru!

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  18. Yogi SaraswatMarch 31, 2016 at 2:59 AM

    Haha ! Lovely Words !!

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  19. Amit AgarwalMarch 31, 2016 at 3:15 AM

    Amazing! Brilliant! Stupendous!
    You are giving a tough time to haiku writers with your hashtag series, Saru:)
    This is what I call creative genius! Kudos!!

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  20. BushraMarch 31, 2016 at 3:48 AM

    Ghosh. So deep and amazing. I nearly cried. :/

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  21. D.NambiarMarch 31, 2016 at 4:25 AM

    uh-oh
    My heart just went out to your protagonist.

    That's so much said in such few words. Brilliant work, once again, Saru.

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  22. Subhodeep MukhopadhyayMarch 31, 2016 at 10:33 AM

    Very intense.

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  23. Shrinidhi HandeMarch 31, 2016 at 11:22 AM

    Very meaningful

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  24. ManiparnaMarch 31, 2016 at 1:57 PM

    So many things said in so few words...:-)

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  25. Jyothi D'melloMarch 31, 2016 at 3:50 PM

    Oh no... not yet. It's just been day. Sadly that's the truth of our technology driven, fast paced life. Loved this one x

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  26. PuspanjaleeApril 1, 2016 at 1:29 AM

    My..my! The lines gave me goosebumps.. This is the first time I stumbled upon your blog and now I know what I missed till now. Excellannt storry telling!

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  27. CifarApril 1, 2016 at 7:19 AM

    another powerful Hashtag story, loved it

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  28. KalpanaApril 1, 2016 at 11:19 PM

    Awwww - well put. I enjoyed that :)

    www.kalpanaawrites.com

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  29. K.A. AcharyaApril 3, 2016 at 7:21 PM

    Sad. I love the way you write intense stories in precise words.

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  30. Bushra MuzaffarApril 3, 2016 at 9:57 PM

    I find your hashtag stories very impactful, Saru. The concluding lines stays with the reader.

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  31. Saurabh ChawlaApril 4, 2016 at 6:23 AM

    Sad but true! Great one Saru!

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  32. Saru SinghalApril 25, 2016 at 12:36 AM

    @Everyone - Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

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