Those little wrongs make everything right

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How many times I fight with you?
O' with years I lost track
From the first fight in college
I caught you taking a drag
Then over your pesky habits
Like, leaving wet towel on the sheet
Talking loud on the phone
Or messing coffee table decor with your feet
It irks me, I get angry too
You never learn the proper way
Don't drive fast in the alley
Or wear too much grey
I can go on and on
The list will run a mile long
Nitpicks-nagging-nonsense
For all the things that you do wrong
My frail body gets tired
Weekends drain the last bit out of me
I long for a carefree day
When I can be truly free
But when you go away for days
I awfully miss our senseless fights
No matter how much I crib
Those little wrongs you do make everything right

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Comments

  1. Harsh Wardhan JogJune 14, 2016 at 12:34 AM

    हाहाहा बहुत सुंदर !

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  2. Devilish AngelJune 14, 2016 at 2:57 AM

    Good one...

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  3. VinithaJune 15, 2016 at 7:27 AM

    It's called love! :)

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  4. Stuti DhyaniJune 16, 2016 at 12:57 AM

    Awwww! so sweet :-)

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  5. AseemJuly 1, 2016 at 6:16 PM

    Those fights followed by the love to make up for those fights! Now that's life isn't it? :D

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    1. Saru SinghalJuly 6, 2016 at 12:06 PM

      It is, for sure. What's life without a little spice!

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  6. Durga Prasad DashJuly 2, 2016 at 5:55 AM

    Nice one. Loved reading

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  7. Purba chakrabortyJuly 6, 2016 at 12:22 PM

    Oh...loved the way you concluded the poem. Those last lines were amazing. Beautiful poem :)

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  8. divsiJuly 18, 2016 at 9:37 AM

    Those little things that sum up a beautiful beautiful journey. Those little things that make up life:) Beautifully expressed Saru!

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  9. Pranju chakrapaniJuly 18, 2016 at 10:23 AM

    I was smiling half the way cause somehow I had the sense that you are going to end the poem with a love for such habits, although irritating :)

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  10. sathishJuly 18, 2016 at 1:05 PM

    "Those little wrongs you do make everything right" Loved this line. Most of them don't get this.

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  11. Ajay PaiJuly 18, 2016 at 2:26 PM

    But when you go away for days
    I awfully miss our senseless fights
    No matter how much I crib
    Those little wrongs you do make everything right " the pain in these lines are felt..

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  12. shraddha singhJuly 18, 2016 at 3:48 PM

    All in one word......CUTE !!

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  13. ManiparnaJuly 18, 2016 at 3:49 PM

    The last line says it all...that's life... :-) Beautifully penned as always, Saru... :-)

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  14. Jyotirmoy SarkarJuly 18, 2016 at 9:14 PM

    Loved reading it, very nice.

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  15. My EraJuly 18, 2016 at 10:54 PM

    Ah! The sweet sour joys of a relationship. Loved the way you built up as if she was about to break down but is tied in strings of love that are bound to last long :)

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  16. Bushra MuzaffarJuly 19, 2016 at 1:46 AM

    Sweet...and so relatable.

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  17. AmiJuly 19, 2016 at 1:47 AM

    So beautiful. Echoes life for most of us. Loved this piece for its simplicity and honesty.

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  18. D.NambiarJuly 19, 2016 at 3:06 AM

    That's sweet.
    We can relate to this one, Saru.

    Have a great week. :)

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  19. Yogi SaraswatJuly 19, 2016 at 4:34 AM

    But when you go away for days
    I awfully miss our senseless fights
    No matter how much I crib
    Those little wrongs you do make everything right. It all makes Happy Family.

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  20. ekullumanaliJuly 19, 2016 at 9:45 AM

    Yes, after sometime we are use to of habits and understandings.

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  21. Roohi BhatnagarJuly 19, 2016 at 10:31 AM

    So romantic.. this is like me in love :)

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  22. UnknownJuly 19, 2016 at 1:53 PM

    Very nice!

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  23. RachnaJuly 19, 2016 at 11:07 PM

    Perfectly put! So, so true.

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  24. UnknownJuly 20, 2016 at 2:46 AM

    Awesome Saru!'Those little wrongs make everything right'.Beautifully put!

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  25. indu chhibberJuly 20, 2016 at 7:53 AM

    So,all is well that ends well.

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  26. K.A. AcharyaJuly 20, 2016 at 6:06 PM

    Oh yes, they do. We miss the little irritating things when someone we love is far away. Well-penned Saru.

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  27. VaisakhiJuly 21, 2016 at 3:46 AM

    But when you go away for days
    I awfully miss our senseless fights
    No matter how much I crib
    Those little wrongs you do make everything right

    - That is love and marriage! Loved the poem Saru di!

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  28. upasnaJuly 21, 2016 at 6:52 AM

    WOW Saru, The essence of a relationship lies in these. Beautifully crafted.

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  29. UppalJuly 23, 2016 at 10:22 AM

    Sweet poem!

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  30. Nandhini ChandrasekaranJuly 23, 2016 at 9:50 PM

    Simple and profound Saru!

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  31. Saru SinghalAugust 2, 2016 at 2:57 PM

    @Everyone - Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

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