Rewind - September 2023
I wrote the following in September. Sometimes, I feel I will forget the art of writing couplets because I am not writing at all this year. I strongly believe you have to practice to hone your craft. And I am not doing that. Perhaps I schedule a time to write a poem. Or I need better time management skills. Date Published 09/05/2023 मुझे उसके जाने का इतना अफ़सोस नहीं हुआ जितना इस बात का कि इतने सालों तक उसे रहने ही क्यों दिया Love, Saru
Maine aaj hi dhyaan diya, bahut accha aur sahi likhti ho bhie 👍👍
ReplyDeleteBurst and firecracker. Good play of words as usual, specially when the two words are assigned to different individuals but yet represent the strong bond.
ReplyDeleteTrue...And, beautiful!:)
ReplyDeleteYou're an amazing storyteller, Saru. Always come up with such wonderful short stories.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Loved how you connected the vibrance of the festival to the a father's pride in his child.
ReplyDeleteYou touch my heart with every story you spin with so few words. Amazing Saru..you truly are :)
ReplyDeleteA heart-warming little tale!
ReplyDeleteHeart touching lines
ReplyDeleteSuperb thought.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
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